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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#341

The end?
But at least tanveer and Ayaan's true identity was revealed..

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ankitabaran

@ankitabaran

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#342

Amazing...but it was last chapter plz plz write epilogue too that how zoya asad share their relationship in future zoya asad got married or not etc...thanks for pm...

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DancingBell

@DancingBell

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#343

This is not fair... 😒 An abrupt ending...but It was nice...waiting for next ff...

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#344

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safa/fuii

@Splash-ASYA

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#345

it didnt end here dude...
i mean i thought u will give a goood ending...
this isnt fair.. it was a reallyy quick ending... write one more part...
n then an epilouge!! pleeeaaaseee...

-fuii-

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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#346

You ended so early. Wanted to read more.

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#347

that ended soon and abruptly! I believe it could've been polished up better!

and nothing changed I mean Asad continued to be the pedophile that he is and ZOya continued to be the innocent soul who eventually fell in love with a 30-years-old man!

Anyway that's your story and you did a good job at it!

The twist with Ayaan was very surprising! I loved it when he killed Tanveer (Oh god, am I destructive or what? 😆)

Thanks for writing such a different unique and bold story! It was a pleasure reading it! 😊

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 31

Posted: 11 years ago

#348

Imp Note-

Hello to all readers of this story, I know all of you are not happy with this abrupt ending. Neither am I , but i am sorry its just that I was feeling really low after thinking and writing because I knew I am not gonna get much response. And it takes really hard from my side to do that. I had planned it differently , wanted to explore the intricacies of Asya's relationship in a detailed manner but the lack of response is not making me happy enough to cont. It.

So I thought of ending it , I have seen the views its above 19000, but only few comments those who are reading from the beginning silent readers are being silent only.

And after my work I think ,write & post to get a desired amount of response but in vain.

May be this concept was not gud or my writing has flaws , so I better shut it down rather than bore u all.

I am sorry for my ranting but I am feeling sad. May be I am a newbie in writing here.

I don't know what more to say.

Thnx to those who supported till now.

xoxo.

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#349

u shud continue... but is there anything we can do to make you feel better cuz i know it sucks when u r new somewhere nd try smthing different... but lack encouragement...

if u wud ever continue do PM me...! cant comment much till 26th... exams...