AsYa SS: Winner Takes All ; Ch 7, Pg 66, 23/04/14 - Page 16

Originally posted by: metoyou

Main yahan hoon, yahan hoon, yahan...

Yes, I am finally here. You know nah mein kitni busy rehti hoon; family, bachhe, husband, work, hobbies, friends... I love my life 😊

I know how busy you are...every single minute of ur life😉😆

Part 2

"The driver has a name Abbu. His name is Ayaan (Tumne toh Ayaan ko driver bana diya!) 😆

Usko kuch to role...dena hi tha...kuch to role, dena hi thaaa

Since I have read most of it, the dialogues are not new to me. Sorry!

What a first encounter of Asad and Zoya, she pushed him into the water. I wonder how their relationship now is, matlab are they friends or just neighbors.

The relationship of Zoya with her abbu is clear; not good. She is in love with Ayaan and for obvious reasons her abbu does not agree with that.

You will only know about their friendship/relationship in the end, if at all. Abbu's are villians...yes.

Last part..beautiful. Zoya's thoughts, very nice and the poet, wow! I love that one 😳

Thanks...I love that poem a lot. Its one my favorite ones ever.

You have a banner, very nice! 😃

Yes I do...nice isn't it?

Lage raho Rivi! 👍🏼

Thanks Narges😃

Originally posted by: anopama

interesting
so zoya is in love ayaan
and he seems to be their driver
oh I thought maybe she and asad
fell in love as they grew up together ...haha
continue soon

Originally posted by: GitaIyer

Sorry for the late comment. I know I should've been the first one to comment, since I was anonymously mentioned in the foreword .🤗

Yes but u did not. But fikar not. As long a u comment.😉🤗

Ayaan is a driver. So, this time family fortunes are reversed, I guess. Asad in mansion and Ayan left high and dry by Rashid.

Aww...what a thought...Ayaan a byblow of Rashid...can definitely be incorporated in the concept..😃

Sweet, but short update. eagerly waiting for the next one. The poem was lovely and apt.

Thanks...yes the poem I loved forever and found the perfect place to use it.

Someone asked if this story is more about Rashid. Well this someone knows me well and could get the drift. Yes figuratively speaking Rashid will have the most screen space in this SS.

That's me....

Yes...and u got answer now.

About Ayaan - he will make an appearance later.😆

Chalo lets' see does Ayaan make an appearance first - in your SS or in the serial

Most likely the Ayaan I have cast will never show up in the serial. As the days go by, I wonder if Ayaan is ever coming back.

A faint smile appeared on his face as he remembered

Is it a case of one-sided love? Ok don't answer that. I will wait for the update.

Thanks for not pushing for an answer.

She had immediately asked Abbu to put a thick fence around the house so that Asad would never accidently dunk in the lake in the future.

Fence can only prevent Asad from falling into the lake, but not falling in love.

Exactly...bechari Ammi na jaanti thi ke bete ko lake mein dubane wali ladki kisi din uski biwi banegi.😆

Why should I care about you anymore, the man who only saw his dead wife in me, found faults with me and punished me for crimes I did not commit?

So, Both Asad and Zoya despise their abbus.

Yes...just how I despise the two patriarchs of QH.

She gave out a hysterical laugh, mocking her father, the very man she had feared all these years.

Are we going to see Zoya cross the fence into Asad's house? Eventually since AsYa is the end game.😉

Originally posted by: nautanki_anu

Wowie Rivs!!! I loooved the childhood part 😃.

But I found Zoya falling in love with the driver a lil odd 😕 Purely becoz his name is Ayaan. It reminded me of... lemme avoid the dreaded word 😆.

Zoya being under house arrest by her dad was totally filmy 😆. Reminded me of Dil 😆.

Good job again with the writing 😃.

Originally posted by: juggaad

Even I love Ayaan! Looks like wwe do have similar tastes😃😉

Originally posted by: juggaad

More like first member to protest against the society.😆

Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

Haha...she probably does not know Asad...so Ayaan it is.

You thought she is talking about Asad?😲 Chalo clarify ho gaya.

Well, he is father straight out of the 70's and 80s movie. What can I say?

Yes Eid is one week away. And will she wait for Asad? 😕 Or did u mean Ayaan?

Thanks dear.

Rivs

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

actually i was talking both asad n ayaan...coz aoya met asad in her childhood n after that

their haven't met yet again... as their homes are close to each other...

and for ayaan she will definately wait... But i am wondering what zoya saw in ayaan than hadsome hunk asad😕😆

but does she knows abt asad after soo many years coz theri havent met na...😕😉😆

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

update soon... its verry long now...😭😆