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aashiqua

@aashiqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#871

fari..dat was awesomee..what made u thnk its nt good..it may b diffrnt frm ur previous chapters..yes it is ..becoz its a new chapter dealing with new emotions and realizations...and i realy dnt knw wat happnd in d forum i jst cntinue readng d works of talentd writers here...and i wanna tell this ..donot let someones comment which donot worth a reply make u feel a little low when u have lot of lovely loyal readers who shower their love upon you ...love u ...take care..best wishes for exams

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@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#872

Res !

Unres!

Thanks for the mention Dear, Anytime! You weave the story with every update so skillfully.

I feel like throwing Asad in a washing machine.

I loved the chapter. It was all there for me. But I am totally frustrated.

This Tanveer and the ice cream talk - feels like Tanveer here could be a child. Or a child's mum whom Asad has grown fond of.

More detailed comment later! I got to go now.

Keep up your great work, yes this was borderline of another master piece. No complaints, I really enjoyed the read.

Hugs.

Juliet

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Shiyamala

@Shiyamala

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#873

Smiley there is no reason to thank because I know you are a good writer and noone has the right to do that to someone who works every hard to give her best. I will always love your updates no matter how they turn out... you know why? Because you are the one writing them. I will say this as many times as you want 'YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER AND YOU BETTER NOT DOUBT THAT!' The best writer is the one who is most unpredictable on their plots and I was not expecting that visa letter or Tanveer. So that means that even if Mr.Khan wants Zoya to stay...she wont be able to😭 plus now that this Tanveer is entering who knows what going to happen. I am so glad that Asad and Zoya are opening up to each other. Thanks for the post and acknowledging me. That has never happened before and I feel sooo special. Thank you smiley for making my day.😉

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Sanjhari

@Sanjhari

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#874

It was awesome update

Loved the emotional turmoil asad is going through

Finally he has started making 2+2

Hope he learn the fact soon...

Was waiting for the punch during zaroon asad Convo...😉

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DancingBell

@DancingBell

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#875

Let me tell u after reading ur introduction I thought this part will be a filler...but u nailed it yaar...Very nice,emotional part...And tanveer's entry...waiting for next update..but focus on ur exams and do well...all the best...

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#876

Finally u updated after such a long time...

Loved the way u showed Asad emotional turmoil...

Thought i would see some action punch btw Asad n Zaroon...

But it was nicely written...

So Tanu managed to make an entry in ur ff also...

Hope she is nt that evil as we see her.. Or is she a source to makr Zoya jealous...

Now plss update on regular...

Waiting for next part...

~JAZ~

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#877

Nice update...

If words and proximity doesn't work, jealousy most certainly will!! I hope :-)

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#878

Fari.. After reading each chapter.. It makes me eager to read more.. 😊

Bechari Zoya.. She is going through the Jealousy feeling now.. I guess Tanveer will be a small child whom Asad met in the Park.. 😊

The first scene.. Asad is such a dumbo in matters of heart...He told her to delay her flight and their small talk that followed where he got to know that she does not feel him to be a akdu but a better person was so very sweet... 😊

So his friend Saad's wife is better now.. and the conversation about love and his question if she believes in love and destiny and his question about if she will find somebody else later and her answer which followed was beautifully written.. 😊

Zoya's conversation with Zaroon was cool.. Best Friends are for this reason to give you comfort and the letter made her more drained...😭

Asad's warning to Zaroon to stay away from her.. I thought we will get Asad hitting Zaroon.. but never mind this was too good... 😊

Asad got to see the letter and understood the reason behind Zoya's tears.. 😭 Zoya held on to hsi shirt and her words in sleepy state was lovely.. 😊

. He wondered how perfect life would be if he woke up like this every morning.

He shook his head. What was he thinking? What will Zoya think if she knew he was thinking like this about her? He mentally smacked himself and told himself to focus.

Mr. Buddu Ahmed khan just let her know and you will be surprised.. When will this guy realize his love for her and her love for him ???

Please update soon Fari and Thanks for giving wonderful update again.. 👏👏👏

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Luckyforever

@Luckyforever

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#879

very nice
update frequently please ...

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#880

Really lovely, I do t know but I am getting angry with Asad now, he is being so insensitive, how can he not see Zoe's feelings, I am really upset, I think Zoe should leave him ASAP, and let h I'm suffer.He should be restless without her, he will it realize her value unless she leaves him, How I wish she books the ticket and leaves that day itself. anyway beautiful story, love it, Please get Tannu out ASAP, I really can it stand her in the drama or n the story. eagerly waiting for the next update..😊

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