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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3

Asad's POV

In his thought ...

Should I ask her out for prom or not? Shit I already told Ayaan and the others I would but if I didn't admit then they would continue trying to convince me and if I didn't admit then someone else could and would ask her out. But I don't know we are so different. She's laid back doesn't care about anything, loud, obnoxious, full of life, easy going, super caring and friendly. Did I mention she's a bit crazy actually no shes very crazy but shes also very cute, innocent and immature at times. But I am not like that, I am not loud, little things matter to me, I am not as open as she is, I don't do crazy things or can even think about doing half the stuff she does. She loves Bollywood, shes the most filmiest person I have ever seen, but life isn't a Bollywood movie. She is devil with friends but an angel with family. Despite all this even if I give her a chance how is this going to work? She might be outgoing with everyone else but when it comes to me she is super shy, we barely ever talk. I know shes caring and I've seen that side of her, but I think if shes that caring then she is going to be clingy. What about my freedom, its going to go away, she would want to spend prom night with me and I won't be able to spend time with my friends. We are like complete opposites. WHAT THE HECK I am just asking her to be my prom date. Not proposing to her. But Ayaan does have a point, she has everything that I want in my ideal girl. She fits perfectly in all my requirements, shes the perfect high to compliment me, shes family oriented, shes well cultured, she loves my family most importantly my mom! But I don't want to get her hopes high. Everyone says that this is her dream. Humaria told me her childhood dream and how I can make that come true, but I don't want to crash her dreams. Why am I thinking like I am asking her to be my girl? I am thinking to much. F this I'll just ask her for a date and we still got time till prom so if we talk and I don't like her I'll tell her then.

Faizan (asad's friend) : bro where are you lost?

Asad: Nothing I was just thinking ...

Faizan: thinking about what? Zoya?

Asad: Yea, I just don't know, she doesn't seem my type but I told ayaan I'll ask her to prom, I don't even know why I said that

Faizan: honestly, I donno why u have double thoughts might talk a lot but shes amazing, but don't ask her out if you don't want to, but if you don't ask her, then I'll probably ask her.

Asad: No I am going to ask her out. *walks away towards the library where Zoya is waiting for him*

*Flashback*

Culture Fest this year!

The caf door open and zoya walked in a red and black saree, I don't think I have seen a saree look so perfect on anyone else other than her. Not even movie stars. She was walking my direction, she never looked so breath taking, I've seen her in suits and ofcourse she looks better in shalwar suits then her usual jeans and hoodie but it felt like she just came from heaven. "Faizan, could you please tell me when I am performing?" she asked. WAIT she's performing? I saw Zoya and faizan walk her to behind the stage. When faizan came back I asked her "I didn't know Zoya's performing? What is she doing?"

Faizan "Shes doing Bollywood dancing. But dang she looks so hot. I didn't think she'd look this bomb."

Asad "I didn't look at her to closely."

*Flashback ends*

Faizan might be one of my closest friend but hes not the right guy for zoya. I know she likes me, she'll be happy. Maybe I am not attracted to her cause I know she likes me but I won't let her heart be broken. I will ask her for prom!

Edited by crazee.larki - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Again a very good part thank you for this story continue soon please 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Nice story you have, please PM me updates.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Chapter 1...

zoya is waiting 4years for this day. ...

so who is she waiting and why...

and the flash back. ... show a guy
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
why zoya think... maybe prank from her friends
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Chapter 2...

humaira words... assuring that he likes her...

she is so happy. .. went he wish her for her bday

so she saw the convo between asad and humaira and it's out she ask him to wish Zoya...

but asad know Zoya's bday
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
well asad being very rude with zoya...

but zoya like him a lot. .. poor Zoya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3...

asad in dilemma. .. to ask Zoya out

but the way he think is for lifetime. ..so cute..

and not sure to ask her
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Posted: 11 years ago
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jealous khan. ... is always fun

coz faisan going to ask zoya for prom
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
awesome update😃
give longer ones plzzz😭

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