FS - Dont Like Her!Final Part-Page98 - Page 24

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart

RES!

Unres!

Me first! Me first! Lol!

I loved the update! It was a bit of an emotional roller coaster but I loved it to the core. Zoya's attitude towards Asad and his naughtiness. Loved how Zoya got jealous of Tanveer. Typical Zoya, not wanting any female getting close to Asad.

And the kiss! Oh my gosh the kiss! It was just...I don't know what it was but it was amazing! Specially Asad's remark about her saying she doesn't like him just so that he could kiss her. Lol, that was a sly move but it was totally worth it.

Typical Asad, lashing out at her and then realising that he had gone too far. He tries to explain himself and this is where my confusion arose. Zoya says "it does matter" and I'm guessing that this is a typo and what she really meant to say "I doesn't matter". Am I right? And the next one was when it's written "I was left admonished", that threw me off again and so I'm just a wee bit confused as to what you meant.

And then Zoya's words of hating him. Hell, he's screwed up quite bad and of course hate is definitely a strong emotion.

Go Zoe for not showing up at the airport, he deserves it. Jerk. But nonetheless at least he's feeling guilty about what he's done to her. Although he is still sticking to the mantra "I don't like her", the hell you don't.

Aww, poor Zoe! At least he was there for her this time, no matter what the excuse. He did show some sort of concern to her and that's good enough for me. This part is really well-penned.

Lol, loved the comment from his father "You are a true idiot". Way to go!

Ahahaha, Asad's dirty mind as she's cursing in front of him. Loved the scene again. Specially "she is golden red and simmering". Haha, he's left gobsmacked when she snaps at him with the comment.

See this is why I love you're writing. You're amazing with manipulating plots and characters so truly a job well done, my dear! *applause*

👏👏👏

🤗🤗🤗

Love you loads and loads,

Raz

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20

res!

unres!

🤣🤣

I like you

I like you

I love you

I love u..🤣

my chant!!

Originally posted by: -ARLover-

Res

*Edited*

Dont you just love Zafar, Juliet? 😆

Kabab mein haddi in every story of yours. I already hate him in Butterflies. And I dont get good vibes from him in this story either! 😡

Asad totally deserved the slap 😊. So thank you!

Stupid guy! Kisses her one moment and then the other starts on with his 'I don't like her' chant!

Maybe the jealousy factor can change him a bit 😉

Hope you are keeping well, Ms. workaholic! Take a break! And take care! 😳

Lots of love and hugs for ya! 🤗

Originally posted by: gowtu

Jesus! !
He nd his chant..
Wow

just wow..
So loved it juliet..
Fabulous tht was..

Loved Zoya's possessive Ness..
Nd the way he consoled her.. Was so lvly...

Y dnt he just agree tht he loves her..
Mmm so we ll hv jealous asad in the nxt prt..

Continue soon...
Thnks for the pm..
P.s- get well soon juliet..so we gt our remind four ;) ;) plz jaldi teek hojao..

Originally posted by: -RM-

That Slap.
Serves him Right. 🥱
For his I Don't Like Her chant! Dumbass.

Next Favorite part that meeting in office 🤣
Hahaha I so liked It 😆

Your love Zafar is back Again? 😕 :P

Ps. Take care 😳

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Resss

Juliet ...killer update

Thy kissed...😳...their frst kiss..☺️

She pushed tanveer so badly that hr dress tore..😆..

N slapped asad...😲

Bechara he cudnt gt chance to explain..

He came bck to zoya...wen hr ammi passed away. .

Jst to b wid hr..bcz he wanted to b wid hr...

Asad hugged zoya to ease hr..

Bt he dnt wana gt married to hr bcz HE DNT LIKE HR...😆

He did loads of thngs in thz yrs...cm all the way to meet hr...bt nope..he ranted only one thng and he knw only one thng...that. ..HE DNT LIKE HR. .HE DNT LIKE HR...🤣

Oh juliet such an amazing writer u r dear...👏

M getting addicted to ur wrk nw .

U cn count me in ur fans nw..😊

Originally posted by: life4me

Superb update. Eagerly waiting for next update.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan

it was a nice update...
asya scene was nice..
want to see jealous asad..

Originally posted by: Linsie

Thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: ..SheWolf..

and even after running down from New York to be with Zoya when Zeenat passed away, spending the whole time with her comforting her and then when he was asked to marry Zoe he was like 'I don't like her' and I was like *facepalm* stupid fellow he is 😆

I love the possessive and jungli billi wali Zoya who pushed off Tanveer xD hah! Asad is Zoya's property baby don't even think about kissing him and lmfao at Asad remembering that slap every time he went to kiss a girl 😆 god. 😆

AND YES FINALLY A GUY TO MAKE ASAD JEALOUS. YES YES YES xD

and I hope your feeling better Juliet, update whenever you get better unless writing is a welcome distraction, take rest and get well soon (: