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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

omg finally confession

dat was asad style of confessing

nd again zoya is being kidnapped who are dey

do update soon

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Bubble.. A big hug to you for such a lovely update.. 😊

First scene in the flashback.. hmmm... that was so cool... Asad threatened her... 😊 bichari Zoya.. how much she was scared of him...

Asad was sad whole day for loosing her earring or his lucky charm.. awww... how cute n adorable... lots and lots of love for you for giving this scene...👏... That shows how much this guy love her...😊 and the scene of him staring at her with deadly glare for entering his room... arre buddu Ahmed Khan.. She is your wife Mr... 🤣

The scene near the pool was awsome.. He speaking in her language.. Seriously Asad.. OMG what a change in this man.. No doubt he is madly, truly and deeply in love with his wife... 😊 He is so very adorable now.. 😊

HE got her a gift from his first pay.. 👏 .. The pendant was also a beautiful one...

Finally Zoya's kidnap.. hmm... Asad will go mad now if she is missing ...😭😭

Yeh Wednesday kab ayega... ??? Wait for another 3.5 days.. not fair... Bubble...

Reading each story of yours I cannot decide which one is the best since I love all of them and even when I re-read them I fall in love more with them... Few stories in this forum are really close to my heart and no doubt all your stories and dear to me... 😊

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fifi1297

@fifi1297

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Dat was awsum yar...
Awsum scenes written...
Pool scene was great...
I just love ur story...one of the best stories in forum...thnks for pm dear...

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

simply beautiful!

wat a love confesion Dr AAK!!! hayee mardala!!!☺️

u wrote it beautifully dr! kudos to u!🤗

the last bit scared me...again got to be sehrish right?😡

update soon!

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

awsm part.
Superb one.
Luujd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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Hina Kamran

@honeybees22

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Fantastic update bubble

loved it

thnks for the PM

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: rockstar_16
Awesome awesome awesome
it was a bomb foddu update
i loved each and every line...and specially asad's confession part😉
cliffy😭
please do continue soon
waiting for Wednesday now😉

Thanks ,,

I am honoured that you liked it (:

Yah it was cliffy but what can I say I love cliffys na LoL

Will try to update sooon !!

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: hottytotty
congo on new thread
loved the update conti soon
coz it was again CLIFF HANGER
ppor zoya everyone wants to kidnap her 😆

Thanks ,,

I am honoured that you liked it (:

Will try to update sooon !!

haha not everyone just Sehrish LoL

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Tazzytaz
OMG OMG OMG!!!!!😲

haha can I say I loved your reaction ?? 😳😆

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: jas91
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lovely updt👏
Asad confessed⭐️
Asya kissed 2nd time☺️
but this 1 is more meaningful👍🏼
why Ayaan always comes btw their romance😡
he deserve i big punch from Asad🤣
Zoya again kidnapped🤢
Asad has taken Sehrish very lightly🤬
now he has 2 face d consequences😈
another cliffy😭
but atleast this time updt was long😃
thanx 4 PM
A big wala huggie 2 u🤗
updt soonish plz😉

& congrats 4 new thread👍🏼