Asya FF: Zindagi ka Safar( Life's a journey) CHP 5 Page 109

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akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Yaay dedicated to me tooo
Aww thank u aapi!!!! 🤗
Asad hates Rashid!!!
Rashid doesn't listen to dadi!!😕
Dadi hates Dilshaad & Asad!!!😡
Tanveer & Dadi conspiring!!!😲
Ayaan staying with them !!!
Is there any bonding b/w Asyaan or they hate eachother!!!!
Dilshaad didn't leave Rashid even after he married for second tym!! 😡
Does love makes us so helpless?? 😕
Hmmm interesting!!! 😈
Tanveer Asad 's fiancee!!!!! Zoya & Houdah 's scene was funny!!
! 🤣🤣
AsYa 's new journey to start!!!

Thanks 4 pm Aapi!!!
Thanks 4 dedication!!
Update next part soon as u knw I will b inactive from next month

Hey my little sis you are welcome 🤗

Thank you so much for this comment 😃

Yes everybody hates everybody 😆

I don't really know about Ayan yet because i will not used him in the first update i think about that later😕

In Dilshad case yes it make her helpless

I'l update very soon 🤗

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI
res
unres
soo sorry
i'm hell late
chapter is awesome dear👏
asad hates rashid
dadi hates dilshad and i think asad too
tanveer and dadi planning against asad
tanveer is asad's fiance🤢
lots of relevation in one update😆
zoya's part was hilarious😆😉
wanted to read more😳😉
cont soon lazy😉😆

Hey don't be sorry it's nothing😃

Awww thank you so much🤗

LOL hates Asad too🤢😆

Yes she is his fiance😛

There is a lot of revelation only because it's the first update and i want that people understand a little because i will used all that later😃

Awww i'll update very soon 😉

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
it was so wonderful !!
tannu is asad's fiance!!! arrggghh!!
and zoya's scene was hilarious!!
continue soon

Awww thank you so much 🤗

LOL yes but don't worry we will not see her in the first parts😆

I'll update very soon 😃

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Amna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Mango

This is an amazing Start to a beautiful story

👏

loved it

😃😃😃

cant wait for Asya cute fights ... i love those nok jhoks ...

I hate that Dadi ... and ewww Tanveer is there tooo ... hate her

😡😡😡

now be a dear and continue fast ok ... love u so so so so much

😊😊😊

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: VindhyaMounika
Awesome one...
Very well written..
Thanks for PM...

Thank you so much 🤗

I'll update soon 😃

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: indu333
i loved the update...😊
dadi and tanveer😡
waiting for the journey to start...
pls update soon...

Thank you so much 🤗

I'm glad to know that you loved it 😳

The journey will start very soon 😃

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: divya_asya
Hey nice start
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

Thank you so much 😃

I'll update very nice 😊

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: hottytotty
ah that was awesome
i loved reading it

Thank you so much for this comment 😃

I'll update very soon 😊

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Nice update

Tanveer is Asad's fianc... Not happy about that.

Cant believe Dadi is so evil here.

Thank you for the pm

Thank you so much 😃

LOL don't worry about that it's an Asya story 😉

I'll update very soon 😊

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: riddhi1206
Nice start my moinzi di
Great one
Poor dilshad
Ofo yaah bhi tanveer
Love zoya's entry part
Asad is worried abt her
Soweet
I m sorry coz of exams i m giving u short comments
Plz bear wid me
But promise once exam over
Lambe wale pakka
Luv u mah moinu do
Thanks fuh d pm
Update soonish