AsYa SS-The Boundaries That Separate Us Chapter 16 Updated Page 101 - Page 36

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Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

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Originally posted by: MayurChan

Suprisedd...Iam shocked...
But it is a brilliantly wrote chapt...
But as everybody is asking is this a sad story...
Or the future course of the story has some thing to do with Dilshaad's word in his office in chapt 4 that Allah tests his loved one and all that...
Kindly plzz...don't let that wrong thing happen to ASYA ...i so love them here...
Continue soon...

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome Updates...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Update Next Part Soon...😃

Originally posted by: p_s05

How lucky am I, for both the parts I logged on to respond to a PM and found an update. Now that the story has reached this junction, please update regularly.

I am lucky to have you like this story, honestly <3

Yes I am already working on the next chapter. It would be up in a week.

This is the first of an AsYa fiction that I have read, where Asad is seriously ill, one of the reasons why this is highly engaging and captivating.

Asad has cancer 🥺 I knew he was diagnosed with a serious condition but this is still horrible, but he will get better right?...

Cancer is deadly, yet it is often curable. 😊

I loved the second part for the balance and variety it contained. Painfully beautiful and poignant, I anticipate the next chapter to be just so if not more intense and emotional.

Thank you. I am working on making it good. You won't believe it took me so much time to write this chapter, the exact scenes, dialogues and stuff...and I am still working on the exact scenario for the next one. These two chapters are like the most intense scenes I had to write till now. I am glad you liked it, and I so so hope you like the next one too! 😳

Two elements that stood out:

1. Zoya's introspect of Asad's past and pain while in her Appi's arms.

2. Asad in his bedroom, concealing the blood from his bedding[keeping the essence of why he is doing what his is] and him and Appi together were just lovely despite the gravity of the situation. Liked the dialogues too!...His manner of dealing with his illness is so Asad personified, which is what makes this so captivating.

In this story, Asad is pretty much the same Asad as in show! I can't say the same for Zoya. Although I LOVE LOVE LOVE Zoya in the show, she was too childish sometimes. I have avoided that.

Continue soon!

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks For PM.

It was so good to see You.😊

Both parts were so nice.😊

Asad(KSG) slept very well and Dilshad teasing him was so nice.😊

Zoya went to find out about her father ,Asad(KSG) became worried when heard this,it was so nice😊

The feelings of Zoya when he knew about her father was so nicely explained.😊

Asad(KSG) and Zoya conversation about this was so nice.😊

The Feelings of Asad(KSG) thinking about Zoya leaving is house,it was so sad.😭

Asad(KSG) and Zeenat conversation was so nice and she find out that Asad(KSG) had cancer,it was so sad.😭

Zeenat wanted to tell this everyone about Asad(KSG) condition,it was very nice.😊

Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.

"Happy New Year"

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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PriyaCherry.

Originally posted by: -ABI-

unresserved on pg:48
above CH-6(b)
below CH-6(a)😉

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars

who told U that I liked it?
I haven't said I liked it.

well I've said I love it❤️ yar
🤣lol😉
anyways
Please UPDATE SOON

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Shocked about his cancer...but you don't see the surprise! You will see it clearly in the next chapter. Wait am I making any sense? 😆Anyways, you will see.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">The story can't always have happy moments, right? There are gonna be sad times, difficulties on the way...and they are gonna face those problems the best they can!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I will never give them a sad ending in this story after getting the ending I, an AsYa (played by KaBhi) fan, got in the show. So nothing would happen to AsYa.😳</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">The next chapter would be up in a week.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Thanks again. :D</font>

Heyy...Preeti.. 😛
As i mentioned about Dilshaad's words especially in Chapt 4 when she went to Asad's office with the Kheer...As they both were talking and Asad was hell bent in distancing Zoya for her good and was talking about no choices...accept fate without any argue...and Dilshaad told him that everything happens for a reason and we always have a option...even when Asad gave her Rashid's example...she said she moved on and had a life ahead...so she was indirectly hinting at a tough time ahead for him...so i got the gist...and will be waiting for The next update with earnest excitement.
Continue soon.