AsYa OS - THE GIANT FERRIS WHEEL-A LOVE STORY

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@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

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jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful!! Beautiful!! Beautiful!

Yes this was beautiful, outstanding, fantabulous.

I have various reasons for that which I will tell later.

Very realistic.

A story that I liked not just for its excellent writing but an amazing concept.

Just loved it Juliet. loved their journey from sex to love making. Very meaningful.

Their meeting at the coffee shop, she finding mumma's boy cute, their wedding night convo and the deed, the further flow of events took me along the entire journey and I was glued.

Oh my dear Zoya fell in love. Howsoever practical you might me, love just happens, and I am glad it did otherwise it would always have been another deal in life. I felt even Asad had fallen as well, it just took him time to acknowledge. Whatever, they finally expressed and reciprocated.

Their dailogues, monologues everything was amazing. Loved her conversation with the toast. Very cute.

Finally the kiss on the Giant wheel : BEAUTIFUL

Splendid piece of writing Juliet!! Superb!!

👏👏👏

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

Surprise Surprise!! I was about to write you today whenever you have time please write an OS/ really

and here we got one.

Yipee!!

Chalo will read and get back😊😃

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-RM-

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Posted: 11 years ago

I LOVED IT.

The starting was fun!
Cute Asad-Zoya 😳
But when Asad got busy. I felt So Bad 😳
I had tear in my eyes reading Zoya's misery their.
It seems like reality of many women's No love only Sex they have :-|

But as it Ends well All's well.
It was a Happy Reading 😊

What I din't like was the Note saying Butterflies are not ready 😆

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

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awesome update Di
this OS is just fab
this OS was very different n i liked this concept in which asya get married for their own reason which was very different
the Giant Ferris Wheel make me remembers the game Call of Duty one of mission
coffee shop meeting mummals boy zoa's PHD zt that instant zoya blushed asad travel freak was just very good
both thought their will never love eachother but zoya fall in love with asad n she wanted asad to be like other husbands but asad didnt pay heed
zoya's taunt n remark b4 going to london worked for zoya as he came back n reduced his travelling time n gone for a ride on the the Giant Big Ferris Wheel where their kissed n confessed love for each other
dilshad here was very differnt as she also was going to attend a late night party... Dillu is modern here haha
happiness was no less when asad said he would travel very less n want some time now n zoya got what she wanted 7 days b4...
the words u described n used were just womenastic... U always use grt words to describe ur works...
Thanks for giving this OS despite u r having exams

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Gourav

@Shubh007

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome os...👏

Just love it...👍🏼

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Yeahhh u gave us an AsYa OS...

Will read it nw n get bck to u later on...

Okk... After reading the whole OS i am speechless...

Cant really tell u how i loved Asad n Zoya first meeting their marriage their cute romance n most probably their SUHAAG RAAT... It reminded me of The SEVEN which all of us are waiting for... Asad was a typical boring husband first n at later became the romantic one... N Zoya is such a darling... I mean she married Asad to do her Phd... Welll she actually did it but in MAkiNg LoVe wiTh ASAD...

The ending was really very lovely...

Now plsss also update Butterflies n give us one more... If possible try to write such os on regular interbals for us...

LOVE

~JAZ~

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Juliet..
you know what, i read this OS twice... i mean i can read it again and again, but now for the time being i read it twice 😳😆
it was so so beautiful...i just loved every bit of it!!!
Zoya had a different motive behind this marriage, but she couldn't help herself from falling in love with Asad...
Love Just Happens!!!! 😳😳
and i just loved it 🤗

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shee6_sarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

wowww!!!!!grttt yaaa!!luvd ds 1!!!!!!!brilliant Os Bt I dnt get 1thng????whn did zoya say ds to asad the giant Ferris??? I wnt agn bk to read bt dnt find???or is it in d first part whr zoya is spkng to hrslf or to asad???????