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Originally posted by: parakshi

I am loving it 😉
its fabulous
plzz continue soon

Originally posted by: anopama

nice update Thank u😊
y is asad having regrets now He is shocked for being scolded n insulted by everyone n he is even more shocked dat Zoya is even ignoring his ammi to whom Zoya used to love very much
it is like a saying "u never missed the water until the well runs dry" Asad's life is going to be like dry well n he vl suffer like someone craving for a single drop of water but he won't get
that is happening to asad now when zoya is gone he is finding her importance He has just began to realize wat his thinking n actions hv led to n how far it vl destroy his life
u have a lot more to face asad miya ur time has just started Dis is just d start of wat vl happen wid Asad. He vl regret for for all his regressive thinking n his wish for d type of a wife
zoya has got alot of attitude interesting but I guess when u r always degraded It actually happens. Imagine urself in Zoya's place. She thought Dilshad as her own ammi n tried a lot to be friends wid Asad but in return she only got betrayal n insults. Do u think Dilshad wud hv gotten Najma married to a guy like Asad? But, she got Zoya married to Asad thinking dat Asad vl change due to her. I hated how Zoya was shown too mahaan in d show. Its very unrealistic. Here, Zoya is just like a normal girl like us. As I commented on Radhika di's comment above, I vl write a note explaining Zoya's attitude n behaviour wid everyone along wid posting 4th part.
u will get like that...loving najma she is a strong woman to stand against her bhaijaan
and fo putting tanu ji in her place Najma's character is going to be stronger than Zoya. She vl be Zoya's support who vl defend her 4m everyone including fighting wid her step-siblings who vl blame Zoya for d divorce n vl blindly support Asad. Najma vl be smartest in d Khan family who figured out dat Tanu is too nosy n interfering who is provoking Asad against Zoya.
continue soon

Originally posted by: fifi1297

Very nice concept... Thank u😊

I liked it...so curious wat will happen... A lot vl happen😉

Plz pm me I have sent a buddy request... I hv not got ur buddy request😔

I may not be able to cmmnt becoz of my brd exam...but aftr dat I ll continue... Okay, I vl wait for ur comments😃

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Part 4

In d evening, after Zoya comes 4m d office Najma comes in her room.

"Zoya, how was ur day?" asked Najma.

"Najma, plz leave me alone," said Zoya.

"Y r u talking to me like dis, Zoya? Hv I done any mistake?" asked Najma.

"No Najma, u hv not done any mistake but I don't want to do any mistake by talking to u," replied Zoya.

"Wat do u mean, Zoya?" asked Najma confusingly.

"Ur bhaijaan always tells dat I am hvng a bad influence on u n I don't want to be blamed for being a bad influence on u. Just because I wear modern clothes, Asad thinks dat I spreading dirt in his heavenly environment. He even told u not to make jeans wearing girls as ur friends as it vl not be good for u. I even went to jail n he got worried abt his reputation due to dat. So, v sud better end our end our friendship," replied Zoya.

Zoya," said Najma in a hurtful voice.

"Najma, plz leave me alone," requested Zoya.

Najma leaves her room lukn hurt n cries outside her room. Zoya also cries inside her room.

Yaariyan(Reprise) song starts playing in d bg. Listen d song along wid reading those lines http://www.lyricsmasti.com/song/7883/get_lyrics_of_Yaariyan-Female.html .

Starting Music

(Najma n Zoya recalls greeting each other for d 1^st time wen Zoya comes in KV.)

Alvida Yaara Alvida
Ho Rahe Tumse Hum Judaa
Le Chalein Saare Ghum Tere
Khush Rahe Yaara Tu Sadaa

(Najma recalls Zoya teln her to leave her alone. Zoya recalls teln Najma to leave her alone. Both r hurt thinking dat.)
Tumse Bhi Zyaada Hongi
Ab Yaadein Pyaariyan
Hum Dono Ki Hain
Apni Apni Lachaariyan
Ab Hanste Hanste Tum Pe
Le Khushiyaan Vaariyan

Ooo

(Najma recalls teln Zoya d directions of her room on d 1^st day. She also recalls Zoya saving her 4m d goons twice-once by throwing ink n other time by driving them away wid her karate. Zoya recalls meeting Najma in college while wearing burqa.)
Marz Bhi Hai Deti
Chain Bhi Hai Deti
Dard Bhi Hai Deti
Jaan Bhi Hai Leti
Yaariyan

(Najma recalls Zoya not picking her calls wen she left d house. She then recalls Zoya explaining her dat she don't to be blamed for hvng a bad influence on her n teln her to end their friendship. Zoya recalls Najma leaving her room while lukn hurt.)
Na Chodhe Yaariyan
Na Chodhe Yaariyan
Na Chodhe Yaariyan

(Najma n Zoya r on d split-screen as they hv tears in their eyes thinking abt their ending of friendship.)

Najma is going to her room while crying. Asad sees her n follows her in her room.

"Tamatar, wat happened? Y r u crying?" asked Asad.

"Does it matter to u, bhaijaan?" asked Najma coldly wiping her tears.

"Wat r u saying, Tamatar?" asked Asad.

"I am saying right, bhaijaan," replied Najma angrily, "U always interferes in everything n acts bossy wid everyone. U always interferes in other people's matters not realizing dat u r actually causing them great discomfort. U even interferes wid my dressing sense n hairstyle. There is sumthn called privacy n u sud learn to respect dat. U told me not to be friends wid girls who wears jeans cuz they vl be bad for me. How can u think dat? Cuz of ur attitude, Zoya broke her friendship wid me. Cuz of u, she is hating ammi whom she once loved very much. U must be happy now cuz u never liked Zoya bonding wid ammi n me cuz u thought her as a bad influence for our house. Y do u think dat u r always right? U always keep us in fear like any dictator. Hv u ever thought abt anyone's feelings? U always make decisions for everyone whether v like it or not. Do u even realize how much u hurt everyone wid ur behaviour? Do u even care how do v feel? U only care abt ur feelings cuz u r selfish who thinks he is always right n others r wrong. Cuz of u, many girls call me 'behenji' due to my clothes n hairstyle. Do u care how I feel abt dis? Y do u force everyone to be old-fashioned like u? I also want to dress in western clothes n I hated to wear dat braided hairstyle all d time. Thank God, I hv my hairstyle as I want now. Wats wrong wid western clothes n hvng short hair? U react as if I am asking to smoke, drink or take drugs? U blamed Zoya for everything. U even blamed Zoya for hvng a bad influence on me. How can u be so judgemental? U did not had manners to treat a guest properly n u wanted to make dat guest feel alone n isolated cuz u never wanted her to bond wid ammi n me. U never thought her as ur wife n always insulted her cuz she was not able to be type of wife u always wanted. U only want a girl like ur Tanu who just always interferes in our personal matters. D truth is dat no woman can become ur wife cuz u only think abt urself n ur wishes. U told dat u don't believe in love n u want a type of wife who vl be traditional n good for d house. U married Zoya only cuz ur ammi put pressure on u but u always ignored n humiliated her. 4m d time she came home, she tried to be ur friend but u always refused her friendship just cuz she wears jeans n is a modern NRI. Is a woman a machine or a commodity dat u want it as u like? Women also hv feelings n wishes. U always makes us feel suffocated wid ur attitude. U even don't like to talk in fun while eating or any other time. Do u think dat goons target women cuz of their clothes? Wen d goons misbehaved wid me for d 1^st time, I was in Indian cloth n d 2^nd time I was in skirt. I also wore one of her jeans n top. Yes, they misbehaved wid me again n Zoya saved me 4m them wid her karate. While chasing them, she accidentaly broke d Principal's window wid a stone n dats y dat idiot Principal send her to jail. I wanted to participate in a fashion show n for dat I asked u indirectly but u refused n told me not to be friends wid jeans wearing girls along wid some other of ur bullshit ideologies. I participated in it anyway but later withdrew my name so dat Zoya don't fall in trouble again cuz of my clothes. I did not told u d entire incident cuz of fear n cuz I was wearing skirt. U insulted Zoya very badly dat day going on her parents n calling her bad example for women along wid many other hurtful things. She cried a lot dat day. U always made her cry. U don't deserve her. U ruined her life by agreeing to marry her. If u cannot respect her d way she is then y did u married her? Now, u want her back but she vl never come back to u cuz u destroyed her self-respect. And wen a woman's self-respect is destroyed then hell breaks loose. There was never any trust, respect n love in ur marriage. Its better dat it vl be ending after 3 months then u can marry d woman of ur dreams. U not only lost ur wife but 2day u also lost ur sister. I am no longer ur Tamatar. I hv lost all d respect I had for u till 2day. U can never be my bhaijaan, Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan. U sud better stop ruling other's life n improve urself. Mr. Khan, 4m now on I vl not let u rule my life. I vl wear as I want. I vl live as I want. U sud learn to respect other's feelings n wishes."

Asad was shocked n hurt wid wat all Najma said. He feels ashamed by dis realizing how he hurt everyone. He recalls teln Zoya many insulting things wen she went to jail but she actually saved his sister n Najma did not told him everything due to him.

"Najma, I am very sorry for hurting u n everyone," apologized Asad, "4m now on, I vl never interfere in any small things. I vl never interfere in all matters of anyone where is not needed. 4m now on, u can wear wat u want. I vl not hv any objection."

"I don't need to ask ur permission in wat I sud wear. U sud not not hv any objection in wat I wear. Now plz Mr. Khan, leave me alone," said Najma wid attitude.

Asad left her room while lukn hurt. He goes n sits in d hall. Tanveer who was cumn in d hall sees him hurt n comes n sits next to him.

"Wat happened, Jammy? Y r u lukn hurt?" asked Tanveer.

"Tanu, I don't to talk anything. Plz, leave alone," said Asad.

"U r hurt cuz of Zoya's behaviour @ d dining table na? U know na, Jammy. She is a modern NRI who hardly knows abt her country. She is a spoilt brat n an immature girl who is divorcing u for no fault of yours. Plz, don't be upset thinking of her," said Tanveer.

Asad was getn irritated wid her talking abt Zoya.

"Tanveer, plz leave me alone," said Asad firmly.

Tanveer left 4m there disappointedly.

Everyone has their dinner widout Zoya silently. After everyone sleeps, Zoya in her green night dress goes into d kitchen. She cooks some rotis which r bad in shape n not properly cooked, dal, rice n fried potato sabzi. Asad who was has not slept till now due to his fight wid Najma n her showing him his real face hears some voice in kitchen. He recalls Zoya teln everyone dat she vl not eat anything cooked by them n vl cook her own food. He stealthily goes near d kitchen. He stands behind d kitchen wall n sees her eating d food made by her.

"Zoya, u still make rotis so badly. U also too much water in rice. So wat? Its only me who is going to eat not anyone else especially dat heartless jerk Asad. Dat day, he tasted ur food as I am a criminal who is planning to poison everyone. Anyways, rice n sabzi r okay. I vl never eat anything made by anyone in dis house. I just hate them," said Zoya to herself.

Asad gets hurt by wat Zoya was saying n quietly goes 4m there. After eating d food, Zoya goes to her room.

Next morning, Zoya makes her iwn breakfast of tea n sandwich. She wore a red n black short formal outfit n went to d office.

Zoya reaches outside her office. She sees Suvreen talking wid a boy outside d office. They both r smiling while talking. Zoya gets out of her car n comes near them. Suvreen n d boy sees her n stops talking.

"Good morning, Mam," said Suvreen.

"Good morning," said Zoya n asked, "Who is dis boy?"

"Mam, he is my boyfriend Yuvraj Singh. He is also a model," replied Zoya.

"Dats very nice. Nice to meet u," said Zoya wid a smile shaking Yuvraj's hand.

"Nice to meet u too, Mam," said Yuvraj wid a smile.

"Do u both need to talk for some more time?" asked Zoya.

"No Mam, v r coming inside," replied Suvreen.

"Okay," said Zoya n went inside d office.

Zoya in her cabin removes her sketch book.

"I need to make a sketch for my dress. Asad tore my previous dress. He ruined my efforts. But, I vl make it again," thinks Zoya n starts making d sketch.

After making d sketch, she colours d sketch n finishes in some time.

"D sketch is ready. I vl give to d tailor to make it," said Zoya to herself.

"Zoya, due to dis stupid Asad u hv even forgot ur real purpose to come to India," said Zoya to herself, "U hv came for d justice of ur ammi's murder n to find those 3 murderers."

-----Flashback-----

5 year old Zoya standing outside a factory wid her mom.

"Zoya, I hv some work inside. I vl come soon," said her mom wid a smile n went inside after kissing her cheek.

Zoya keeps on waiting for some time.

"Ammi has still not come," said Zoya to herself, "I am going inside."

Zoya goes inside n walks to find her ammi. She stops dead in her track wen she sees her ammi standing before her dad n 2 other women. Her ammi was hvng some quarrel wid them. Zoya hides. One had braided haired while d other had curly hair. Zoya cud not see properly anyone's faces due to dark but she knew dat d man was her abbu. Zoya is shocked n scared wen she sees one of d women stabbing her ammi in her heart while her ammi screams loudly. Zoya was too shocked dat no voice came 4m her mouth. Her ammi fell dead on d ground while 3 of them laughed evilly. They started moving around n Zoya hid herself.

"Bhaijaan, v need to finished dat girl too. After dat, all her money vl be ours," Zoya heard d curly haired women's voice.

"She may be waiting outside for her ammi. Lets go n get her," came her abbu's voice.

"After dat girl Zoya's death, our plan vl be successful. U never let Zainab get to know dat u were engaged to me n how u got married to me 4 years after ur n her marriage. U also did not let her know dat v hv an one year old daughter. V planned dat u get married to Zainab to get all her money but all d money is in Zoya's name. V killed d mother n now v vl kill d daughter too. She also needs to die," came braided haired woman's voice.

Zoya gets more scared n hides. She feels 3 of them going outside d factory. After some time, they came inside.

"Bhabhi, Zoya is not outside," came curly haired voice.

"Dis cannot happen. V need to find her @ any cost," said d braided haired woman.

"1^st v need to do d other work," came her dad's voice.

Zoya again felt 3 of them going outside d factory.

"Ammi," cried Zoya softly wid tears in her eyes.

Zoya remained hiding. After some time, she felt d factory burning. Zoya got scared n came out of her hiding place. She started walking here n there. Wen she walked some steps, she was caught 4m behind by someone. Zoya turned it to find d braided haired woman catching her 4m behind. Zoya was abt to scream but d woman kept a hand on her mouth. As d fire was hardly spread, d factory was still dark so Zoya still cud not properly see their faces. Her dad n curly haired woman comes there. Zoya struggles to free herself in vain. Zoya bits d woman's hand n frees her mouth.

"Abbu, u n these 2 bad women killed my ammi. I vl tell everyone," said Zoya.

Her dad slapped her hard on d face.

"Who u vl tell? Do u know anyone here?" asked her dad angrily, "U r not my daughter. All my love to ur ammi n u was a drama to get ur money. U vl hv to die now."

Zoya starts to scream n d braided haired woman holding her pulls her hair very hard n says angrily, "Stop screaming."

D braided haired woman pushes Zoya into curly haired woman n says, "U handle her for some time while deal outside."

Her dad n d braided haired woman leaves d factory. D curly haired woman keeps a hand on her mouth to stop her 4m screaming. Zoya struggles to get free making d woman angry twists her ear tightly.

"Stay still, girl," said d woman angrily.

After some time, her dad n her step-mother came.

"Wat to do wid her?" asked d curly haired woman.

"V sud leave here in dis fire to die," replied her step-mom.

D fire began to spread a little more. D curly haired woman pushed Zoya hard in a corner n she fell down.

"Now u vl burn in dis fire n die," said her dad n laughed wid d women.

They left d factory leaving Zoya. Zoya began crying in fear wid tears running down her cheeks. She began running here n there to find a way to go but d fire was spreading n she was getn scared n was unable to decide 4m where to go. 4m far, she sees her ammi getn burned n cries very badly.

"Ammi," she shouts loudly while crying.

Zoya kept walking to find a way while crying.

"Allah Miya, plz help me," prays Zoya while crying.

After some seconds, Zoya faints due to fire n smoke.

Zoya opens her eye to find herself in a room. She was surrounded by women.

"Beta, r u okay?"asks one of d woman.

"How am I here?" asks Zoya in confusion.

"Beta, u r in orphanage. A man brought u here teln us dat u were unconscious n wud hv been died in d fire if he had not been there," replied d 2^nd woman.

"Who is dat uncle?" asked Zoya innocently.

"Beta, v don't know," replied d 1^st woman n asked.

-----Flashback Ends-----

Zoya comes out of her thoughts.

"Don't now who was d man who saved me. Whoever he was was a very nice person who saved me 4m dying. But, now I hv to find my dad, his another wife n his sister," said Zoya.

Its evening. Scene changes in Ayaan's room in SM.

"Zingo Hotties," said Ayaan.

"Ah ha ha ah ha ha ah ha ha," said Humeira, Nikhat n Nuzhat 2gthr.

"Wat to plan for 2day?" asked Ayaan.

"Bhaijaan, y not v go for a drive in ur car in evening?" asked Nuzhat.

"Ya, v vl go in d evening," replied Ayaan.

"It's a very great idea," said Humeira.

"Bhaijaan, 2day v were shocked to see Najma wearing jeans n top in college. Wen v asked her abt it, she told us she vl wear wat she wants," said Nikhat.

"Wat?" asked Ayaan shockingly, "Has bhaijaan allowed it?"

"V asked her dat but she told us dat bhaijaan is not supposed to decide for her to wear n he vl never stop her 4m wearing wat she wants," replied Nuzhat.

"She even told us to stay away 4m her saying dat v usually never talk to her but v now came to her seeing her in jeans n top as if they saw an alien," said Humeira.

"It must be bhaijaan's New York wife Zoya's effect," said Ayaan.

"Ya, Najma was always friends wid Zoya," said Humeira.

"Wonder y bhaijaan agreed to marry dat girl? Dat girl is idiot n irritating," said Ayaan thinking how she hit him wid d can n stomped on his foot @ d cafe.

Scene changes to Zoya is driving on d road. She is wearing a aviator on her eyes. She stops near a park n asks some people abt some photos.

"No one is able to tell me abt these photos," said Zoya unhappily, "I need to know abt these photos to know abt these 3."

Zoya keeps d photos in her bag.

Ayaan who was in other car wid Nikhat, Nuzhat n Humeira sees Zoya in d park. He stops d car n comes out wid d girls. They r shocked to see her in a short outfit.

"Look, Zoya bhabhi is there," said Nikhat.

"She is wearing a short cloth," said Humeira.

"How come bhaijaan allows her to wear dis?" asks Nuzhat.

"Lets go n talk to her," said Nikhat.

He, Nikhat, Nuzhat n Humeira goes near Zoya. Zoya is shocked to see them. She looks @ their shocked faces.

"Y u all r look @ me wid shocked faces?" asked Zoya.

"Bhabhi, u still wear such clothes after marriage?" asks Nuzhat shockingly.

Zoya gets irritated @ her question n her calling her bhabhi'.

"So, u all were shocked due to dis as if it's a big deal. 1^st of all, there is no wrong in wearing such clothes n its not necessary dat one sud stop wearing such clothes after marriage," replied Zoya wid attitude, "And secondly, don't call me bhabhi. I am no longer ur bhabhi cuz I n Asad r on d way of getn divorced. V hv signed d 1^st divorce papers."

All 4 of them r shocked.

"Wat? Divorce?" asked Ayaan shockingly.

"Ya divorce," replied Zoya wid attitude n asked wid attitude, "Has ur bhaijaan not informed u all till now? Well, go n ask him. Now u all don't waste my time n irritate me."

Zoya goes in her car while others luks on shockingly. Zoya drives away.

"Bhaijaan is getn divorced? They r not even married for 15 days," said Nikhat shockingly.

"Dis mannerless girl has ruined our innocent's bhaijaan life," said Ayaan wid irritation.

"U saw her attitude? She must hv made our bhaijaan's life hell," said Nuzhat wid irritation.

Scene shifts to Zoya stopping @ d market to buy some fruits. As she was finished wid her shopping, she sees Dilshad standing. Dilshad has a faint smile while Zoya gets furious.

Precap:#Dilshad tries to talk wid Zoya sweetly but Zoya talks wid her rudely.

"Now wat u r planning against me, Dilshad aunty?" asked Zoya angrily.

"Zoya, u r getn me wrong. Plz, don't be angry wid me," replied Dilshad.

"Y sud not I be angry wid u?" asked Zoya angrily, "U trapped me wid ur sweet talks. I thought dat u r not like other mother-in-laws but u turned to be like them. U thought dat u can easily trap me cuz my family is in New York n I vl be able to meet them very less. But u r wrong, I vl no more let u n ur mannerless n heartless son spoil my life."

"Zoya beta, I hv not trapped u. I really loved u," said Dilshad.

"U never loved me, Mrs. Dilshad Ahmed Khan. If u had really loved me then u wud not hv got me married to ur son knowing very well how is. Wat I got after marrying Asad? Wud u hv gotten ur daughter Najma married to a man like Asad?" asked Zoya angrily.

Dilshad is shocked by her question not knowing wat to reply.

"Y u r quiet now?" asked Zoya angrily, "Ur silence gave d answer to my question. U wud never get Najma married to such a man cuz she is ur daughter while I was just a guest n stranger to u. U proved dat a mother-in-law can never become a mother n a daughter-in-law can never become a daughter. U only wanted ur benefit to get ur son married. Dats it. U never cared abt me n my feelings. U lured me into marrying ur son n ruined my life. I and Asad hv signed 1^st divorce papers n vl sign d other 2 divorce papers too."

Zoya goes 4m her angrily while Dilshad looks hurt. Razia n Shirin were watching d scene 4m a distance wid a smirk on their faces.

"Look Shirin, how ur sauten Dilshad is getn shouted by her own daughter-in-law. Her son Asad n her daughter-in-law Zoya r getn divorced," said Razia wid an evil smile.

"Now along wid her, her son too vl become divorcee," said Shirin wid an evil smile.

#In SM, Razia tells everyone she n Shirin saw in d market. She tells everyone dat Haseena does not even know abt Rashid hvng another wife n if she gets to know abt it then she vl be shocked to know Rashid hvng relation wid a family dat has his ex-wife, a daughter n a soon to be divorced son who married a NRI girl 4m New York who wears western clothes.