AsYa OS - Holding My Heart - Page 4

I love it dear.

This is mindblowing. Amazing writing. Love this fool Asad. Love it. Thanks for pm.

Wish u a very Happy HOLI.

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

<font color="#FF9933" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">T</font><font color="#FF9933" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">HIS IS THE SWEETEST EVER OS I HAVE EVR READ!
WONDERFUL
SPLENDID
AMAZING
FANTSTIC
FABULOUS
FANTABULOUS
I M IN LOVE WID IT
ITS JUST A
PERFECT OS
AMAZING
YAAR CANT STOP ADMIRING
I M REALLY LIKE
AWWW
THIS IS A WONDERFUL FF
TOTALLY IN LOVE WID IT
I WANNA MENTION EACH N EVERY PART
BUT THEN I WUD HAVE TO WRITE THE WHOLE OS
IT IS JUST AMAZING
OMG CANT DESCRIBE
U R A WONDERFUL
OH GOD CANT STOP ADMIRING
LOVD EACH N EVERY LINE OF IT
LOVD
ASAD
ZOYA
NAJMA
AYAAN
HUMI
EVEN TANVEER
SUPERB WORK
PLZ DO WRITE MORE
I WANNA HAVE TUTIONS FRM U
U R SUCH AN AWESOME WRITER
PERFECT</font>

Im totally smitten ! :)
Thnks for the awesome comment !
Tutions? Depend on the fees lol
No seriously thnks u soo much !
Thnks !

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Oh wow.


I shall refrain myself from saying anything else about the amazingly wonderful piece of stellar writting..*I kinda just did, right?*


Okay before I say any more... I so have to tell Zanutix to read this!!!!

Zan love!! *he he* Our kind of fluff dawg!!



Come!



Then we spam this...with our reviews!!!




Mwahhh

Ready for an eye straining review?

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Ready for an eye straining review?

If not, you'll have to read it ANYWAY.

Lets get started then!

First of all, I have to literally hug SoulDawg for suggesting me this. Don't know her?

She's none other than farz_parachute!

I love silly, self obsessed, lovable, ridiculously adorable Asad!

So what he's a stalker? He's so fudgin cute!

"Double date. You, me, Humeira and Tanveer ."

I raised my eyebrows, "I didn't know you were interested in me in that way."

I was laughing like a maniac! Oh, this Asad has a funny bone too!

CAN THIS GET ANY BETTER?

YES IT CAN.

Oh, and he's such an amazing best friend too! Poor he, was forced on a double date!

The Najma-Asad convo was so perfect!

Such a lovable sibling relationship!

And and.. then ZOYA entered the ice cream parlor and their HANDS TOUCHED.

And he was sooo freaked! 🤣

Her blush! And Asad shoving the LoveGuru Najma!

Hahahahahaha!

Oh My God! I'm gonna die!

NO! Not yet.

I've got a big ass review to write.

Moving on, Ayaan was a darling...and Tanveer bearable.

I wish to not mention YOU KNOW WHO.

After the toucha toucha moment, poor stupid main lead was denied visiting Zoya. Awww.

I know exactly how it feels. First Crushes.

He got so furious about his oh so smart deduction.

Zoya dating Farhaan. Haha!

Then he held her hand, and and wrapped his arm around her...

"It's not your fault. It was my idea to come along with you. Don't worry about it. My boss is pretty lenient." White lie. "He probably won't even notice." He'll bite my head off.

🤣

Oh God, he's so naive!

The Farooqui girl gifted him such an expensive watch and he.. 😆

The best part was that he had liked her since junior high. I mean, HOW ADORABLE IS THAT?

"What's one plus one?" I ask her again, my heart thudding loudly against my chest.

"...Two?" She said uncertainly, drawing out the word.

I took that opportunity to brush my lips softly against hers. I felt her freeze in shock.

Most. Amazing. Method. EVER!!!!

And to add to it,

"What colour is the sky?"

I blinked at her as her eyes entranced me, "Blu-," but she cut me off before I could finish.

Her lips pressed softly against mine and I couldn't help melting into her. She kissed me! Oh my God. Zoya was kissing me and I was kissing her back.

☺️

This is sooo my and my dawg's kinda fluff!!!!

And here, a kiss from my side for this amazing OS.

Oh, stop blushing you!

Have you written more? Is there an Index?

Well, then GIVE ME!

And, yes. Do not forget to write more.

WRITE. MORE.

🤗

I don't like this

SUCH a cute story! I can't even begin to explain how cute it was hahaha. Amazing writing skills and beautifully vivid descriptions, and the ending took the cake! Ridiculously cute, I'm still smiling to myself haha.