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Posted: 11 years ago
This part was awesome..
Asad & his plan😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow... Awesome update 👏
eagerly waiting fr nxt chapter...
Pls pls pls... Update soon.. 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Asya handcuffed & zoya doze off on asad shoulder
Maybe she remind something in dream
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey superb update fari di!
hahaahaha asad !
what an idea sirji!
omg asad has changed so much!
he punctured the tyres!
omg
🤣
detective zoya alert!
🤣
wow inspector becomes mechanic!
🤣
oh my god!
zoya didnt get enough sleep so she dozed off in police cab!
🤣
the inspector told them to sit themselves!
🤣
oh god i cant stop laughing!
so funny!
he is trying so much just to make her remember!
how sweet!
and she is trying her level best to remember!
so sweet!
beautiful couple as well as u r a beautiful writer..
continue soon!
thanx for the pm..
u really have a good sense of humor!
loved it !
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

hey superb update fari di!

hahaahaha asad !
what an idea sirji!
omg asad has changed so much!
he punctured the tyres!
omg
🤣
detective zoya alert!
🤣
wow inspector becomes mechanic!
🤣
oh my god!
zoya didnt get enough sleep so she dozed off in police cab!
🤣
the inspector told them to sit themselves!
🤣
oh god i cant stop laughing!
so funny!
he is trying so much just to make her remember!
how sweet!
and she is trying her level best to remember!
so sweet!
beautiful couple as well as u r a beautiful writer..
continue soon!
thanx for the pm..
u really have a good sense of humor!
loved it !


thnks for the lovely comment thnks alot! ill pm you for next part
the sense of humour ... well what can i say? it comes naturally lol just kidding

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Posted: 11 years ago
my poor baby asad doing everything
to make zoya remember
wow she had a flash of memory
hope she remembers soon so they can
resume their life
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update 😊 😊
eagerly waiting for next part
update soon
MISSING MANGULPUR -KABHI 😭 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update..

asad is trying hard to make zoya remember things..😊

update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsum!!
Asad trying hard to get her memory back!!!
Zoya remembered her mangalpur experience!!!

Thanks 4 pm Far

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey im back ! Soz for the w8 !
Complicated Love Chapter 7 :

Precap : Asad hires a inspector to handcuff him and Zoya so she can remember some things. They are going to the police station.

Zoya had woken up to find herself locked in a cell. She sprung right up and held on to the bars , but stopped when she felt a tug at the end. She looked down to see Asad sleeping , she had forgotten about the handcuffs!

She sat down with him and gently shook his shoulders to wake him up . Luckily, he woke up !

Zoya : ' Mr Khan what is this ? First they arrest us and now they kidnap us ( 😆 ) like this ! How did we end up here?! Why don't you just tell them that we're not the couple they're looking for!

Asad had woken up just to find a Zoya outbursting with questions.

Asad : ' First of all they haven't kidnapped us , you had fallen asleep in the car so ... i ... i carried you here ' he started blushing , Zoya saw this and a smile crept up on her face , she looked everywhere , but not at him .

Asad : ' One minute let me sort this out, i'll go speak to them ' Asad said trying to change the topic.

Zoya : ' You mean... WE ' she said hesitantly, while Asad knotted his eyebrows in confusion. She sighed and directed him towards their hands, that were handcuffed.

Asad : ' Oh ... yes ... chaliye ! 😊 ' he said while standing up.

They came to the bars and called out for the Inspector ( The hired one ).

Inspector : ' Yes ... Kya hua !? ' he wasn't paying attention to who was calling out to him. Instead , he was sitting in a chair resting his legs on the table, reading the newspaper. Finally after a few seconds he heard someone call out his name again in anger .

Ins : ' WHAAA... ' he was going to shout , but he saw Asad glaring at him , he could tell that Asad was angry/frustrated. He quickly stood up, causing some files to drop on the floor and messing up the table .

He gulped down some saliva and he was afraid as he saw Asad rubbing his temples furiously. The Ins started walking towards them and finally reached their cell.

Ins : ' Uhh Y-Y-Yes Sir ? ' he bit out his tongue as he realised that he had addressed Asad as ' Sir ' in front of Zoya. Zoya raised one of her eyebrows in confusion and clearly demanded explanation . Asad rolled his eyes and thought ' Why did i even hire this guy in the first place ? '

Zoya : ' Sir ? Matlab!? ' she said shocked.

Ins : ' Umm woh ... who ... who doesn't know Asad Ahmed Khan , The Great Business Man ! ' He answered quickly . He was proud of the fact he had covered up the lie so easily. Zoya clearly noticed the hesitation in his voice , but decided to leave it , for now !

Ins : ' Anyway so why did you call me ? '

Asad : ' Woh ... we wanted to say we're innocent and we're sure you've mistaken us. We're not the couple you're looking for. ' he replied

Ins : ' Well just because you said it , doesn't mean I'll believe you , you'll have to wait for the information to come in , but until then , you have to stay here ! ' Zoya sighed annoyed about the situation.

After a few hours , Asad saw is plan failing so she secretly signalled the Ins to free them .

With that the Ins came over to them ...

Ins : ' Looks like you two were right and i was wrong . You really aren't the couple we were looking for . You can go now. '

He unlocked the cell and their handcuffs.

Ins : ' Sorry about that ! ' he quickly said to the retreating figures of the 'Love Birds'

Once them two were outside , Asad remembered he had to pay the Ins. As soon as he turned he felt a tug once again and realised they hadn't let go of each others hands , they had thought that the handcuffs were still there .

Zoya also realised that and now was smiling widely.

Asad : ' Miss Farooqui , you can let go of my hand now ' he said as a smile adorned on his face too , when he had seen Zoya's blushing face .

Asad : ' Stay here. I'm coming , i ... i forgot my phone inside. I'll just go get it .' he lied . Zoya just nodded in reply.

Asad entered the police station and took a bundle of money , from his pocket and handed it to the Ins . The Ins just smiled and gave back the money to him and closed Asad's fist to secure the money in his hands, while Asad just looked at him , confused at this action.

Once again the Ins smiled and said

Ins : ' I ' m sorry but i dont take money to unite two lovers ' Asad was surprised to see such a selfless ( not greedy ) man. Asad nodded his head and put his hand on the Ins's shoulder and said ' Thanks for your help Aman , i really appreciate it! '

Aman : ' No worries Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan ' , just as he said that they heard drops of rains. First it was slow , but gradually it became heavier and started pouring badly .

' Zoya ! ' he thought .
' Aman i should get going woh ... Zoya and now this rain '

Aman : ' It's ok bye , next time hope to see you guys together . ' he added cheekily.

Asad smiled and ran outside to Zoya.

OUTSIDE

He looked around but couldn't find Zoya . He ran across the street but still he couldn't find her . He started getting tensed .
' ZOYAAA!!! ' he screamed and ran as fast as he could but she was no where to be seen . He was all drenched , but right now he didn't give a damn!

There he saw her twirling around in a circle, with her arms open wide, eyes closed and enjoying every touch of the rain on her face . She was drenched with her clothes sticking to her skin , like a second layer of skin, showing her curves

All his anger washed away seeing her like this , she was looking absolutely beautiful . He gradually started walking towards her and Zoya didn't notice him coming .

He finally reached her and she stopped looking at his intense gaze on her.
He caressed her hair forgetting about everything else . Then he slowly kissed away all the little droplets of rain on her face which made tingly feelings rush down her body . He finally stared at her lips he slowly caressed her lips with his thumb and she closed her eyes. He slowly bent his head and slowly placed his manly lips into her gentle ones. He deepened the kiss and Zoya also responded . She grabbed a fistful of his hair and pushed him closer . Soon it turned into a passionate one . He slipped his hand around her waist and pushed her closer . She gasped and Asad took this opportunity to slide his tongue inside her mouth . He started tasting every corner of her mouth while she did the same. Once both of them were out of breath they broke apart from each other , but still were close to each other . Asad moved closer to her , but this time headed for her neck and slowly started nuzzling there . Zoya moaned and Asad started sucking on her neck .

Zoya was the first one to come to reality. She pushed Asad back , before they could do anything further . Of course now Zoya knew Asad was a important person in her life, but she knew she had no name to give this relationship . She knew it was more than a friend, but she didn't want him to regret it later so she had to do this.

Asad was shocked himself at how he let his control slip over him , knowing that Zoya didn't remember anything , and she might take it the wrong way .

He stepped forward to explain his actions but she took a step back each time he came closer.

Asad : ' Zoya let me explain ! '

Zoya : ' Mr Khan Please! I don't need any explanation. ' she sobbed as she thought he would say it was all a big mistake but he wanted to tell her how he felt about her . He knew they shouldn't have done this , when she didn't remember their relationship but he didn't want her to think he didn't want this.

Before he could say anything else , she ran away while crying unstoppably
He ran after her realising they were deserted in an abandoned street.

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Edited by SprinklesOfLove - 11 years ago

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