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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akaswan


yes i think that i will update tomorrow 😃

No problem😉😆

confused ladki 😕😡
now u sent me pm that u will update tomorrow 😕😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akaswan


Yes i know the i heard about it

But why they said it in some songs ? 😕

oh ok 😊
their use it for some famousy n some like that only...😃
their is a show also named on her which airs on colors named Madhubala 😳


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Posted: 11 years ago

Here is the next pas of my SS i really hoe that you will like it 😃

And like always big thanks to my bubby Sadia ( Swapno)



Part 6

"The guys who will touch one of my sisters, I'm going to kill him" said Asad with anger in his voice.

Farhan look at him with scary eyes and an evil smile and thought

"What are you going to do? You can't even imagine how I hate you Asad." Despite the fact that he hated Asad, Farhan was also really scared of him.

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It was time for Zoya to return home, "home" if one could say that it was home for Zoya but she never felt like she was home in that house, she was just living there .This was not her home and it will never be her home .

"Phupee it's late. I think I'll go now"

"But you can't go alone beta, wait I will call someone to go with you"

"No phupee don't worry, I can go alone and the girls are studying for their exams, so don't worry for me I'll go alone"

"As you want beta but be careful"

"Okay phupee, good bye see you soon In Sha Allah"

Zoya closed the door and turned to leave and she raised her head she saw him. He moved toward her lost in his own thought, then he raised his head and saw her too; for a moment he did not know how to react? He stared at her and found her so beautiful. But Farhan's words came in his mind again and he furrowed his brow.

Zoya was watching this change of expressions all this time. When she saw that his last expression was anger, she just past him and continue to walk to her home, without saying any words to him. But when she past behind him, he said "Assalam-O-Alaykoum"

Zoya did not except that but she replied to his Salam "Wa Alaikoum Assalam" and she left.

Zoya did not want to go to that house directly. So she took all her sweet time. She found a bench and sat on it, she searched on her i-pod and she listened to some music.

Few minutes later she rose and resumed her way to "that house."

When Zoya was next to the Siddiqui's house she felt that someone was following her, she turned to see if there was someone behind her but there was nobody. She began to walk but she felt again that someone was following her; she raised her head suddenly and thought that she saw someone hiding behind the curtains. But it can't be possible because the only thing on this side of the road was the window of Asad's room. She knew that anybody beside him as she remember what Najma told her once that how he disliked her. That's why she refused to believe it was him, why would he look her from his window" you must be mistaken Zoya, it's only your imagination". Zoya mumbled to herself.

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Asad did not understand why he had done that, why he hide behind his curtains when she raised her head, "firstly why did you at the window waiting for her to go inside, Idiot". His brain chided at him.

The first thing Asad did when he entered to his home was to run to his room and to see if she returned home safely through his window. But he didn't understand why he reacted like that. He was very confused.

Zoya stopped at the entrance and took a sharp large breath "let's go Zoya you can do it" She finally opened the door and saw all the Siddqui family members with two strangers around the dining table.

"Zoya you are finally at home" asked Razia "come and meet my cousin Chandi bi and Feroz"

"Who is this girl Razia bi who returned at home so late" the fat lady asked, Zoya watched her and said nothing.

"This new generation is very irresponsible, what a girl from good family would do that" Feroz looked at Zoya with disgust.

Zoya said nothing and headed towards her room.

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PRESENT TIME

"Zoooyyya !!!!"

"What, what??!" Zoay suddenly came out of her thoughts.

"Come I want to show you something, hurry up" shouted Haider from living room.

"Okay, I'm coming" and she ran to the living room.

"What it is Haider, and what do you want?"

"Come look Sadia is finally doing what I'm saying to her to do. Look how she had beaten this poor thing" Haider was really happy and he has a great smile on his face.

"Are you serious Haider? This is why you called me here?"

"Of course Zoya, how can you not be happy now? She will beat this cousin of her"

"You are very stupid Haider, how can you teach this to your daughter?"

Haider was trying to teach his daughter who was only one year old to fight, because Sadia's cousin always beat her when they are together and for Haider it was unforgivable. His little princess had to learn to defend herself.

"muahahaha Zoya look, take your camera please, Nelly prepare yourself. You will suffer this weekend" Haider was talking to himself now.

"I don't what I will do with you"

Zoya look at her niece who was beating a poor pony plush.

"I'm going to my room and don't you dare to disturb me again, Haider or else you will deal with me and I will beat you like Sadia is beating this poor thing" with that Zoya left for her room.

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Zoya took her mobile and re-read Asad message. The message said

"I want to apologize for everything and for what happened in the past. I was thinking that you will never want to talk to me again and I'm very happy that you send me a message"

After Zoya finished that message, she saw another message

"I coming to Bhopal next week and I would love to see if it does not bother you"

Zoya could not believe her eyes he wanted to see her "WOW"

"Yes of course, I would also love to see you too, it's been so long" replied Zoya after ten long minutes of relaxation.

She did not talk about the first message. She did not want to talk about that, as she did not like that he never send her the first message, the past still hurt a lot.

Asad was in his hotel room in Delhi. He was there for a big deal and it been three months that he was living in this hotel room.

He was very happy to talk with her again after everything, just thinking of the past make him angrier, he want to forget what happened, he deplored about what he had done in the past , and he was glad that Zoya was not like him and she forgave him.

Asad's mobile rang and it was Zoya replied. He was very eager to know her reply about what he asked her, if she also wanted to meet him and she said yes.

"Yes of course. I would love to see you too, it's been so long" Asad was grinning like fool while reading that reply from Zoya.

He read the message and he thought that, this time he would not let anything or anyone come between them and separate them.

Asad knew since when he saw her for the first time, that Zoya was the love of his life, he did not know how to explain it but he knew that it is her and only her.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Res 😃
Unres !

Awesome update ! 👏👏
Loved it !
Poor Zoya ! 😭
She feels so alone !
It must be hard for her to feel unwanted and not-loved in that house ! 😭
But at least she has Dilshad here for her 😃
Glad that Asad at least acknowledged her this time 😊
He finds her beautiful and really cares for her 😳
He kept an eye on her till she arrived home !
That's so sweet of him ! 😳
Chand Bi and Feroz 🤢
Omg ! Haider 🤣🤣
What is he teaching his kid !?😆😆
Bechari Sadia ! 😆😆

"I'm going to my room and don't you dare to disturb me again, Haider or else you will deal with me and I will beat you like Sadia is beating this poor thing"

🤣🤣


"Yes of course. I would love to see you too, it's been so long" Asad was grinning like fool while reading that reply from Zoya. 😳

Good that Asad has apologized ! 😳
At least he accepted that he was wrong in judging her !
He wants to meet her !??! Yiiipiiie ! 😆
Asad was grinning like fool while reading that reply from Zoya. 😳😳

In love are we ? 😳

Asad knew since when he saw her for the first time, that Zoya was the love of his life, he did not know how to explain it but he knew that it is her and only her.

That was so cute !
Finally Asad has realised his feelings for her and isn't going to let anything come between them !

Can't to see their reaction when they'll meet !

Already eager to read your next update
Continue soon !
Thanks for the pm 🤗

Sorry for the delay 😕
Edited by zola007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

confused ladki 😕😡
now u sent me pm that u will update tomorrow 😕😆


Yes i know i can be very confused sometimes 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

oh ok 😊
their use it for some famousy n some like that only...😃
their is a show also named on her which airs on colors named Madhubala 😳



Ahh okay thank you 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res 😃
Unres 😉 😃

Awww sooo sweeet, Asad finds her beautiful! 😳
He was even keeping an eye on her that she remains safe! 😳
Disgusting Feroz and Chand bi as usual! 🤢
Haider! 😆 Nelly reminded me of "la petite maison dans la prairie"! 🤣
HAAAYYYEEE ASAD WANTS TO MEET HER!!! 😳

"Yes of course. I would love to see you too, it's been so long" Asad was grinning like fool while reading that reply from Zoya. 😳

My (rather ur ;D) Asad is grinning like a fool huh?! 😃 😳 😆

Asad knew since when he saw her for the first time, that Zoya was the love of his life, he did not know how to explain it but he knew that it is her and only her.

Haaaye main marjawan gudh khake! 😳 😆 (expression pour dire je suis combler! 😆 )

J'ai adorer cet update, c'etait trop mignon!! 😳
Maintenant c'est mon tour de dire update soon! 😳 😆

PS: sorry for being late i have been busy! 😕
Edited by SBanoMalik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akaswan


You two are just 🤣


yeah we know 😎🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akaswan


Yes i know i can be very confused sometimes 😆

now tell me who is confused now 😡😡😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akaswan


Ahh okay thank you 😃

welcome mango pulp 😆

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