AsYa SS- A Dark Obsessive Love CHPT.6 on p.49 19/5/14 - Page 9

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Originally posted by: sowmy18

Liked it?

i absolutely loved it!

but im still confused though...

i just want to read the thoughts going on in asad's brain...what will he always be thinking...god he is highly unpredictable!

how torturous it must be for zoya in the fear of not knowing what changes his mind in a matter of seconds!

is he having multiple personality disorder?

And i just want to mention one more thing...

i liked the paranoid asad scene in the update but i felt like it lacked your usual intense writing style...

it should have been much more intense...isn't it?

For me it was just too fast...his reaction...atleast i felt like that...

sorry if i offended you in any way...it was just my opinion...

All in all the update was fantabulous..a much more deeper look into asa's character...

waiting for the update...😳

What does asad wants... he himself is confused I think

Wow!!! Superb...update...

Really ???what is the matter with this man??...
One time he is all lovey dovey and the next minute he lashes out...

...or else at first he lashes out and the next moment he says I can't live without you,zoya...he is a jerk!!!!!

I can't even imagine the life of that poor soul there...

I suggest that instead of running away...she can talk with him...express her desires...and then if he still behaves like a jerk...
Then the best option is run away...but after that zoya shouldn't be the submissive one...but she should be strong and the one with a power...

Thanks for the pm

Fantastic part

Continue soon

Like this new shade of Asad. But I feel that Zoya is too weak, she cant make up her mind!

Awesome update
Asad is so possessive & mad abt zoya
He hurt zoya in his madness.
Curious to know what made asad like that
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

Firstly I know my reply is late and I apologise for that Secondly...