ASYA SS: ABBU UH R ONLY MINE AND AMMI'S Last Part Updated ON PAGE-119

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: anopama
Nice update
All the performance
And asya dance
Continue

Thnku di😊.
Ok

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#812

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA
Very love update. So cute writing. Loved this. And thanks for mentioning me in your update. Loved it

Thnku dear😊
Ur welcome.

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#813

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
it was good...but not ur best...i know u rushed it up...but i liked the songs!!
continue soon

congrats laiba

Yes uh r ryt, i rushed it up bcoz i didnt have ny ideas left nd i wanted to complete this ss.
Nyway thnku so much😊

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#814

Originally posted by: Maz8

Fab!!😃

Thnku dear😊

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#815

Originally posted by: swapno
OMG!!
Zara is really cute!!
Wonderful update...
Loved those songs...
A fun-filled lovely update...😳

Thnku dear😊

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#816

Hii guys🤗
I am finally here with the last part of my ss. A big thnks to ol my readers who gave so much love nd appreciated with whole heart. Thnku guys.
It is bcoz of uh guys tht i have improved so much, otherwise i nvr knew tht i can write such cute update, thnku so much nd this story is my personal favourite.
This part is for shrashtu for some unknown readers, i hope uh like it. Nd plz ol silence readers for now toh atleast cmnt, as this is the last part.
Part-14
After the function ended zara was sitting in garden crying silently so that noone comes to know.
Asya were going to their rooms when they saw zara in garden at this late hours. Zoya asked asad to go to her nd her the reason, asad went to her nd zoya stood on a distance to watch the duo.
Asad sat beside her nd asked her in a calm voice 'kya hua meri princess ko? Why she is sitting here' till now he didnt know tht she is crying but as she rubbed her eyes for clearing the tears he came to know she is crying nd took her in a tight hug.
Asad-what happened my princess? Y r uh so sad? Nd y r uh crying?
Zara in between her sobs-abbu main apse ek secret share kru? Kisi ko btaoge toh nh na?
Asad-nahi mera bacha kisi ko nahi btaunga main.
Zara-abbu i need a brother or sister. I feel very lonely bcoz ammi olso goes to work, she gives me time but still i feel very jealous whn aishu tells me about her nd her cute brother's antics. They both r so cute, they can olways play together, he olways teases her but still they bth love eachother. Abbu i olso want my brother.
Asya were shocked to listen this, zoya realised this thing in NY but asad olso realised it whn aishu tells her about her brother nd the glint of sadness can be seen in her eyes.
So they both decided last night only to have another baby.
Flashback starts
Asya were still talking when zara fell asleep.
Zoya-asad i want to have one more baby, i have seen in zara's eyes that she badly needs a sibling with whom she can shar everythng. She never told me, but alone child r not olways happy they olways needs a companion
Asad-ha zoya i was olso thinking the same, i have read her eyes she feels sad as soon as aishu speaks about her bro. I olso want my princess to share a strong bond with a sibling with whom she can play, share her things, can be upset with him, can protect her.
Zoya-ya i too want her to be happy.
Asad-ha zoya zara 5 saal in sab khushion se dur rh now i want to give her every hapiness of this world.
Flashback Ends
Asad asked zara in her tone only 'Bash itni si prblm? Zara nodded mri princess ko ek bhai ya bhn chahiye. Ok so baby boy chahiye ya baby girl.
Zara-baby boy.
Asad-why not baby girl?
Zara-phr ap uske bhi boy friend ban jaoge. I dnt want to share uh. She tht while hugging him more tightly.
Asad-aww my baby dnt wry uh will not have to share me. Hum dono ek team mein ho jayenge nd usko alaga se chod denge ol alone. He said tht intentionally to knw her answer.
Zara shot her head up- nahi abbu this is not fair, i cant leave him alone he is my bro na.
Asad-now what to do?
Zara tapped her finger onher chin nd started thinking what to do nd her ees fell on zoya-ha i got an idea. Ammi come here, zoya came to them. Abbu uh nd me will paired up nd ammi nd tht chotu baby will paired up like this noone will be left alone. But zara said sternly ABBU UH R ONLY MINE AND AMMI'S ND ALSO MY BROTHER'S BUT ONLY A LIL BIT.
Asya chuckled at her statement.
Zara is a diamond, she dnt want to loose her abbu but also she cant make anyone sad, nd do unfair to others.
Ok so scroll down for more.
Love Vish❤️

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#817

Continuation of Part-14
Next day,
Finally the day arrived, the day when asya were going to be one, going to be tied in a never seperable knot.
Zoya nd asad were getting ready in their rooms, they were not allowed to see eachother till the nikah is over
First asad arrived escorted by zara who was holding his finger nd taking him to the bed set for them. He was wearing a white sherwani luking hot as ever..
Than entered zoya wearing a red lehenga which was very heavy. Zara was helping her in lifting her lehenga from bottom.
Asad was admiring the beauty infront of him nd then his eyes fell on her princess who was helping her ammi in managing her lehenga. Asya, they both were watching her daughter at awe. She is doing a the job of a perfect daughter frst she helped asad nd now zoya.
Finally the nikah was ended with sighing the nikahnama.
After dinner asya retired to their room, nd for tonight ol girls, aishu, zara, ridhu, affu slept with najma. Nd did party ol nyt, they ol teased their tamatar phuphi. Najmma sometimes faked anger but she also enjoyed there company.
On the other hand asya became one once again but this time officialy.
After Three years.
In a park.
Asya were sitting on a bench watching their life playing with eachother.
Zara was catching a 2year old boy but was not able to catch him. Ya uh can say she was pretending so that he can be happy
Zain-api. Paklo.
Zara was running after her but zain didnt see the pebble nd fell down. Nd he started crying.
Asya came towards him nd scooped him in their arms nd scolded a lil bit to zara.
Zain-amm ammi ui[Wound] ho gyi.
Yes zoya gave borth to a baby boy whom they named zain.
Zara was angry olways bcoz of him she get scolded nd sat in a corner not talking to anyone.
Asya saw this but they wanted zain to pacify her, bcoz they want them to make their bond stronger.
Zain came to zara-api khelo. He said in her childish tone, he cnt make proper sentesnces but understnds tht her api was sad.
Zara-i dnt want to play.
Zain went towards his parents.-ammi abbu api no playing.
Asad-beta go nd give a huggie nd kissie to her she will be olright nd olso say sorry to her.
Zain ran towards her excitedly nd sat infront of her. Zara was seeing at ground she was not intrstd in luking up.
Zain placed her small palm under her chin nd lifted it-api shory. He said nd holed his ears with puppy face nd tears forming in her eyes.
When zara didnt responded he did wht he olways do he jumped on her nd hugged her tightly nd placed many kisses on her face till she forgave him.
Zara-acha fyn. I have forgiven uh now get up.
Asya were luking at the cute sight with awe. They olways wanted them to be eachothers strength not weakness.
Zara nd zain came nd hugged their parents, zara sat in asad's lap nd zain sat in zoya's lap.
Asya-sry my princess for scolding uh..
Zara-its ok. I want to eat icecream.
Zain-me too.
They ol took different flavours.
Zain nd zara shared their icecreams, they olways buy two different things nd then share it, they fight for things but then pacify eachother.
Finally zara got her family completed, her abbu was only hers nd her ammin nd zain.
So with this i end my story, m very sad tht i have ended it. But its ok. Plz do tel me hows it? Through ur likes nd comments.
Love Vish❤️

Edited by MagsDhingra - 11 years ago

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Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#818

Aaaww that was cute nd lvly
Gud ending dear
Loved it

Thy hv baby boy dis tym as Zara wanted
Zain Nc name

Sch an amzng ss dis was

Thanks for the pm

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sasir

@sasir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#819

loved it.

want to read more cute antics of zara n zain.

atleast one more update plzzz

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#820

josh mein bhool gayi this...i am on third spot 👏
it was so so so cute...inna saara...
it was indeed a wonderful ending...a complete n happy family...hum do humare do... 😆
aajkal ke bacche...zara ne asya ki setting kara di... 😊

it ended...but i am happy with this cute end...it was one of my favourite...of course after TINBSS...
do write more soon

Edited by -Crazy4AsYa- - 11 years ago