Where to go without her!! Chapter 6- The Big Party..-updated on pg31 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ruby794


Yea a little suspense but better at the end. Will continue soon 😊

k thn.. Ll be waiting 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting start
Asad got a nightmare abt zoya kidnapped by akram
He was scared abt zoya not with him
Continue soon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks guys for liking my SS 😊 will update soon on part two..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ruby794

There was no possibility of taking a walk that day. It was July in Bhopal, India. The day felt as if the heat outside would melt anything that came in the way. Of course, I had to get ready for work. I needed my wallet so I called Zoya, my wife, who is also my first love.

Asya already married! Yeah! Toh romance full on hosaktha hain!😉

"Zoya where is my wallet?" I asked.

Wallet? What about his heart?😆

I yelled her name five times but she didn't respond. I could feel the heat crawling up my body as I searched for Zoya. Suddenly I heard Ayan's voice. He always comes to my house in the mornings and we go to work together.

"How are you Asad Bhaijaan?" Ayan asked.

Whoops, I completely forgot to introduce you to Ayan. He is my step-brother but our relationship goes way beyond words can describe.

"Zoya is nowhere in the house. I am getting worried." I fidgeted

"What are you saying Bhaijaan! How is that possible?" Ishaan asked

"I don't know." I said.

We both were getting worried. My phone suddenly rang.

😲Zoya nahi milrahi! O god, I hope she is okay!!

"Hello Asad, remember me." said Akram on the other end.

I knew Akram since college. For some reason, I always felt negative vibes from him and as a result, I always tried my best to keep my distance even though we would consistently see each other at social gatherings.

"Zoya is with me." His voice sounded sinister; he hung up the phone, abruptly. I got worried, hoping she was ok. Zoya was kidnapped by Akram. Thoughts came rushing into my mind. Why would Akram commit such an act? Why would he have taken Zoya?

Already hate akram!!😡 How dare he take zoya from asad?!?! Ab toh asad full on mar pitai karage!!🤣

I started brainstorming possible places where Akram could have taken Zoya. The phone rang again.

"Come to my farm house." said Akram.

Ayan and I got in the car and rushed towards Akram's farmhouse in Indore. The road

was barren, and the farm house seemed miles away. The journey was never ending.

"We are halfway there Bhaijaan." Ayan said.

"I can only image of Zoya right now and nothing else." I told him.

"Don't worry, we will find her and take her back with us." He assured me.

Finally, I felt content as I read "Welcome to Indore." My heart was racing as we approached the farm house. I felt a sense of excitement as I knew I was only few miles away from brining Zoya back. The thoughts of her beautiful long hair, her pretty brown eyes, her stunning looks, and more importantly, the beautiful memories we shared made me miss her even more.

Waha pe zoya kidnap hochuki hain, aur yeh apni majnu giri dekha raha hain!😆 Always the lover boy of zoya!

As we reached the front door I could sense she was in the house. The farm house had no sense of hominess attached to it. I saw no family pictures of Akram, no flower vases or paintings. The couches were covered with dust and the spiders seemed to have certainly made Akram's farm house their own. There were cobwebs everywhere.

Eww. Are kamse kam akram ko apni jaga achi rakni chaiye thi. Nahi toh jab doctors use pick karne ange, toh voh khud bimar par jaenge!!😆

"How will you go in without your Bhai?" Akram suddenly appeared from behind.

Akram was holding Ayan tightly so he wouldn't attack.

"You eventually came here to get my Zoya." said Akram.

WTH? Oye ye teri zoya kab hui? Ek thappad marongi, tera muh seeda 360 ghum jayga!!

"How could you do this to me? What have I done to you? Where is Zoya and what have you done to her and what do you mean by my Zoya? She is mine and will remain mine forever" I demanded.

Possessive asad! Me likey!

"She always gave importance to you when we were in school. I loved her, but she loved you. I am sure you figured out by now I am not a big fan of you." he declared

Nobody is a big fan of you and zoya never gave you importance because you are a creeper!!

From his response, I felt even more worried because I was thinking about Zoya. First, I had to set Ayan free. I skid to kick Akram's legs. I knew his legs were his weak point as he was limping for about few years now. He fell on the ground and Ayan was set free.

Action toh solid hai boss!!😆

I grabbed Ayan's hand, "Let's go."

As we were heading towards the door, I heard Zoya scream. Ayan and I ran towards the room upstairs. Then all of a sudden the door opened, Zoya ran towards me and hugged me tight. In her eyes, I saw the horror Akram put her through. I felt so relieved holding her in my arms, I never felt so elated in my life.

Yaha pe unki band bajne wali hain, aur yeh toh hug karahai hain! Sach much mein pagal hain!

"ASAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Akram screamed

Chilane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Pyaar se bologe, tab bhi voh sun lega!

Akram was coming towards us with a rod. He was about to hit us, so I pushed Zoya and we both fell to the ground.

From the distance, Ayan indicated to me he is about to call the cops and I nodded.

"We need you come to this farm house quickly as our lives are in danger." Ayan hesitated.

Just in time the police arrived and arrested Akram.

"Asad, I will not spare you." Akram said in a furious voice.

Pehle jail se toh bahar nikal ja!! Phir spare ware ki baath karna!!

"If you try to harm Asad in any way Akram I will not spare you. I suffered enough and I will not let my love go through the same feeling. I will protect him forever. You better back off and stay away from us." Zoya threatened confidently.

Wah!! Asad's wild cat is on fire!!

"No one can ever separate us, no one can. I love you." Zoya told me.

"I love you more than you can imagine." I replied

It began to thunder and lighting, the rain fell on us as we kissed.

The kiss of passion! Muah!

A loud noise woke me up. With a sudden jolt, I realized this was just a dream. The noise was my alarm clock to wake me up for work. Zoya was sitting next to me on the bed, her hands rubbing my hair. I pulled her close to kiss her.

Aww! Dream tha? Lekin mujhe toh sach mein akram ki pitai karwani thi. Chalo it is okay but I still hate akram!! Vaise aapka ye dream wala twist bahoth hilarious tha!!🤣


Mere comments red mein hain!!
Chapter one was amazing and hilarious!!
Please continue soon!!
Aapki chutki!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tareyforever333


Mere comments red mein hain!!
Chapter one was amazing and hilarious!!
Please continue soon!!
Aapki chutki!


Haye kudiye tune toh mujhe mar hi dala tere comments se. I am dying of laughter here 🤣!!!!!
Teri Baji 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Marne warne ki baath kabhi maath karna! Nahi toh mein baath nahi karongi!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tareyforever333

@baji

Marne warne ki baath kabhi maath karna! Nahi toh mein baath nahi karongi!

Okay Boss 😳 nahi karugi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ruby794

Okay Boss 😳 nahi karugi

Good girl!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice start to your SS! It sounds really interesting and I loved the concept. Stupid Akram he is such a🤬🤬 ! Almost every story I read usually the villain's name is Akram! 🤣


Anyway, back to the story. The kiss was sweet too, perfect time for rain! 🤪 Very nice SS so far, I would love to read what happens next. Glad everything was only a dream! 😆😆😆


Please PM me for any future updates Ruby, and continue soon please! 😳😳
Edited by --Radhika-- - 11 years ago

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