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Posted: 11 years ago
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I seriously love bengan ka bharta 😆 😳 😆
Loved the OS!!! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
unres
Finally bahut dino se res pada hua tha so I thought aj finally unres kar dete hain😆😆😆and waise bhi you have made me very very very happy today by giving me such an amazing birthday present.

I would like to thank Nisha ji for giving my pyaari Green "Dancing Diva's dancer" Khitab...You deserve it Green and thanku for making a separate post for this OS and giving all of us an opportunity to read an amazing piece of work😳😳😳

I have always said that you are the unparalled queen of Rom com but this piece is a brilliant example that you can write emotional and sad stuff with equal perfection.I have always loved the your emotional chapters in your FFs and I am so glad that you decided to write an OS which is so beautifully touching.

I loved how you described Asad and zoya's sadness and the way kept it shielded from aapi and jeeju.

"What do you think you're doing Miss Farooqui?! Climbing a building in the cold of the night in a flimsy cardigan?? Are you crazy?!" Asad yelled as he settled a shivering Zoya on her feet next to him. He began rubbing her arms over her red cardigan sleeves, trying to bring some warmth to her form. But the cardigan was wet, cold and unhelpful, so he peeled it off her skin and resumed rubbing her arms, this time directly on her skin. Zoya inhaled sharply as Asad shifted one hand to her face, pushing her wet locks away from it.
Ah well that is zoya for your Mr.Khan...crazy as hell😆😆😆I love how you can make just a mere act of rubbing zoya's arm so sweet and hawwtt😳😳
Ah the way he pushes her locks away😳😳

Aww zoya is so sweet...I loved how you reminded me of the time zoya comes to asad's room with coffee and biscuits...you are best at recreating the old scenes with your touch😳😳

Aww the hug,the tear,the sharing of coffee and cookies was so cute...i was just going awww...the fact that zoya remembered to pack asad's fav cup was so sweet...

Awww man I loved the way zoya used her story to make asad realize his mistake..I honestly believe that is a much better way to make someone realize something rather than giving a lecture...It is always better when people realize things on their own..

Actually, Zoya had put it more aptly. He was escaping. Not only was he escaping his responsibilities, he was trying really hard to escape all of his problems, with Ammi, with Zoya, with... Mr Rashid Ahmed Khan, by hiding out in this small room in New York. And it wasn't going to work for much longer.
Beautiful lines Green...as i said zoya was brilliant in the way she made asad come to this conclusion

"This is the best Christmas gift ever," Zoya exclaimed through her tears, before lifting her head from his shoulder and planting her lips on Asad's without further thought.
Zoya got her best Christmas present ever😳😳😳...Aww she kissed him☺️☺️☺️
and the best part he kissed her back☺️☺️☺️Your kisses make me blush everytime...no matter how many of your kisses i have read every one is different😳😳😳

Ah so the kiss was the best present ever😆😆hehe asad's christmas present was baigan bharta😆😆😆

Awww Green this was such a sweet,emotional and touching OS...it had everything sadness,romance and some fun😆😆
You know i hardly read any new works on Asya now coz i can't digest anything after zoyaan even in stories but I am so glad i read this...

Thanku for making this such a beautiful experience and time well spent...

Love you loads Green❤️❤️
Edited by anushreemishra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful story ...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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allah miyan that was so damn cute!!!!
our best christmas gift too!!!🤗
the initial bit was a little sad but then u turned the story around n we even got the first kiss of asya!!!☺️
simply wow!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was so so lovely...I just loved it...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: love.asad.zoya

allah miyya it was awesome ...sooo cute os 👏

And the baingan ka bharta🤣i hate baigan😆



You do?? ): I love baingan hahaha, especially baingan ka bharta :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh

Christmas special is Baingan ka bharta... Haha... So nice... No wonder Zoya's a bit weird... 😆

It was super cute... I love how Zoya and Asad understand each other... Lovable and sweet... :-)



Hahaha aw <3 Yeah I wanted to show silent understanding, glad you caught it, and glad you liked it! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: DancingDiva.

Your welcome hun! I loved the way how you added the current track of QH in it :)


Happy New Year!

Nishaji



Haha I don't know how to write stories in any other way :p Thank you Nisha ji (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajnid68

I had found it fabulous..

I still find it fabulous..
Her climbing up the pipe with coffee and cookies
Reminded me of her via the window...
Baigan ka bharta...christmas dinner..wow



Yeah haha I loved how she climbed into his window with coffee and cookies the other time, so I decided to incorporate it here (: Glad you liked it! (:

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