SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 22

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

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amazing update kaussar...
beautifully penned down...
i loved it to bits...
zoya is upset... for the people she cant see in pain...
i loved the whole travelling scenario... asad driving back to zoya to drop her home... her nt taking the bus bt joining him... thn driving herslf so he doesnt further injure himself and he accepting so... then she took him to hospital... zoya is so considerate... i luv her caring nature...
at hospital asad zoya sister n doc interaction was too good... asad too cares...
zoya - wifey... no friend... i hope the friendship starts ... asad is apprehensive bt then destiny n time always have their plans...
thanx for the dedication kaussar m very glad...
luv u for the epic update

thank You Aarzoo😃... i wasn't too happy with the whole update... but if you liked it i am happy.. Asad offering Zoya a lift and the hospital scene, i really enjoyed writing those parts so i am glad you liked them.

Zoya is always considerate and caring... but deep down Asad is similar even though he doesn't show that side of him..

Friendship will start... Asad will be wary because of his past, but yea destiny will push him towards Zoya and he will be drawn to her even if he tries to avoid it..😉

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

thank you... this is so sweet..😃

Originally posted by: sasir

awesome.

loved it.

plz update soon

thanks.. glad you liked the update.. will try to update soon this time.😊

Originally posted by: kaussar

thank You Aarzoo😃... i wasn't too happy with the whole update... but if you liked it i am happy.. Asad offering Zoya a lift and the hospital scene, i really enjoyed writing those parts so i am glad you liked them.

Zoya is always considerate and caring... but deep down Asad is similar even though he doesn't show that side of him..

Friendship will start... Asad will be wary because of his past, but yea destiny will push him towards Zoya and he will be drawn to her even if he tries to avoid it..😉

i am waiting to see them as friends... asad ka akdu tag chala jaye bas...
vn vl u update next part...

kaussar lovely update...
loved the scene in the car... and in the hospital too

Originally posted by: jas91

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wonderful updt Kaussar👏

just loved it😃

Zoya is feeling sad 4 Dillu & Asad even after he never treated her properly⭐️

Zoya is always like that, Soft at heart even 2 her enemies😳

Asad is also feeling guilty & wanted everything 2 b right soon😔

whole Rain scene d way Asad went & came back 2 help Zoya 2 reach home was beautifully penned👏

I liked hospital scene as well😃

Doc & nurse take Zoya as Asad's wife😆😉

loved when Zoya took drivers seat she was not scared or hesitant of Asad anymore😎

she took matters in her hand like Ziddi wife😈👍🏼

After what nurse said about Zoya he is now in thinking mode if he should accept Zoya as his frnd 😲

it will b tough after his experience wid Tanveer😡

hope Asad leave his past behind & start a fresh🥳

waiting 4 nxt part

updt soon😉

& thanx 4 PM 😃

Thanks Jas...😃 glad you liked the update.

Originally posted by: jas91

Thanks... this is so nice and sweet of you.😊

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Originally posted by: aarzoo50

i am waiting to see them as friends... asad ka akdu tag chala jaye bas...
vn vl u update next part...

they will become friends gradually because Asad won't be able to ignore Zoya anymore and he will get drawn to her... and Akdu will disappear... I will make sure of it...😆.. so don't worry.