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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

Hiya don ji😎
Finally i got the time to read all ur previous part.. ufff😆
I dont have any words to describe the cuteness...😕 i was like aww
Now im coming from😊
Part 26:
What i loved the most is ways to stay safe & cautions by asad😆
whenever i read ur update i come to know some new words & things😃 - white stephanotis flower were used to wish good luck... Wow 😳
Cutely u described zoya's nervousness...😃
Note was lovely specially i loved that P.S: don't go out of hospital boundary😆
Part 27:
Ayaan go & brush your teeth first😆
Loved the way asad talked abt hum/ayaan love❤️
Zoya excitement was cute.😳..
And also i loved : leets not break the deal before time mrs.khan 😆
Happy that their family agreed to get AyRa marriage..
Part 28:
Worth drooling asad(ksg) six pack - aww zoya too drooled over him..😆
u know don ji whenever i read or saw ksg in sixpack(without shirt) then i forget the surrounding, always stop reading starts to drool over him☺️☺️☺️ such an hot guy
Super cute earring flashback scene😳 - loved the way they fell over each other❤️
U written it beautifully 👍🏼👍🏼
aww he was so much attached to her earring in last 10 years
Her earring is his lucky charm- aww
Yah his actions speak volumes😃
Wooho finally he confessed '' he truly, madly & deeply in love with his wife zoya
Asad ahmed khan...😳
Worth the wait don ji... 👍🏼
Cucking frazily😳
Loved this line that his touch left her feeling at ease, trusting,safe & secure ❤️
Wow he presented elegant white gold pendant
Loved his honesty... Seriously i want a man like him bubba ji...
''LIFE IS ALWAYS BEAUTIFUL IF ALL THE THINGS ARE AT THIER RITE PLACE'' - truely said bubba...
Aww the kissed😳 for the 2nd time
U have written each & every line beautifully bubba ji.👏..
Part 29:
When i read this part i was shocked😲 tensed , my hyperness to know wat next was increased...
This is the beauty of ur writing skill don ji.😃.
I was like im sitting in the edge of my seat while i watch horror movies or action scenes😆 u created hyperness in me bubba..
he always rock whenever he break vases, he kicked the chair, aww he frustrated himself..😊
His panic was worth readable...😳
Sehrish😡 🤢 🤬 how can she go so low? Ewww😡
Bechare zoya.. But happy that she finally come to know abt sehrish..
How dare she slap our zoya😳
It showed ur evil mind bubba ji😈

Its all happen by his over loaded trust on his friend ...
Well written part don ji..👏
Part 30:
I just loved sameer in this part -glad he accepted his mistake & also his feelings for zoya though its unintentional...😳
when asad said she is my responsibility not yours - i was like aww...
Woohoo asad being tubelight his bulb worked immediately at rite time easily he tracked sehrish farmhouse😆
Asad in action
Glad sameer smiled at his concern...😃
That boys got memorable punches🥳 & kicks from our lion
Dhinka chikaa hai hai

Finally he slapped sehrish twice this is most waited moment of mine - finally she got wat she deserved..
Cute line- bright read hand mark showed the extreme force of his hit😳
Bechara he is already feeling guilty for not listening to her words...
Zoya didn't said anything her mouthzipped after she saw roared asad😆
Actually i wanted to see him hugging her & asking if she is okay.. But u r such an evil never added this line in this part😡
But i understand u & asad - he is in guilt mood so we cant expect anything from him ATM😃
But he disappointed me when he completely ignored zoya all the way
Zoya become unconscious😲 😆 much needed medical treatment now from our Dr.khan

U r rite bubba '' LIFE IS ALWAYS ABOUT LEARNING NEW THINGS ''
I loved all this part a lot lot lot❤️
Standing ovation to u don👏
want to see more asya romance in next part.. Hope u wont cheat us😆
Uff.. Now im stopping here...😃
Love yah🤗
Ani❤️

Ohhh f*** u seriously wrote thismuch long comment!!😲
I can never write it in my whole life!!
I only knows how I wrote those english diaries !!😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety003

New thread please 🤣


😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

yeah i m fine... Finally.. Done wth my exms na 😆 hey that's k.. Haha irritation.. I would love to being dis typ of irritate from u 😆 😳 girl.. U r amzng.. I just luv u 😳 i mean ur work 😆


LoL its ok u can confess ur feelings for me 😳 I mean my work 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish


Bubble.. I was still having second thoughts if I need to write PART 2 of my OS.. but now since you are asking, I will definitely write the second part... because I have enjoyed reading all your stories and it gives me immense amount of pleasure re-reading them... 😊 Apologies for mentioning wrong name for your OS in my earlier comment.. I checked it out and commented again in that thread.. 😊

Can I please request you for an update tomorrow.. Please.. 😊





Aww thanks for that ,,
do write only if u are comfortable with it I won't force you 😊
ohh yah I just noticed now that u have wrote stakeholder instead of shakedown ,,
I guess u r having too much of workload at office which is showing up here 😆
no need for sorry ,,
Actually I am trying after ur request and I guess it will be in tomorrow evening only if I can complete on time 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20

❤️


sehrish gone 🥳 🥳

only 3 updates left 😭 😭

But hoping to see their marriage and SR before that!!🤣 🤣

🤗


Yah Sehrish is finally out of the story ,,
not 3 I guess 4 or 5 still !
Yah I will try to show u all that 😆
Thanks !
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--


wow

this is superb

finally everything is crystal clear

😊


Thanks ,,
Glad that you liked it Mahima (:

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi_ke_dewane

superb...

she deserves those tight slaps...
zoya... unconscious 😲


Thanks ,,
Glad that you liked it (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Bubble darling sorry for my delayed comments,

I was too busy last days.
Its superb dear.
I love this update.
I like how Asad slapped sehrish.
Pls conyinue soon.
U end it cliffy.
Thanks for the pm😳


Thanks ,,
Glad that you liked it (:
aww no need for sorry u can comment whenever ur free :D
Yup Sehrish is finally out of the story ,,
Will try updating sooon !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

Hiya don ji😎
Finally i got the time to read all ur previous part.. ufff😆
I dont have any words to describe the cuteness...😕 i was like aww
Now im coming from😊
Part 26:
What i loved the most is ways to stay safe & cautions by asad😆
whenever i read ur update i come to know some new words & things😃 - white stephanotis flower were used to wish good luck... Wow 😳
Cutely u described zoya's nervousness...😃
Note was lovely specially i loved that P.S: don't go out of hospital boundary😆
Part 27:
Ayaan go & brush your teeth first😆
Loved the way asad talked abt hum/ayaan love❤️
Zoya excitement was cute.😳..
And also i loved : leets not break the deal before time mrs.khan 😆
Happy that their family agreed to get AyRa marriage..
Part 28:
Worth drooling asad(ksg) six pack - aww zoya too drooled over him..😆
u know don ji whenever i read or saw ksg in sixpack(without shirt) then i forget the surrounding, always stop reading starts to drool over him☺️☺️☺️ such an hot guy
Super cute earring flashback scene😳 - loved the way they fell over each other❤️
U written it beautifully 👍🏼👍🏼
aww he was so much attached to her earring in last 10 years
Her earring is his lucky charm- aww
Yah his actions speak volumes😃
Wooho finally he confessed '' he truly, madly & deeply in love with his wife zoya
Asad ahmed khan...😳
Worth the wait don ji... 👍🏼
Cucking frazily😳
Loved this line that his touch left her feeling at ease, trusting,safe & secure ❤️
Wow he presented elegant white gold pendant
Loved his honesty... Seriously i want a man like him bubba ji...
''LIFE IS ALWAYS BEAUTIFUL IF ALL THE THINGS ARE AT THIER RITE PLACE'' - truely said bubba...
Aww the kissed😳 for the 2nd time
U have written each & every line beautifully bubba ji.👏..
Part 29:
When i read this part i was shocked😲 tensed , my hyperness to know wat next was increased...
This is the beauty of ur writing skill don ji.😃.
I was like im sitting in the edge of my seat while i watch horror movies or action scenes😆 u created hyperness in me bubba..
he always rock whenever he break vases, he kicked the chair, aww he frustrated himself..😊
His panic was worth readable...😳
Sehrish😡 🤢 🤬 how can she go so low? Ewww😡
Bechare zoya.. But happy that she finally come to know abt sehrish..
How dare she slap our zoya😳
It showed ur evil mind bubba ji😈

Its all happen by his over loaded trust on his friend ...
Well written part don ji..👏
Part 30:
I just loved sameer in this part -glad he accepted his mistake & also his feelings for zoya though its unintentional...😳
when asad said she is my responsibility not yours - i was like aww...
Woohoo asad being tubelight his bulb worked immediately at rite time easily he tracked sehrish farmhouse😆
Asad in action
Glad sameer smiled at his concern...😃
That boys got memorable punches🥳 & kicks from our lion
Dhinka chikaa hai hai

Finally he slapped sehrish twice this is most waited moment of mine - finally she got wat she deserved..
Cute line- bright read hand mark showed the extreme force of his hit😳
Bechara he is already feeling guilty for not listening to her words...
Zoya didn't said anything her mouthzipped after she saw roared asad😆
Actually i wanted to see him hugging her & asking if she is okay.. But u r such an evil never added this line in this part😡
But i understand u & asad - he is in guilt mood so we cant expect anything from him ATM😃
But he disappointed me when he completely ignored zoya all the way
Zoya become unconscious😲 😆 much needed medical treatment now from our Dr.khan

U r rite bubba '' LIFE IS ALWAYS ABOUT LEARNING NEW THINGS ''
I loved all this part a lot lot lot❤️
Standing ovation to u don👏
want to see more asya romance in next part.. Hope u wont cheat us😆
Uff.. Now im stopping here...😃
Love yah🤗
Ani❤️


ohh Ani this is succhh a long and lovey dovey comment ,,
I don't know where to start from 😳❤️
haha I am soo soo happy that you loved all the chapters ,,
I was waiting for ur comment and finally I got it
Thank You soo mucchh for this 🤗
Yah Asad cares about her thats why he asked her not to go out of hospital boundary 😆
Yup finally AyRa are also getting married ,,
I hope u r happy for my Ayaan as he finally got what he wanted since a long time 😛
Yah its been long since I mentioned his sixpacks soo thought to show it again ,,
even I love drooling over KSG's sixpacks
He is damn hot ! *sighs*
It means alot to me 😳
Yah he was having it since ten years na soo obvio he got too attached to it 😃
haha u will deffo get a man like him Ani ,,
just keep ur hopes high and tell ur bulb to keep working 😎😆
Yah he confessed finally in his own unique style ,,
I told u already remember that I am gonna use my evil mind sooon ,,
glad that u recognised where I used it and loved it tooo 😈😆
Yah Ani my Asad's bulb is also working these days after confession ,,
Wow u loved Sameer ?? thats soo sweet of you 😳
well finally Sameer and Sehrish are out of the story now ,,
LoL no I won't cheat you ,,
will try to add some romance maybe in next one ,,
Thanks again Ani ,,
Love you tooo ❤️
and will try updating sooon !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--



LoL its ok u can confess ur feelings for me😳I mean my work😆

😉 😆

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