Asad-Zoya FF: Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes I:Thread II Link on Pg 146 - Page 10

Gr8 concept as usual
loved it dear
Bring it on

Pari

ressy messy😉
awesome update Noe
this new FF is very beautiful.
Love all the characters n their role.
U dexcribed all things very beautifully
haha zoya is here also very extrovert n hilarious.
She orders her father sometimes n is apple of his eyes.
Man Shireen was too hilarious. Noe i was ROFLing all the time listening to her stupid talks n her repetitive dialogues especially abt Humeria like this, like that etc. Has she taken away the chatter box tag from Zoya.
Shireen is shuch a blabber queen in this FF.
loved the scene of car n loved how zoya gels with asad n their both r best frineds.
Loved how zoya behaved n thinks Rashid as her family.
Update soon n thanks for the pm.
PS. So sorry for this late comment.

excellent chapter👏

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I am super excited about this story, Awesome start, bang on and just perfect. I must say the choice of characters and plotting is really strong and fabulous. Very Austen indeed in my point of view. really well done. 👍🏼 I am so glad you picked Emma for this story inspiration. Thanks to your writing and plotting skills, It fits like a glove with QH characters, and you made the fitting to the T, this has to be the best possible take on QH characters in a completely different setting. I am so going to enjoy every bit of this story. All of them feel so right, they all seem to have their correct places, your vision of them is crystal in the adaption. Right from Ayaan, Humeira, Shireen, Dilshaad, Anwar, Zeenat, rashid, and most of all Asad. It's spot on, t. I was smiling and grinning all through it, and it feels so candid and legit. The feel good feel of good old QH and of course more than that, the feel good feel of your stories, like a perfect sunday morning of papers and coffee. I am going to savor and relish every update. 😳

The behind the bushes and the car parking had the perfect tongue in the cheekiness 😆

Shireen ki ofo yaad aa gayi.

Rashid and Dilshad, I am really looking forward to this, and if there is anyone I know who can do justice to this part of QH it has to be you. I want to see them survive Zoe's meddling.😆

Only you could make Ghafoor likeable. ⭐️

I really really like how Ayaan is placed here in this story, oh the possibilities. 😈

Looking forward to see Anwar and Zeenat handle the double relations. 😎

Asad and Zoe, Ab kya kahe, Zoe knows him the best already. He knows Zoe the best as well. 😉This is going to be so very interesting. 😃

Emma is not as popular as P and P, but there is something really attractive about the way Austen wrote Emma and her character, it's probably underrated as compared to her other works. Emma is more flawed than almost all her other heroines. Austen made her go through a wide range of graphs, from frivolous to sensitive to pretentious to loving, having said that she also wrote her in such a way that had most potential in a story. The story graph and range of Emma is immense.

Noe I want regular and soonish updates pretty please. 😳

Next update already...fatafat karo. 😆

hey nice story...plz do pm me...i will be waitin 4 next update

Can I just say this is the best ff ever! 😳

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its awesome..one of the best story concept i have come across..👏
Zoya as Emma is quite interesting..now its going to be one of my fav FF..
All the characters here r completely different from the show..even the story line is more interesting nd strong..👍🏼
the strong bond of friendship between AsYa is the something i loved the most in this FF..
the non stop blabber of blabber queen shireen made me go ROLF😆..
zoya had correctly said, How does she get so much energy to speak?😆😆
the i m very hopefull toward the relation between Dilshad nd Rashid..nd i guess Zoya will definitely be meddling them..😉
nywayz superb starting it was..loved it to the core..
plz do continue as soonish as possible😛