FS - Dont Like Her!Final Part-Page98 - Page 16

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Hi Juliet... So you were not keeping well during the weekend.. Take care.. but why do you fall sick quite often ?? Please do take care of yourself ...😊

Coming to the update... Every day Asad remembered her.. during 10 months.. since she did not mail him and he desperately wanted them .. he lost sleep and ended up with Rank 4 ... well.. atleast he managed to get 4th... People in such situation haunted by somebody in your thoughts day and night will go crazy... 😊 So I appreciate the way he managed to do quite well in those conditions.. 😊

The way Zoya broke Najma's phone was hmm.. what to say.. I fail to get the right words here.. What else can bechari do.. She would have spent those 10 months equally disturbed in her sleep.. 😊

The text message was nice.. That is best in your stories.. even in butterflies.. about not kissing frogs any in future after kissing lion king.. was cute.. see I remember everything of what your write ... 😊

HER dreams became part of his cirriculum... aww.. Crazy man.. he does not realize how much he loves her... though he thinks it is lust.. else the sweet gesture of remembering pink roses and sending it to her on her birthday would have not come up... By the way I feel you love pink roses.. the same had come up in Butterflies as well.. but it was Zafar who had got if for her there.. 😊

The way he went jogging near her house was so so adorable.. 😊 but bechara Asad.. mehnat ka phal nahin mila...

The whole party scenes were good.. "Mutual feelings.. Ms. Farooqui .. I don't like you but I don't like to be ignored" was a WOW line.. but Tanveer is here.. 😡 and that too Asad calls her his GF.. 😡 Now starts all the drama.. HATE .. Yes that is a strong word to use ... and she is right in her POV..

He waited so desperately for her in the airport and spending time locked in his room after the party till he flyed to NY.. was beautifully written.. His guilt and pain was clearly visible.. Though he went out with many women in NY, he did not kiss anybody.. that shows how much she has acquired him in heart and thoughts.. 👏👏👏

Asad came all the way risking his career to be with her when her mother passed away and he too more risk in staying back.. which shows the depth of his love for her.. He compromised there. He always dreamt about achieving big things in business school .. This reminded me of your Ferris Wheel OS... 😊😊 LOVE is definitely what wins most of the time.. after all we all are hungry for the same.. 😊

He rejected marrying her.. and the way she barged into his office and took him to task was just wonderful 😊

"I am so not changing their diapers either." I blurt out.

"Why would you Asad, It's not like you would be my husband. You don't like me!" She has got me here.

This was another beautiful scene.. Both are adamant and do not want to confess their love for each other is what I feel..

The last scene was hilarious.. got a smile on my face.. the way Asad kept on chanting.. I don't like her.. 😊

Next The famous Zafar from Butterflies makes his entry here as well.. 😊 Asad is gonna go mad now.. HE could not tolerate her speaking to Farhaan and others in the party earlier.. so how will he tolerate somebody else getting close to her now..

So eager to know what happens next...😊😊

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20

I am sorry but u almost wrote a more than a part what I writes!! 😲 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Apoorva.. What to do.. Juliet writes so sweetly.. we should show our love and appreciation by giving good feedback right ?? It was just to show how much I loved it.. 😊

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20

okk i love it too but itna lamba toh likh nai sakti kabhi apni life mein..🤣🤣

I was and am still too bad in description..😆😆

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

😡 Apu! 😡

Don't you corrupt Devika! I love her long comments.

And I love you too Apu!😃

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20

i am asking forgiveness before hand bcoz these days i am giving only smileys in comments!!😳