AsYa SS- A Dark Obsessive Love CHPT.6 on p.49 19/5/14

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Superb ss
Wonderful
Nw concept
Beautifully writen
Plz pm me for d nxt part

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CrazyPatel1

@CrazyPatel1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

An amazing Story !!!
Loved it lived it please update.

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Hoor

@HooriAsadMalik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Its awesome!
Please update soon!

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

This is an impressive piece of work! I absolutely love when Asad is human. Most of what I read he is too perfect. Even when he's not, he is. His shortcomings and flaws are made out to be acceptable. But this. This just come to show that he's like any other ordinary man..His flaws are flaws. And his shortcomings are not justified in such a manner that you completely be blinded by it.

Yes, I'm aware that his behaviour has a valid justification. But thank you for making it okay to not like him right now. Not that I really do, I kinda like him being too attached to Zoya when I actually hate him for being over-possessive. I know, I'm so twisted.

Can she please wear the red saree eventually? I don't know if this is a humble request or an outright demand. What's his deal with that anyway? Okay, I kinda know..still wanted to just voice it.

Sorry to have commented now..but better late than never, right?

Hee...update! And make Asad bleed. OKAY DON'T! I didn't mean that.

Mwahhh for Zoya!

p/s I read ALL your ongoing stories...AHMAYZING. Shall make it a point to drop a comment whenever I can.

And mwah for you, for writing so well!!

ooking forward to the next part!!

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Unresed on the first page. 😳 Idk when I'll do the other two spots, I'm sleepy...even though it's not even 5pm yet here. 🥱 😆

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Okay, unresed on page 9. One more to go! :D

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Last on page 14! Finally all done! :D

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Hoor

@HooriAsadMalik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

When r u updating?
update soon plzzz!
Here I'm dying out of frustration...
PLZZZ. UUUPPPODDDAAATTTEEE
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