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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Wow.. This gets more and more interesting. .loved the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

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OMG OMG OMG i have so much to say and i can't decide where to start...and i am going all cukoo
Ohk now gathering my thoughts😳😳😳
Firstly many many many congratulations on the new thread Green🥳You totally deserve it...I pray that you get many more threads like these but knowing you i guess this will be the last one...

Now lets come to the update...can I just say it has been so long that mornings have been so good and today you just made my morning very very good nd happening😳😳😳
I checked my phone and saw your message and resd my spot and while doing so i saw that update was dedicated to me and the moment i read my name my lips curved into a smile and i was mentaly doing my happy dance...
And when i finally got to read the update my happiness knew no bounds😳😳I was smiling ear to ear and feeling so so so special and loved...I have been waiting for my birthday present for very long but I really didn't expect it to be a part of the story..I thought you would write me an OS or something but including my birthday in the story was totally unexpected and it made me very very happy...Thanku so much Green

She then turned to Anu and shared a small fist pump with her, before both of them strode proudly out of the cabin, arms linked once again.
Ye hai humari dosti and ye hai humara pyaar...i wanna sing here "Ye dosti hum nahi chodenge"😆😆

"SURPRISE!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY ANU!" The entire office screamed, just as Zoya and Anu stepped out of the cabin. Anu gasped and covered her mouth immediately, her eyes widening in shock as she took in the sudden change in the office, decoration and party accessories all in place.
Omg i was literally so so suprised when i read this...I couldn't belive my eyes at first...Thanku so much zoya and others and my real life zoya you too...aapke liye to ek pyaari si jhappi🤗 and a lot of pappis

"Oh my goodness!! Thank you so, so, so much! This is really very sweet of all of you,"
Ah that is so me...using so so many times😆😆😆and monica nd zoya i love you both😳😳

"Happy birthday Miss Mishra, I hope the day goes wonderfully for you... Wait a second! What in the world...?" Asad wished Anu, before his eyes fell on a peculiar sight a few metres away. It was Vijay! He'd been gagged and tied to a pillar, his eyes shooting daggers at everyone as he struggled against his bounds.
OMG I got wishes from Mr.Khan too😳😳😳
OMG what the hell🤣🤣🤣Hemant tied Vijay to the pillar...this has to be the funniest things in this story...I almost choked while reading this😆😆

Lol i love zoya nd vijay's fights so much..i wonder what will be the scene in dilshad constructions if both of them got a dagger😆😆

"This company is my baby, and I've always treated my employees as family. So I will have to do this in front of my family as well. I would like to announce to everyone that I'm firing both Mr Vinod Mehta and Mr Vijay Kapoor with immediate effect. I will explain myself, but will someone please call the police first?" Asad announced, to a room full of dropped jaws.
OMG i knew it there was something fishy about both Vinod and Vijay..i haad a feeling that Vijay was working against Asad and leaking some sensitive information and i guess that is why Dilshad constructions lost the last project too...
I didn't predict vijay and vinod workig together but i guess my bad there it was staring right in the face...

Now i am waiting to see what exactly Vijay and Vinod were upto and how they will be brought to justice..Also i am very very excited to see an angry asad nd zoya pacifing him😉😉

Thanku thanku thanku so much for this wonderful birthday gift Green...I love it a lot and thanku for making me feeling so special...

Love you loads meri pyaari Green❤️❤️



Haha and I think it will be my last one too. This was my plan all along, but execute karne mein thoda time lag gaya, sorry about that!! I'm glad you were surprised, I was tryna keep it as unpredictable as possible, by making it seem like the plan was just about exposing Vijay haha.

Hahaha and yes!! I purposely got Asad to wish you too :p Glad you enjoyed Vijay being tied to a pillar hahaha I knew it was gonna be a relatively serious chapter, so I was just tryna add some humour :p

And YES!! At least I managed to catch you unaware about one thing haha, about them working together! I wanted to keep something unpredictable at least, so I'm glad I got that :p

Really glad you liked it Anu (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: kals82

hmm,

yeah vinod turned out to be a villain... my bad...????

do bring someone to make asad feel jealous...

nice one... though the humor is missing ...

update soon



Hahaha caught you unaware about that :p Didn't you find Vijay being tied to a pillar funny hahahaha. Glad you liked it anyway (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: rajnid68

One of the most brilliantly crafted story..

Full of suspense, drama, action, attraction,
Greed...oops did I miss..something..
Kept the pace ...at 60..and constant...
I read from the first letter..to the last at a go..
Couldnot let it down..
So far asad being hit..by his own worker
..was a brilliant addition...
Hope u keep weaving in tracks..
Looking forward to your next update...
And each updaye seems smaller than
your previous one...am I bonkers...
Love to have a pm...



Hahaha aw <3 Thank you so much! Yeah I was trying to be less draggy, I tend to get carried away in details when I write a scene. Yeah but it was short, I know!! Glad you liked it (: Sorry, but I don't send PMs!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: mochhug

AHAHAHAHA OMG YAY! Vijay is out! GO Zoya!

I hope Asad and Zoya talk? Or at least have him acknowledge that Zoya is the reason he even knows about this now?

Loved it hun!

Happy Belated Birthday Anu!



With your help of course :p Glad to see your comment Monica! Hope all's well with you (: Don't worry, lots more drama left haha, hold tight :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
How I wish your posting a new update as ur online lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Firstly congrats on the new thread🥳 Secondly A very happy belated birthday Anu🤗 Thirdly...OMG😲 Vinod and Vijay are both fired...I always knew you couldn't trust men with the name starting with V😆 ============================================= What were they doing??? Stealing or trading company secrets??? I have to say Zoya's plan was brilliant👍🏼 ================================================ I'm thinking Hemant had the most fun though😉 Tying Vijay up😆



Hahaha see I left a huge clue by making both their names start with V, but I still managed to trick some people like you :p Hahahaha I added the tying up part just to add humour :p Glad you liked it! (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Greenu you are online xD

Better update! 3:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh

Congratulations for the new thread!! Loved the update... :) And Vijay and Vinod are both frauds... I was not expecting that... Vijay, yes but not Vinod... And Zoya was the one who exposed them... Yayyy... :D

Loved it... Looking forward to the next update... :)



Yes!! I was trying to keep Vinod out of the limelight so everyone just thinks that Vijay alone is a baddie hahaha, glad to have tricked you :p And really glad you liked it! (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: t1234

Unres'd on page 111 of thread 2!
Brilliant update it had quite a bit of action in it!
I didn't actually figure out that both Vijay and Vinod would turn out like this!
Please don't make us wait too long for the next update!

And congratulations on this new thread, may there be many more Insha'Allah :)



Alright, I shall go back to read your unres after this (: Hahaha yay, I thought most people had figured out that there was something off about them as it is, but glad you didn't catch it then! Makes it all the more fun :p Glad you liked it! (:

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