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Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Hey juliet..
Hp u r well..
Updt dis one plz..

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Hey Dear,

When are you going to update this TS? please do it soon, am anxious to read what happens next with Asad & how his chant changes to "I love Zoya."

Please continue soon..

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amruta04

@amruta04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

when r u updating ?

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Heartbeats..

@Heartbeats..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

hey update soon!

waiting badly 😭

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Juliet I don't know where should I start from

This is really adorable ad cute ,,

read both parts in one go and I want 3rd one now ,,

I love it sooo mucchh ! 😳❤️

Their whole journey is soo beautifully written ,,

its wow !

In Asad's words 'I don't like this FF at all' 😆

u know wat that means right ??

now plzz update sooon !

I am eagerly waiting to read more and more of it 😉

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krati

@krati5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

🤣 so so hilarious... & gave a new meaning to visit tibet

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Oh wow...

I have finally read the second part...

Juliet you never fail to surprise me...This was, is and always will be a superb piece of writing👏

I always admire the way you use your words and incorporate your awesome and delicious sense of humour👍🏼

There are so many things that I liked here but to be honest I am not going to elaborate because I will end up writing an entire essay on this😆

You write very well for a woman considering this is a view point from a man who happens to be very complicated...Well you certainly proved the theory right that woman are the better story tellers than men😉

I loved that you used that line "I dont like her" continuosly but then made him do something that showed the total opposite...

Their very first kiss...Wow, That was a very creative way you crafted for him to steal that kiss...Certainly another delicious moment from you...

Tannu made an appearance...And then made a dissappearance😆 Thanks to Zoya...I loved that moment you described asad's reaction and the scene where Zoya tears Tannu's shirt...I could envision every moment like a film reel in front of my eyes...

Lets go back up now...Asad in the gym...talking about Pectorals and six packs...God, you had me drooling and laughing at the same time...

Awee...Wasn't asad the sweetest, he left everything to attend Zoya...You know if a man does that for me, I will grab him in a heartbeat and tie him to me forever...

But once again the great man is in denial...He just doesn't like her😆 I am actually starting to like that line...

They both working in daddy's office...

That's another thing I enjoy...Office flirtation...Close proximity...Jealousy...Raging hormones...Testorones...Pheromones...and all other types of moans😆

Juliet, Your wicked sense of humour...Your awesome use of words and the creations of some of the most fabulous scenarios makes this a delight to read...What a treat for the senses and eyes...

This made me so happy...You remind me of some of my favourite contemporary writers...

Take a bow Juliet...You deserve all the great comments that came and that is still comming your way...

Mwah🤗