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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82

i am here to unres... after a very hectic and tight day...

at the end of day... oh yes... i love doing research... just dont ask me on which... let it be a open secret...

to your update...

the shortest you have ever written i guess...

i just loved their stolen moments. amid the family..the dining table was fun to watch.. . and conveniently get caught too..

and your purposefully added the cousins.. to fill in the room...😡😡

only they know that their hormone secretion way above the normal... the anticipation and the build up... my poor asya...yet so cute...

and the outing... asad got her the boot... so sweet him.. and ofcourse the kite... do u remember in the beginning we discussed about kite.. and u said it was inspired from some book u read i guess..

ofcourse as usual zoya takes the initiation.. the stolen kiss... and once again.. zafar turns up.. even in the form of rehan... let just say to show the growth in their relationship...


but why did zoya didnt tell him about zafar before hand... bcoz he will come to know at one time or other.. right... i could see she is worried.. but her knowingly hiding the fact didnt sit well with me..

but asad.. was commendable... i trust you... so cool... and atlast... they are lying almost naked.. ineach other arms...

for zoya mighty seven... and we are just waiting


did i miss something... will come back later...

and you did tell dilshad caught them doing... but looks like whole family caught them...

and what is the answer for the last question of yours.. where they do it with the whole family...

i thought... asad lock themselves in the bathroom😆


as awesome.. as always...

love
here is the fireplace for their mighty seven.. just as my token of lust//love






this is for you...😳






Thanks Kal,
I don't remember about drawing inspiration from any book but I could forget.
Right now I don't remember reading any book like that. I fly kites. STILL!😃
We have a kite flying bay close to the docking yards of a receding island, Close to my house.
I do that with friends and my man at least once every month. The coffee shop sells the best breakfast buffet.😛
My kite is like a paper plane, green, blue and red.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Hey Juliet...

First of all ..your exams are still due right ?? So why did you update before that ?😲

Coming to the update...

Asad remembers her each and every word... The day she had blurted out in the pub room I guess about her wish to fly a kite.. Asad is so very adorable to make her dream come true and also getting her trekking shoes... 😊

Loved their text messages... and later the entire gang behind them not allowing them to enjoy their private moments.. 😊 Well.. naughty and mischievous family like that is always adorable... 😉

Ayaan and his ways of irritating his bro.. what a song selection ? 🤣

So Asad has booked a farm house and the warning which Dilshaad mentioned about the weather.. Do they land up in any trouble due to that ??

Rehaan is Zafar's brother.. and the bomb was placed at the right moment.. The fear which Zoya went through till Asad joined her and assured his trust on her, her shouting which followed... beautifully written.. 👏👏



Hey Devika,
Why did I update? Because I am a nut case. I still had the exam but I didn't want to study anymore. The exam went terrible and I will redo it on MOnday.
I didn't like the updated chapter too. I just wrote mediocre rubbish. Oh well!
I think I am losing the writers touch anyways.😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BeYourself

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unres...

Hi Juliet!!!

thanks for updating earlier than promised...it was such a treat 😳

each and every word of this update was just too amazingly scripted...👏
and the trust that Asad showed on Zoya this time was just great!!👍🏼

The girls and boys teamed up to be an obstacle in their love filled moments😡 😆😆

but, where there's a will, there's a way too...
Good going Asad Miya!! 😉😆

now i would eagerly wait for Sunday to come!!

still two more days to go!! 😆

all the best for your exam.. do well 😛

lots of love
Ankita 🤗

Haha! thanks Ankie.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Finally the update is here yay.

Dinner time will get back soon😃
Res
Unres'

Well I was having Pizza for dinner and quoting your words it didnt lift my spirits as much as your update😆
It was a very delightful yet electrifying update. The spark is ignited. Time to put things on FIRE
Loved their stolen moments on the table. Footsie is the like the sexiest thing.😉
OMG did the entire family witness their makeout? Mehnaz was fun with the teasing.
Texting was amusing.

Loved the play of words all throughout as usual. You have a way with words. It gives a unique combination of hot and humorous dialogues. That is commendable.

Oh the kite flying scene was so full of affection in all terms😉. Loved it
So we are moving to fulffing Zoya's other fantasies as well.

I am so glad that Asad didnt bother much over Zafar this time. Is their something up again as he was talking to Prasad for so long?
OK if I would have my pick it would be pole dance.😆
I love the pace of your story. How things take turn and then move to what is the most desirable. You let them find their ways and I love it. I love it when man knows how to get what he wants. Quick decisions and arrangements made and they finally have some lone time. Love Asad for this.
The Super seven are ahead and I am so excited😉😆
Amazing update. Juliet, you are just fantastic 😃
Will be waiting eagerly for next update.

Oh Jas,
You chadao me on Chaane Ka Zhaad.
😛 Oh I pick strip tease baby!😛 from Mr.Khan of course. Fur and Mr.Khan, - Yah Allah!
mera dimag!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Finally updated
wow gr8 superb part
asad and zoya are awesome with their chemistry
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

Thank you!
Much love Dear!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Juliet, how could you ask us to wait till Sunday now.. Sorry sorry, I meant how could you leave Asad and Zoya hanging/on the edge till Sunday.. Its going to be a very long wait..
Loved the update, and the fiery Asad..

Haha! Azraa01,
Not you too! Hey Bagwan! Allah Miyan I corrupted my readers.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Hahah loved this update

They couldn't even kiss in peace lol but wow Asad and Zoya ran off to the farm and now they'll have 2-3days alone

I just loved the update

Thank you so much dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

It was an Asyalicious update Juliet. Loved all the teasing, the stolen moments and the want and need the two show and feel for eachother. Loved the update.

Waiting for Sunday.

Thank you Dear. I love stolen moments too.😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

The trust factor has made an appearance! Fantastic! 👏

It was a delightfully beautiful chapter! 😳

Not my best work Dear. It was rushed.
But I will take whatever comes my way.
you are too generous but I hope you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tamara27

Omg, you're going to make us beg for the 7, right?!

So not fair - I'm literally feeling their pain haha! 😆
And W*F with the siblings?! Wanted to smack them!
We coulda had some really sexy makeout session to heat up that freezing weather 😳

Well done on another brilliant chapter to one of my favourite stories 😉


Begging might help😛. but nah I better make Asad beg instead. naked!

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