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..Breeze..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

It feels so good to read you posts.. great work! Missed your writings a lot!

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_Blessy_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Keep writing u do good work ...

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: risingsea101
Oh My Lord, how long has it been?!😲
Reading an Ankie OS after ages
I loved it, brilliant OS
Keep writing babe :P

FAR, how are you?

Yes kind of LONG. 😆

VERY LONG.

Thank you so much Buddy 🤗

Your comments makes me feel better always 😳 😆

Originally posted by: fun_games
Good one Ankie! How are u dear😊
Long time no see 😊

Extremely Tired. 😆

Am here :) Just a pm away!

Take care :)

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
very nice..😊

Thank you so much <3

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
missed u!!
just like its name...it's perfect...adorable!!!

THANK You dear! I missed you all too. :)

By chance if you guys miss me too much, just pm me am always here :D

Originally posted by: afsuu

Thank you so much Sautelli 🤗

Originally posted by: ...Arshaya...
beautiful

Thank you so much <3

Originally posted by: aashiqua
cute os..perfect..it
reflects d true life situation

Yes it is realistic. Whatever i write, i keep try to keep it grounded. So is this one! Thank you so much <3

Originally posted by: .LilGreenRobot.
1 day late and 11 pages are all gone 🤔

Isnt it freaking awesome to be still famous even on a HIATUS! 😎

Story kaisa tha? 😆

Originally posted by: shonajain
finally anku
cute n adorable os
awww wali bilkul

Thank you shona jan! 🤗

I am yet to write your Demand, but i will sometimes later, or sooner! I promise :)

Originally posted by: Amulya9
perfect just perfect..loved it...u beautifully narrated everything from Zoya's angle...n last paragraph was superb...one little smile of AAK will make Zoya 2 forget everything.. 😳

Exactly, that is known as Asad's effect on Zoya 😆

The ASAD EFFECT 😆

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti
loved it!!! 👍🏼

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: Oldestfan
Ankie! Just beautiful! I love second person narrative! And your language in this one... Lyrical! I left every word! Bravo! 👏

Thank you thank you thank you so much dii! I cried for 3 days while i wrote it down. Abet i feel better now :D

Originally posted by: ...SankaDevi...
Ankie where have you been?!?

I have been to London to see the Queen. 😳 😆

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 11 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: ras224
10 pgs already😲...aww my baby is still so popular here😛 Haan jii 😉 😆 Even i am kindaa very shocked 😆
i miss ur posts...not dat i watch da show anymore bt those were golden days whn u used 2 mk 5-6 posts a day aur PMs ki barsat kar dete...sigh!!! 😭 now work as sucked me into it. I soon will, all depends on my interest getting back on the TV right 😆 which is kindaa IMPOSSIBLE 😆
reading it 4rm zoya's angle actually made da whole thing cuter😉 YES. it is. Asad is a sea, Zoya is a lake compared to him, meaning she can be easily expressed 😆
my bechara bz asad😳 jahahahaha 🤣
kitno dini baad i read da words woh actually❤️ Well 😭 🥺
on a whole it ws a sweet attempt😃 Thank you dii, i have cried 3 days on this. am glad people liked it. 😆
PS-i luv u🤗 Awhh i Love you more 🤗

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Linnet

Awesome os

Keep writing

Love it

😃

Originally posted by: halima_zaka
lovely os

Originally posted by: amruta04
Beautiful OS Anki 😊
Loved it..do write more

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
That was just so cute. I loved the ending where he winks at her...so cute...

Originally posted by: hello_786
Keep writing u do good work ...

Originally posted by: ..Breeze..
It feels so good to read you posts.. great work! Missed your writings a lot!

THANK YOU GUYS :) Hope it was worth your time :)

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: tv05
nice os...

Originally posted by: sheilasandhu
WOW lovely dovely me sweetheart😆😆

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
That was awsome Ankie.. !!.. You have penned down Zoya's love towards Asad beautifully.. 👏

Originally posted by: ria1891
Wow...
Just Beautiful...👏

Originally posted by: akaswan
Awesome OS 👏

I just loved it 👍🏼

Originally posted by: eshita.kabhi
Amazing..!!! 😊

Lol asad kabhi nahi sudhrega!!! Poor zoya, everytime she needs to cope with such work load of asad's!! 😆
But ofcourse, their love!! 😳 😳

Do write more dear 😊
love
eshita

Originally posted by: veenisha
so cuteplzz write more :D

Originally posted by: -Raj-
🤗ankie!!!
such a cute os!!!
so nice having u here after such a long while!!!
love u!!!
ty for the pm.

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
amazing yaar!!!
very well written!!
thanks 4 pm

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun
WOW!! awesome it was...
beautifully written...just loved it...!!😊

Originally posted by: -Anitha-
Ankie this os was just perfect 👍🏼👍🏼beautifully written...👏
Keep write like this when u free..
Missing u & ur cute posts...❤️

Originally posted by: rajnid68
Lovely one ...

Originally posted by: Asya_KaJen
Sweet OS

Originally posted by: annanyaksgian
miss u ankie

Originally posted by: rakshaanra
so nice to read your posts Again!

Raksha

Originally posted by: lDirectionerl
How do you write so 'effin well?!
It was B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L. ❤️

Originally posted by: KReyAS
nice os

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs
After a long time happy to read an OS by u... PERFECT..,

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
Cute OS :)

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-
I miss ASYA 😭

Originally posted by: QuboolHaiAsya
Finally u r back!! Luvd this!! It was so cute. U shuld write more!

Originally posted by: manognasai
Missed u a lot Ankie🤗
Missing Karan a lot...😭Stopped watching the show!
Read this OS just now!Dint com to forum since 2days!Very busy with my exams,records...
Loved the way u explained their expressions when Zoya sat in the back seat!😊...It was cute!I miss that smile a lot...his dimples,his woh actually,his voice,everything...
Take care Ankie!😃

THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH EVERYONE 🤗 it seriously means a heaven to me! I too miss writing nd you all, 🤗 but i promise i will be back soon 😳! Till then keep smiling and take care 😳! Thank you once again for the appreciation and encouragement! it means so much to me! So very much! 🤗

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Prashni
Pleasant read!

Thank you so much 😳

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Aashi

@--Aashi--

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Congrats !! For winning the OS of the week 🥳

Well deserved ! 👏

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy
Chalo, do line ke liye abhimaan express kar diya ab chumme ki baari!!!

Muah, muah, muaaahhh!!! :-* :-* ❤️

This is shooo perrrffeeecccttt!!!
thank you 😆

Mr. Woh main actually back in action!! Zoya seems sooo cute even when she's angry, nai?? Kya karein Mr.AAK, kaam aur Miss Farooqui ke beech fas gaye!! This was so so so so cuuttooo Aapuu!!! Best part was when Zoya told Prasad to bring his kids 🤣 Kuchh bhi!! I can sooo imagine Asad's crooked half-smile though the rear window The last para was the icing on the cake😳

Thank you shona, i wanted to add a dialogue but decided against it and kept it in insharo hi isharo mein dil kho diya 😳 😆

Take a huuuggeee Jaadoo ki Jhaappii from me for this!! I looovveee you Aappuuu!!! 🤗

Thank you shona! 🤗