LoveMaking Ke Side Effects: SS PT 2 pg 15 Jan 8 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG. Yeh kya ho gaya? I can't believe what's happening. You always have one or the other twist up ur sleeve.
Hope they don't have differences develop between them. But I know this will happen n the story will build on that.
Please update soon n pm me for the next part. Please pretty please.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woh kehte hain na Di; der aaye durust aaye. Toh dekhiye, I am here. All yours 😛
Lets not waste any more time 😊


KITNI BAAR KAHA HAI AMMI YA MERI NAZRON KE SAAMNE SE DOOR NA HONA! (The oh so very caring Mr. Shauhar Ahmed Khan)

Zoya had been spending more time in the bathroom than in their bedroom (Poor Zoya or rather Mr. Khan) 😆

something akin to his outbursts with his phone (They are the same)

mood swings and patience (Pati ji, aap sun rahe ho nah)

I am the calm one in this house. Gussa tho aapko karna aata hai. Agar main na hoti tho aapke gusse se poore Bhopal mein earthquake aa gaya hota (Zoya, Zoya, Zoya...aap se koi jeet nahin sakta)


At the pizza parlor

"ZOYA!!" He yelled at the top of his lungs (That voice, the scream and the darr...)


Nursing home

"Z-Zoya ki zindagi ko koi khatra tho nahin hai na doctor? A-aur agar hai----tho"tho---I don't want to become a father." (He is so scared and worried for her)

"beta, Allah bhi unhi ka imtehaan leta hai jo usey pyaare hote hain (Very nice, very well said)👍🏼

Wo bechari ab pizza bhi nahin kha paa rahi hai." - "wo bechari nahin hai!" (Lovely! Roles are reversed)

"She is special and unique," (That she is, Zoya jaise koi nahin) 😊


Khan Villa, their bedroom

Asad's authoritative voice (Yes that's good. Be strict)

I know I will become a second class citizen once the baby arrives (Hahaha, bechari Mr. Khan is feeling jealous already)

"sirf apno se hi yeh umeed ki jaa sakti hai." - "Shukr hai aapne mujhey apna tho samjha." (Very sweet nok jhok) 😳

Budhape mein mere nakhre aur kaun sahega Mr. Khan? Meri jhootan kaun saaf karega?" (That is romantic)

Mere saath reh kar aapka sense of humor bhi bahut achcha ho gaya hai (True! And I am liking it) 😃

"Agar aisi baat hai tho Allah mujhey hamesha pregnant rakhe!" (Oops! Be careful what you wish for, Mrs. Khan!)

It will be my pleasure to work towards that goal (Mr. Naughty Ahmed Khan) 😉


A few weeks later

"ASADDD!!!!" (These moments are very rare)

"Uh-uh---I"I have no idea what am I supposed to feel." (Oh ho, Mr. Buddhu Ahmed Khan)

"Mrs. Khan, bahut gas ho rahi hai aapko? (What?! Hahahaha) 😆

itna bhi insensitive nahin hoon ki aapki excitement ko mehsoos na kar sakoon 😳😳😳

Kahin aap behosh na ho jaayein blood dekh kar (Hahaha, is Mr. Khan scared of blood)


Dr. Pathak's Office

"The test is slightly abnormal." (Oh no...kya hua)

It can actually cause a miscarriage (😲)

I'd rather have a miscarriage than a handicapped baby! (What?!)

Mujhey Allah ki jo bhi marzi hogi wo qubool hai!" (Superb!) 👏




You were right, this one had all the ingredients of that life book; romance, comedy, angst, drama, laughter, tears and much more. This part was also quite heavy, especially about the complications of Zoya's pregnancy. Got to learn a lot about it and also about what could go 'wrong'. Yaad rakhoongi, kisi din ko kam aa jayega 😉 Very educational 😊 👍🏼
The nok jhok...very very very sweet, cute and romantic. Tie baandhna is a cliche scene, but that is actually something which always works; it is that little moment of romance between a husband and wife😳 I am absolutely in love with this Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan. At times he can be so serious (taking care and worrying about Zoya's health) and at times he can be so witty and teasing (when he felt the baby's first kick). He can do anything and everything for his Mrs. Khan, that is why he took her to the pizza parlor, despite his 'love' for pizza 😛 How can someone not love him???
I felt this time you showed a bit more and a deeper side of Mr. Khan and Zoya, which I liked very much because that way, as a reader, you get to know more about the character.
Two great examples: Zoya's outburst in the beginning and Mr. Khan's outburst in the end.
She was irritated about how everyone is worried for the baby expect for her. That is so unlike Zoya, someone who always thinks about others first and then herself.
He shocked me at the end when he said that he would rather have a miscarriage than a disabled child. Perhaps, for men, its quite normal and human to react like that.
The ending was the best; Zoya is right, we should accept whatever The Almighty has in store for us.


You took me by surprise Di by saying that there will be another part. You know I can't get enough of your stories, so the more the merrier 😃 Looking forward to know if this will create some tension between AsYa, either way how they will handle this situation and I want to know of the kid will have indeed a disorder or not.

Aapko milti hai ek ⭐️

Thanks a lot Sangeeta Di! 🤗


P.S. Yes, I said this was the last time I res-ed but since there will be a part 3 I might res for one more time. Mujhe mat maro! 😳

Edited by metoyou - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE...👏👏

LOVE IT SO MUCH...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Sangeeta I am back!! And look what I have got 😊. It's always a delight to read something from you😊. Enjoying it. You know I had the same problem of nausea during my pregnancy so I can relate with these problem very well. You described it so well that I could revisit my one😊. Now waiting for the next part. Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Loved asad & zoya's cute moments
Asad and Zoya having difference of opinion on such an important matter. ...
Waiting to read the next update..
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
another awesome update...loved asya's constant bantering..i imagined whole sequence with KaBhi as Asya...hayee i miss them 😭 😭 ...twist acha hai..waiting for next update .
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MisZoobieDoobie

Wait let me guess the child is autistic right di ?

Is this quite intresting. The child will be like Farhan I guess !
Btw di how are u ? I miss u so much and ur regular posts .
R u still watching QH or left it ?
And yes update soon di cant wait to know whats next


Hi Tanya...no i won't repeat my story year...that would be so boring

There is no prenatal test for autism BTW. Wait and see

I am watching only Zoya's parts on QH these days as the abbu reveal intrigues me. I ff all Hahu and Q family scenes

I will give RV a chance but keeping expectations low as chemistry between leads takes a while to develop- one promo doesn't get me all excited. It would be hard to beat Kabhie chemistry but let's see
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saida.m

Another great update!

I seriously love your updates! They way you manage to mix romance, humor, fear and all the emotions is such a journey for the readers!

Aww, poor Zoya! My Mom had HG when she was pregnant with my baby brother. Can't say it was pretty to see her so sick!

Asad has done it now! Abortion in such cases - It is such a big debate! All those cases with Down Syndrome are so heartbreaking to read! You have brought up a very good issue.

Is the baby going to be like Farhaan from Faasle? How I loved "Mr. Khan is an idiot"!






Thanks said...all the sequences during this pregnancy SS are very realistic and I have tried my best to bring the AsYa characterization into this story...
Yes that abnormal blood test means higher risk of Down's syndrome- let's see how the couple tackles this issue. This is a real life issue and it'd interesting to see how two people with opposite way of thinking handle this. No Farhaan or autism here...i won't repeat that😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

awesome part

asad decision give me shock
plzzz pm me for next part
continue soon


Asad's reaction is very typical of a worried parent- keep in mind his character here

Sorry dear I don't send PMs
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

OMG. Yeh kya ho gaya? I can't believe what's happening. You always have one or the other twist up ur sleeve.
Hope they don't have differences develop between them. But I know this will happen n the story will build on that.
Please update soon n pm me for the next part. Please pretty please.


Thanks dear. These differences in opinion are very realistic between couples and here AsYa have a different way of thinking...Gul has created two very good characters and can/could have continued their story forever...alas😆


Sorry I don't send PMs...

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