TAKE MEMR.KHAN.. an ASYA(kabhi) OS part 3 @P-21-18/3/14(16+) - Page 19

Originally posted by: jasminerose

OMG Kalyani, that was not just hot but haawwttt!!. Super Sexy. I was seriously trying to stay away from smut for a while but you tempted me, haha. But this one was really awesome.

I will get back to your other updates very soon. thanks for the pm.😊

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Ok That was really really well scripted.

I think there is a vast improvement from the first mature that you wrote.

I loved this the concept the shy Zoya but Zoya Darling he is your husband. Come ON!😆😛 Let him get his way and get naked for him. It is sexy.😳😃

I loved it Kalyani, I am pleasantly shocked.

Blind folds. Curtain hug, Text Msg. The Concept, the scenes, the dialogues the love making.

Simply Sensuous! Loved it Kalyani Darling!🤗

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

aww kals thank you so much for writing this part for me! you are so sweeet

you wrote it quiet well!

the way zoya was hiding was so cute 😆

and the later part was sooo... ☺️☺️☺️

I'm so sorry for replying so late!

compensation ke liye yeh lo -

This part was super hot akka☺️☺️☺️
Im sorry for commenting lately..
U beautifully penned this romantic 16 os 😳
I as shocked when i read zoya felt shy😲 😆 so she blindfold asad😳
Even i guess he can see her through that black handkey😆
Indeed a hot part☺️
Loved it to the core❤️
cute asya love making scene after that BNHH song... 👍🏼👍🏼
i just want to read more from u akka. Hope u will penned down more.. ..

will wait for my next PM😆