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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#631

That was Superb,Amazing,Mind-blowing,Awesome Update..Loved it alot..You've written everyone's emotion very Beautifully..Superb..

Asad-Ayaan convo was AMAZING..

Loved the way they both fed each-other..

Loved how Zoya made Asad realize that he LOVES his Abu..

She made him cry for his lost..Lovely..

"she caressed his back gently, he let his tears fall unrestrained, and he cried, cried in the arms of a girl he hadn't known for more than a few months, but who had suddenly become someone he knew he could depend upon. A girl he didn't know would become an indispensable part of his life."

Loved these lines..

Once again SUPERB update..

Continue soon..

Thnx for PM..

-Mariam-

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madina12

@madina12

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#632

Awesome update as always...
Tis is really a emotional part...Pity asad,ayaan,dilshad & najma over the loss..
Love the bond between the brothers & ayaan really understand asad...
Even najma bonding wif asad is awesome...She is only worried how will her brother go through all tis...
Yes finally asad & zoya...Juz love the mutual understanding they have for each other & i cant wait to see them getting closer & more dependent with each other...
Not forgettig the cutie pie aahana...more antics & cuteness from her

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krati

@krati5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#633

how can u describe such tough emotions, which i never thought would be there on first place & then, explain them so easily... brilliant

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#634

Both the parts are beautifully written.

Loved the way zoya handled everything so maturely and consoled asad.

Amazing.

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#635

WOW! u write amazingly beautiful.I mean every sentiments,every dailogues were as if its made for that particular scene.no words can suffice to express how superbly u write.asyaan,asya,zoma each one of them were unique in their own sense.finally asad got wat he gave to ayan,a shoulder to cry.plz plz plz plz pm me

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#636

such a beautiful n emotional update it is ...
luvd d part of asad n zoya in garden ...
update soon
thnx for pm

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vinita459

@vinita459

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#637

Good update as usual. It was emotional but it was needed :(. Zoya understand Asad and his family so well. I hope when the time comes , he also does the same for her. Finally he admitted that he loved his father :). Like I said earlier too, you write beautifully and I always look forward to your updates :)