Originally posted by: -Anitha-
Hiya don ji😎
Finally i got the time to read all ur previous part.. ufff😆
I dont have any words to describe the cuteness...😕 i was like aww
Now im coming from😊
Part 26:
What i loved the most is ways to stay safe & cautions by asad😆
whenever i read ur update i come to know some new words & things😃 - white stephanotis flower were used to wish good luck... Wow 😳
Cutely u described zoya's nervousness...😃
Note was lovely specially i loved that P.S: don't go out of hospital boundary😆
Part 27:
Ayaan go & brush your teeth first😆
Loved the way asad talked abt hum/ayaan love❤️
Zoya excitement was cute.😳..
And also i loved : leets not break the deal before time mrs.khan 😆
Happy that their family agreed to get AyRa marriage..
Part 28:
Worth drooling asad(ksg) six pack - aww zoya too drooled over him..😆
u know don ji whenever i read or saw ksg in sixpack(without shirt) then i forget the surrounding, always stop reading starts to drool over him☺️☺️☺️ such an hot guy
Super cute earring flashback scene😳 - loved the way they fell over each other❤️
U written it beautifully 👍🏼👍🏼
aww he was so much attached to her earring in last 10 years
Her earring is his lucky charm- aww
Yah his actions speak volumes😃
Wooho finally he confessed '' he truly, madly & deeply in love with his wife zoya
Asad ahmed khan...😳
Worth the wait don ji... 👍🏼
Cucking frazily😳
Loved this line that his touch left her feeling at ease, trusting,safe & secure ❤️
Wow he presented elegant white gold pendant
Loved his honesty... Seriously i want a man like him bubba ji...
''LIFE IS ALWAYS BEAUTIFUL IF ALL THE THINGS ARE AT THIER RITE PLACE'' - truely said bubba...
Aww the kissed😳 for the 2nd time
U have written each & every line beautifully bubba ji.👏..
Part 29:
When i read this part i was shocked😲 tensed , my hyperness to know wat next was increased...
This is the beauty of ur writing skill don ji.😃.
I was like im sitting in the edge of my seat while i watch horror movies or action scenes😆 u created hyperness in me bubba..
he always rock whenever he break vases, he kicked the chair, aww he frustrated himself..😊
His panic was worth readable...😳
Sehrish😡 🤢 🤬 how can she go so low? Ewww😡
Bechare zoya.. But happy that she finally come to know abt sehrish..
How dare she slap our zoya😳
It showed ur evil mind bubba ji😈
Its all happen by his over loaded trust on his friend ...
Well written part don ji..👏
Part 30:
I just loved sameer in this part -glad he accepted his mistake & also his feelings for zoya though its unintentional...😳
when asad said she is my responsibility not yours - i was like aww...
Woohoo asad being tubelight his bulb worked immediately at rite time easily he tracked sehrish farmhouse😆
Asad in action
Glad sameer smiled at his concern...😃
That boys got memorable punches🥳 & kicks from our lion
Dhinka chikaa hai hai
Finally he slapped sehrish twice this is most waited moment of mine - finally she got wat she deserved..
Cute line- bright read hand mark showed the extreme force of his hit😳
Bechara he is already feeling guilty for not listening to her words...
Zoya didn't said anything her mouthzipped after she saw roared asad😆
Actually i wanted to see him hugging her & asking if she is okay.. But u r such an evil never added this line in this part😡
But i understand u & asad - he is in guilt mood so we cant expect anything from him ATM😃
But he disappointed me when he completely ignored zoya all the way
Zoya become unconscious😲 😆 much needed medical treatment now from our Dr.khan
U r rite bubba '' LIFE IS ALWAYS ABOUT LEARNING NEW THINGS ''
I loved all this part a lot lot lot❤️
Standing ovation to u don👏
want to see more asya romance in next part.. Hope u wont cheat us😆
Uff.. Now im stopping here...😃
Love yah🤗
Ani❤️
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