AsYa SS: Winner Takes All ; Ch 7, Pg 66, 23/04/14 - Page 38

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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 6..

Well rashid did it well ... he deliver it... made gaffor shaken
for a bit... but he knows rashid own involve for
goodness ... he have is motive...

The end after rashid explain... made gaffor think ...
and agree to the term...

Father and daughter... have a talk... but the end gaffor just blackmail
her with more truth ...

Now all in zoya ... to do it...👏 👏

Edited by Linsie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
Unres

I know the unres has been quite late, so late that it has become the latest unres.😆

This chapter (6th) belonged to the two Budhaas 😡 with mini appearances in person for Asya and a appearance in name for Ayaan.😉
Cant say lovely update with the oldies hogging all the limelight.
But it was a short and good update. No flashbacks too. No backstory yet. No asya yet. No Ayaan. Too many no's in this update.
But, now I am intrigued about Gafoor as well as Rashid's plans for their respective child.



His steps matched the determined look on his face, enraging Ghaffur further.
Good, let the both of them fight it out.

ANWAR..." Ghaffur called out for his man Friday.

Rivs, how could you, of all the persons - replace Wajid with Anwar ... not done.😆

"Hmmph" Ghaffur could not believe the audacity of the man standing in front of him.

Neither can we. That's the reason he has been put to rest (on a bed) in Qh.

Rashid sat down in a nearby chair, awaiting the reaction of his adversary.

Rashid trying to reduce the adversity of his adversary.

But I am guessing being her father, it would be upto you to get her to agree, wouldn't it?"Rashid raised a brow in questions as he stared hard at Ghaffur.

Rashid forgot to add "Just as I got my son to agree. We are two sides of the same coin."

Rashid left right away, knowing well that his parting words will have the desired effect on his target.

Am still wondering what is Rashid's purpose other than getting one up over Gafoor. Sure there is some other reason.

With his decision made, he spent the rest of the day putting his own plans in action.

Yeah, after all birds of a feather should flock together.

When Asad had made a delayed appearance and only conversed with the two men before making a hasty retreat

So hasty a retreat that I could'nt even spot him, neither in the story nor in the party..

The wedding was to take place within the next week, after which Asad and Zoya were to move to Mumbai.

TBH, the only line about the update I liked.

With all things set in place, the only thing he needed to do now was convince Zoya.

Its like trying to make kheer with only the milk missing.

"Zoya, beti..." he had started

"Beti mat bulaiye mujhe ...]" Zoya retorted as she let out a cry.

Whatever her mood, angry, sad, happy, Zoya will never let anyone complete their sentence.

When you are older and wiser, you will realize why a life with a man who can barely make ends meet every month is not the right person for you.

Spoken like a true parent. Really. These words make perfect sense. Any father, good bad, manipulative, selfish, or egoistic, would react the same way. Hope you dont' make Gaffoor as bad as Rashid.

finally gave her the ultimatum that he had not wished to use.

Which ultimatum -

- Do or Die

- Do or I will Die

When he left, a bawling yet angry Zoya was left behind who had to make a very important decision that night.

Once again runaway before being a bride.


Edited by GitaIyer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 4...

Rashid is full of surprise... just to get the eye level with gaffor... that is
going to stratified him... to infinite

well gaffor has no choice... since every knows... what zoya did ...
she did what is right she wants freedom from her father... now that is a mess

Asad is right.. learning the situation in hand... he is shock...
but rashid shut him down... not that asad is interested
with zoya...

Gaffor have is guilt towards zoya...






Chapter 5..

Asad and rashid never been in good terms...
and remember his promise to his mother...that never leave
his father.. alone...

But he can never change his opinion about rashid...

in all this zoya been little comfort...for asad..

So asad agree if only zoya agree... and he also give... solution ...to the problem
hmmm ... surprise from asad side...

but rashid can't wait to put his plan in action...

Edited by Linsie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor Zoya, gosh these fathers can use their own children for their own selfish reasons
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Posted: 11 years ago
rivs..another googly...
rashid jaanthay hai...aag may kitna ghee daalna..
muaka ka phayda dodo abbu layna chahathay hain..
asad has agreed..now its upto zoya..
chand rath party ..the deciding factor..
what stance will zoya take..
their kids have become... bali ka bakra..
thinking i caught it before the pm..(their is a first time for everything..ha ha ha)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Gr8 update. It was short, please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haiyee mere zoyaan <3 <3 <3 <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey rivs,
Hope ur son is alright now.
Congrats for ur sis's marriage.
It was a short but impressing update.
You know i dont how to suggest for future updates.
But i love to read both Asad & Zoya will be part of this marriage plan.
I wish to see their good bonding.
I love to read more .And i cant wait to read next update.
But i know u r busy.Pls update soon when you get time
Love you and take care😛

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