FF:Everything Burns II Link to Thread III in Index!!! - Page 75

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs

Awesome update dear.

Originally posted by: rajsmi

And the plot thickens...interesting!!

Originally posted by: marcoe

Really nice update😃

Oh dilshaad mommy I've always loved u

Such a smart mom😳

I wish she puts some sense in asad too😡

And gaffur too

So he also approves of asad👏

Yeayyy

Come on make zoya and rihaan divorce

I want asya😭

The story is just turning out to be more and more interesting😉😲

I dnt know what the killer is planning😲

I hope asad saves zoya then😕 ...too😉

Hahhaha. ...the bar scene was hilarious🤣

I can't stop laughing😆😆

Plzzz update soon

I can't wait to read what happens next

Asya. ...One room...zoya drunk...irritated asad

Hahahahha🤣🤣

Update soonishhh🤗

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

Hello!

Finally got the time to catch up with this story.

I got busy and to top it I even lost interest on the forum now.Anyways here I am;)

Frankly I would admit that this story did have a slow pace initially but now you have made it so intriguing 😃

Im glad you did not give up on this story and took it as a challenge because you are a phenomenal writer di 😃

Okay about the update the bar scene was really very amusing and im looking forward to the next update.The heart to heart talk is due for long now and since zoya is drunk im sure we are in for some confessions and revealations as well ,like you said.

The old Zoya that is Zeenat's Zoya is locked up somewhere inside this obnoxious Zoya.That old Zoya is still longing for true love and she unknowingly tries to find it in Rehaan and is always disappointed. She channels her disappointment into swearing and shouting at other people.Your potrayal of this concept is fabulous.

Before I read this update It did cross my mind that Ayaan is not the culprit amd he is just looking for something else. Im anxiously waiting for humeira and Ayaan's meeting.

I do strongly feel that Rehaan has to be the mastermind because he was worried about his bag when Ayaan had been caught in Zoya's office and in thid update you mentioned that the bag is the lifeline of the culprit.

No partnership then why is Shahid on a revenge spree is a mystery to me.

I do remember the red file you had mentioned in the initial updates but im not able to establish the connection.

Also the culprit is hell bent on murdering Zoya only because Zoya is close to his secret.He can go to any extent well its about money and greed so that is expected.

Would love to see more of Dilshaad and Zoya and Dilshaad and Asad filling the void in poor Zoya's life:)

Gaffur would want Zoya to hold onto Rehaan but he wont create problems for Asya because he wants the best for Zoya right?

Too many questions unanswered but still a bit clear picture than before.

I probably should get going.See you on your new thread di.

🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: laks_vish

Aashna darling enjoying every bit of suspense... when will you update...arey yaar i love to read the story and then watch the movie(normal ones)so imagine my plight with this story...biting my nails

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

I am jumping with joy .. since you are responding.. and you know the reason.. 😊

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-

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LOL...I guess I need some mystrey around me now...I am getting too predictable😆