AsYa FF Our Lives Entwined - Thread One - Chapter One To Three

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Hey Bubble. Thanks for writing dear. I love your style sweety.

What happened between Asad n Zoya 10 yrs ago?????

Jaldi jaldi update karo and please pm me for the next part. Cant wait to read further.

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eshi13

@eshi13

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

I am new here..and i just read ur battling the curse..i must say i love ur writting...and i am really looking forward to dis one

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

unres on pg 3...
continue soon

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manognasai

@manognasai

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Yay...new FF🥳Great start!I actually understood the story...Looking forward to know how u write it!😃
Update keliye kal tak rukhna padega?Aap ek kaam kyu nahi karti...give 2updates a day!😉

Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago

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Divi.C

@Divi.C

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

1st of all,welcome...

I was just thinking about ur story that why still u didnt updated any new story so u definitely going to live for 100 years...hahah..

so come to the story...

its nice ..asad doesn't wan to marry zoya...

can I request 1 thing...in ur story u always show how they fight that is kinda interesting but can u pls make zoya a little different as she doesn't argue with him ..as I readthis update zoya was not expecting asad...

I just want zoya to have some sensiblity..as I want her like lioness type...as zoya should also give him cold sholder ..hope u understand...

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Divya

@divya_asya

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Wow new ff from you...Nice update and interesting...continue soon

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ishka virani

@LilApple

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

last line was funny
m loving it I think

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
m first agn..
n thnk u fr mentioning dat KSG= ASAD...

dil khush kr ditta

haha I can do anything for KSG 🤗

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indu333

@indu333

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

great start..😊.

cont soon...

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: sonia555
bubble ki bachi tune no post kyu nai kiya 😭🤣 and shreya ki bachi tujhe 50 comments chaiye 😡🤣
ab bhaago dono mai arahi hun danda lekar 🤣

even 50 are less for her 🤣