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Posted: 11 years ago
finally asya are going to mangalpur!! good going...
waiting for the next part...
cont soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh i love 1d aswell.
Just love how asad sings a song for her when she is angry
I also luv how asad gets jealous
Do pm me
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
really hopes zoya gets her memory back
asad is really hurting loved the fb
wow he sings to her
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Im sorry i no i said ill be doing it the day after i updated 6A but i totally forgot ! I finished off all my work and now im free so heres the chapter !


Complicated Love Chapter 6B :

Then suddenly the car stopped.

Zoya : ' What happened Mr Khan ? Why did the car stop ? '

Asad : ' Woh ... I think the tyre got punctured ... wait let me check ' he lied as he got off the car to check the tyres

He bent down to pretend he was checking the tyres . * Shit !! What do I do? I wonder why the police officer hasn't come yet . If Zoya comes down and sees the tyres perfectly fine then... Ok calm down think! think ! think!*

Luckily he had a safety pin with him in his pocket ( Don't even ask me why😆😕) He quickly pricked it in the tyres and waited for it to puncture ( 2 tyres BTW )
With that he got up and reached for his phone.

Asad : ' Hello inspector ? whats taking so long ... 30 mins ? ... ok thats fine... Blue Diamond Hotel ? ok ... thanks ...bye ' as soon as he end the call Zoya tapped him on his shoulders.

Zoya : ' What happened ? Who were you talking to ? ' She asked curiously .
Asad was tensed

Asad : ' Woh nothing the Mechanic , the tyres got punctured . ' he lied hesitantly . Well, it wasn't a lie now😆.

Zoya : ' Oh really! How does Blue Diamond Hotel link to a mechanic ? ' she had heard the last few lines.

Asad : ' NO! woh ... woh ... the m - mechanic is from here , so i was asking him if we could stay s-somewhere till then. Nothing else ! ' he stammered away

Zoya looked at him suspiciously ( DETECTIVE !! LOL ! ) , but was satisfied and convinced by his answer .

Zoya : ' Ok fine lets go . ' she started leading the way and was walking towards the Hotel .

Asad was shocked and surprised * How does she know her way ? *

Asad : ' Miss Farooqui how do YOU know the way ? '

Zoya : ' Oh C'mon ASAD ! We ' ve been here befo-- ' her voice faded as sherealisedwhat she had said
He's right how i know this place and when have i been here before ? * she asked herself .
Suddenly images formed in her brain :

Her lying on the mud in some forest
A guy crying
Telling her to wake up!
' ... Zoya 's breathing come quickly ' Said a woman
Her waking up
That man relieved
( Basically the Mangalpur events ) During all this she kept her 2 fingers on the side of her forehead, trying to control her mind but she failed.

Asad saw this and knew he shouldn't have raised this topic . He quickly went by her side and held her firmly .
She recovered and whispered a ' sorry ', but she was still having an headache and Asad noticed that, so he just nodded in reply

They finally reached the Hotel and booked a room .

Zoya : ' Mr - Mr Khan w-w-hy did you book ONE room only ' she said as she felt unconscious.
Asad knew he couldn't let her be alone in this state .

Asad : ' Have you looked at yourself ! No im not leaving you at all ! ' He couldn't help, but be dominate .

Zoya agreed as she couldn't find the strength to argue anymore .

They entered the room and as soon as they did that Zoya fainted on Asad's shoulder .

Asad : ' Zoya !!! W-what happened ? are you okay !? ' he panicked as he patted her cheeks, gently

She opened her eyes , slowly , adjusting to the atmosphere.

Zoya : ' I - i think - '

Asad : ' I think you need rest come on . '
Zoya: ' no im absolutely fi- '

Asad : ' shut up zoya now lay down! ' she layed down on the bed , doing what she was told . Soon she dozed off .
Asad knelt down and held her hands firmly , when he was sure she was asleep .
He let his tear fall out of his eyes .

Asad : ' Zoya why ? I can't bear this plz! Plz why can't you - just remember everything . Ok i promise you if u remember everything ill never make you cry . Ill make sure you won't get hurt . Ill protect you and never let go. Deal? ' he caressed her hair and soon drifted off to sleep.

Soon their sleep was disturbed by a knock on the door.
Asad was the first one to wake up.

He slowly opened the door and saw a man dressed in an inspector clothes.
Asad : ' Oh finally come in . Are you ready ? ' The ' Inspector ' (He's hired by Asad ) straightened himself out and cleared his throat.

'Inspector' : ' Yes sir . When will my acting skills come in handy ? '

Asad : ' Now ! come in . '
Zoya slowly woke up and was shocked to see an inspector at the door.

Asad started the act .

Asad : ' Yes inspector what happened ? '

Inspector : ' I have got news that a couple signed in 30 mins ago in this hotel and they have been accused of stealing and that happens to be you two . ' he said doing a great job .

Zoya : ' NO! your getting it all wrong we are no- '

Inspector : ' Did you sign in 30 mins ago or not ? ' he asked immediately

Asad : ' Yes but - '

Inspector : ' No ifs or buts come with me ' he got up and grabbed Zoya and Asad and handcuffed them both . One in Zoya's left hand and one in Asad's right hand . He smiled as he remembered the time when they were handcuffed , but soon that faded away when Zoya looked at his worriedly .

He nodded reassuringly , saying everything will be fine .
She agreed too .

Soon the ' Inspector ' took both of them out and told them to sit in the car. And they did.

Zoya : ' Mr Khan. How irresponsible ! He told us to sit in the car BY OURSELVES ! i mean what if we ran away ? so stupid ! '

she whispered to Asad which was heard by the ' Inspector ' and he bit his tongue and soon saw the glare Asad gave him in the rear - view mirror. He mouthed a sorry to Asad.

It was a long ride , Asad was disappointed as he has no response from Zoya about the handcuffs . But little did he know Zoya was trying her best to remember why she felt so weird wearing the handcuffs, like she had wore them some other time in this very place , specially when Asad's hand was on the other end. She decided to take it off her mind and concentrated on the situation now .

She felt really tired and she didn't get enough of her sleep in the Hotel , so she soon dozed off.

Asad ran his right hand through his hair and stopped , when he felt a tug on the other end .

Asad realised Zoya was fast asleep , so he picked her Left hand gently and kissed it and then caressed it.

( ' Mera Mann ' from 'Nautanki Sala' the film playing in background )

Asad : ' Dont worry Zoya , even if this didnt work , ill still try , ill do anything to have you back. '

Meanwhile , all this was seen by ' The Inspector ' who was now smiling .
* What a lovely couple ! God bless them and keep them happy ! *

Thanks !! Hope that was worth it !!

Btw my name is 'FAREEN'
i have got other nicknames but you can call me 'Far ' for short thnks


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Edited by masteruni6 - 11 years ago
Zola029 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update !
Hope she remembers soon !
Continue soon !
Thanks for the pm (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
Asad trying his level best ..
To get zoyas memory back ...
Without her being made aware ..
She is finding the sequences familiar ..
But she is not being able to pin point them ...
Thanks for the pm ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Mangalpur scenes
loved the update
continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyc update plz continue soon.😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update dear...pls update soon...

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