AsYa OS- It Was Just Another Day- 6/3/14

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

it was a cute, adorable, light hearted story written brilliantly..u r a wondrful writer..and special mention to dat proposal..it was smthng good dat i hav read recently

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: BeYourself

Hi Riddhi...
thank you so much darling for this amazing comment... 🤗
you have just made my day sweetheart 😳
thanks a lot!!!!
i am so so so glad that you liked it 😛
though i am not a Gujrati, but i understand it thoda thoda...
i am glad that you liked the concept 😃
will surely write more... 😛

P.S.- i was not able to read your FF, but now, that i am a bit free, i will surely read it and comment on it too 😃
take care 😛

I m glad i made ur day
Thats perfectly fibe, read wenever u have time
In noo jiffy
Wud b waiting
Bt seriously i just lovd it

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

I m glad i made ur day
Thats perfectly fibe, read wenever u have time
In noo jiffy
Wud b waiting
Bt seriously i just lovd it

thank you once again 😳🤗
do well in your exams..
all the best 😛

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akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Hey awesome OS 👏

I just loved it ❤️

This story is very beautiful ⭐️

YOu should write more Short story because this one is Amazing 🤗

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teja21

@teja21

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

so sweet

thanx fr d pm

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Radhika. | Rads.

@--Radhika--

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Awh this was such a cute OS. I love how you showed the flashbacks and then went back to present time!

Asad's proposal was so adorable! And confessions too! OMG.

Loved every bit of this OS. You are truly an awesome writer! Write more soon, great story.

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Oh Emm Gee!!
that was a flawless update..👏
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
the way uh represented the past nd the present was just amazing..
it was an unusual nd wonderful concept..loved it
aww Asad nd Zoya they r just too adorable..😳
their friendship, bond, care nd love for each other was beautifully described in this OS...
the best part was Asad purposing Zoya..his lines were too touchy..
but the most unexpected thing was that he was the one who initiated for the marriage😆
nywayz it was a incredible OS..let me tell A PERFECT OS!!

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Its awesome!!!!
Cute, sweet, innocent os!!!
Loved it
thanks 4 pm

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Parneet

@ParneetS

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

It was splendid :) honestly soo adorable <3

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: BeYourself

Hey bubble 😳😳
yup, it's me who has written all the romance 😆😆
very unlike me, isn't it?? 😆😆
thanks.. i am glad that you found me progressing 🤣
awww... 😳😳
shifting from present to fb without breaking the connection was the most difficult part for me, i am glad that i didn't ruin it.. 😆😆
if i tell you the truth, the engagement thing just came abruptly and wasn't planned at all 😆
why did you like the present track more bubba?? could you please explain?? 😳☺️
i think they had dinner that night 🤔🤣
will try updating my FF soon 😛
lot's of love,
ANKITA ❤️🤗