Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
Hi Kalyani!
Sorry I am late.
But I finally read it.
Ok first part was cute, Asad falling asleep and Zoya sleep frustrated and then him trying to coax her. Now who can reject Mr.6packs.😆😛 Loved it Kalyani😊
Part B was definitely bold. I loved it immensely. Not darling it was it was very very very nice. Especially the part where Zoya pulls off the towel and they do the deed in the shower.
I was imagining them doing that bit.
The chocolate bit was Masha Allah! You know I have a thing for chocolates myself.
Loved the whole Zoya gets down and dirty.
Wonderful and I wasn't bored even for a second. Lovely fantastic update.
You should write now. Don't be afraid to publish what ever is your fantasy.😃
Hope you write more bold. You have developed a curiosity for it now all you have to do is explore and I want to enjoy the ride of your fantasies.
LOVED IT KALYANI! 🤗
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