AsYa SS-The Boundaries That Separate Us Chapter 16 Updated Page 101

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shonajain

@shonajain

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#611

woowww update preeti
sooo awsume conversation between asad and zoya

it WAs sooo.wonderful
asad is sooo adorable.

waiting for the actual mudda to start

update supersooon preeti
waiting waiting

lots of love
shona

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Abi

@-ABI-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#612

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#613

Nice update
Loved it
Zoya got to know abt her mother killer & her father. She decided to punish them
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#614

Very emotional
Glad that they are with n for each other ...
I hate that gazia...
Plz update soon

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#615

Nice update...sad to hear that Zoya knows her story :-(

Lets see what happens!

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#616

Awesome Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Portrait Beautifully...⭐️

Update Next Part Soon...😃

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Kabhibloom

@Kabhibloom

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#617

Awesome n emotional chapter.
Loved it.
Zoya knows the truth.
Continue soon

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#618

awesome part

asya moments and their talk is soo emotional

finally zoya know the truth about her father

zoya is really shocked

i hope asya support eachother very well

plz pm me for next part

continue soon

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_.Mehak._

@_.Mehak._

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Posted: 10 years ago

#619

Hey Preeti

I'm really really sorry for being this late. I was not keeping well.

I just read those last two update

The updates were awesome as always although I felt things were a bit rushed which I completely understand was necessary.

I liked the bond Ashok and Zoya have just started to share. Afterall Zoya needs someone by her side when she finds her love of life suffering pain.

Some light moments like that teasing part were good and which I felt were much needed here.

Asad and Zoya's deep convo was really very beautifully written. Well that became my favorite part of the update. Asad assuring Zoya of her Ammi's presence. Zoya asking Asad if he is scared. I loved it :)

Zoya the poor soul got to know about her sad story.

You mentioned things are going get serious after this point of the story. Does it mean that they are going to New York in the coming update..? Is Asad's Cancer part starting now..?

Ps. Asad is just so Adorable. I love him. <3

Waiting for the next part

Update soon

-Mehak :)

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#620

Hey Preeti..,
Hope you have been keeping well..
The Update was very good and well written..,
I really loved that scene between AsYa were they were talking about Zoya's ammi.
very touching part.
And also Asad finally mentioned Ashok to Zoya...that was also kind of fitted in the bill part but its fine.
Asad and Ayaan's part was also good..
Zoya now knows the truth...well i have a feeling...when the situation will get more tougher in NY during Asad's treatment..plzz don't let this news come into yaa between them..
Liked reading the chapt.
Continue soonish...
# I better expect that you just start with NY from next part...its a ittu sa wish.