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fanraya

@fanraya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#641

Abosolutely amazing, touched my heart, I am completely 🤗 You are really an amazing writer, so beautiful, Zoya and Asad's conversation was just so lovely, great work Ankita.. Can't wait for next update.. I am totally speechless..

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chco

@chco

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#642

awesome update

loved it

update soon

thanks for pm

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#643

" I do love him Zoya, no matter how hard I try to hate, but I can't.. I do love him."

"Who Mr Khan? Say it!" Zoya said.

"Abbu.." Asad said after a few minutes of awkward painful silence.

And he cried shaking with sobs, even as he tried to hold back. But Zoya egged him on, forcing him to emit all that he had suppressed for years. Helping him to deal with a phase of his life that had made him the man he was, so that he could leave it behind him and move on to a better, peaceful life, maybe with her, or so she hoped.

Main ro rahi hoon... THIS IS SO SO SO SO VERY BEAUTIFUL that I cant keep from crying. :'(

Y SO PERFECT ANKU :'( Y? :'(

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#644

amazing...just wow!! asyaan were wonderful...especially ayaan...
n zoya...she's a gem...so full of life yet very mature...
i loved each line she said to asad...that last scene was spot-on!!
continue soon

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#645

added -

I dont remember precisely if i have said this before, but I'll say again ---> UR FF SHOULD BE MADE INTO A DAILY. The society badly needs it. 👏

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 11 years ago

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kanika

@kank_dah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#646

loved it .great understanding between the brothers nd lovely to see asad finding peace with the help of zoya.indeed zoya has become very important for the khans.continue soon

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#647

awsm update.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c...

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amruta04

@amruta04

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#648

beautiful update Ankita..😊
how do u write soo well...👏
emotional update...loved Asad n Ayaan bonding
loving this side of zoya..missed Aahana today
waiting eagerly for next update
do continue soon
take care and thanks for the pm..

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Ishaqzaadi

@Ishaqzaadi

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#649

The Ayaan and Asad moment was so emotional.. :( I'm so glad Asad did go in the end..

Also loved the little moment between Najma and Zoya! Even on the show, I used to love their bonding :'( so it's great to read this in your fanfic, which I believe is a far more brilliant attempt at telling the story the show was meant to tell!

Really, really enjoying the FF and how it's all progressing. you've always been a great writer; your artistic and creative talent is immense, but I really think this FF is bringing out the best in you. The story is so gripping and emotional, and you've captured the essence of the story and its characters so well.. I always feel like I'm actually watching it, not only reading!

The AsYa sequence was just.. Beautiful. The way they're coming to understand each other.. Sigh. I love them. :(

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#650

Beautifully Written Update Ankie!
It was super duper awesome.
I really love the way Zoya handles Asad n make him eat n the way she leaned on his shoulder n hugged him was amazing.
I love how the story's progressing.
I jst can't wait to read what
happens next.