ASYA SS 'The text message' Link to thread II add

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is my first story ever. I always read story in the forum but i never had tha courage to write anything i really hope that people will liked it. And it's a little short sorry for this.


And i want to dedicated this story to my Bubby Swapno thank you so much and love you bubby 🤗



The Text Massage

" Najma can you give me the phone number of you brother please" asked Zoya after ten long minutes of reflection and hesitation.

" Of course no problem" replied Najma with a great smile on her face.

" Thank you " murmured a blushing Zoya.

LATER IN THE EVENING

Go Zoya a little courage will not harm you, just press this damn button and send him the message. She closed her eyes counted till five and finally press the button send of her mobile. After sending the message, she threw her mobile on the other side of the bed to afraid of the answer. She thought back about what she had write and began to regret, but she wait thirty minutes, ... one hour ... and finally three hours but nothing happen and she collapsed in her bed.

He had not responded, she felt bad and began to be ashamed for taking this initiative. It took her so much time and courage to send this message , she didn't know what to do so she decide to sleep a little.

ONE WEEK LATER

" I sand a message to your brother and he did not answer me I feel so bad" said Zoya to Najma looking the sky

"But it's normal, if he did not answer you because his mobile was not working" replied Najma "you should try again"

" Never" shouted Zoya I'm too nervous and I deleted his number" Zoya said with a pout.
"I'll give it back to you. And send him an other message" Nazma said to her.

LATER IN HER ROOM

" Hey it's Zoya how are you ?" send Zoya to Asad
After thirty seconds she became panicked " Allah miya he does not respond, what is he thinking about me. "
Bip bip ... she jumped on her mobile and when saw that he had replied she nearly had a heart attack
" Hey Zoya i'm fine and you?"
Zoya jumped everywhere and shouted " HE ANSWERED ME " " ASAD ANSWERED ME" with a large smile.
"When I think that I took eight years before speaking him , this is the most beautiful day of my life." She thought to herself, smiling.




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BelleAme thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yay me firsssttt😃This is reallly awesome...Zoe s hesitation and her dilemma very well explained...👏I loove this totally...U could continue this ,it would be awesome...😉Awesome os👏😃Lovepinky😊
Edited by pinky06 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww...that's my pleasure..
I love you buddy
Just keep going
I am really happy that you posted it
and you know my opinion about this story...so I will not bore you writing it again
Just wanna Say a big...

...Congratulations...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That's so me🤣
Good one👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome👏👏

right more na😛😛

loved it😊😊
Edited by 11sinal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its cool...👏

u must write...not nly OS but sum short stories also...😊

but this one, it finished so soon...

continue their text messages if u can...😊

thnks fr the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Start! Would love to read more. Sounds like fun, no roona, dhoona. congratulations and Good luck.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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8 years!!! 😲 😆
Poor Zoya 😆
Loved it!!! 😳 would love if u continue 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinky06

yay me firsssttt😃This is reallly awesome...Zoe s hesitation and her dilemma very well explained...👏I loove this totally...U could continue this ,it would be awesome...😉Awesome os👏😃Lovepinky😊


Congratulation for being the first 😉
And thank you so much for liking it 🤗i was so affraid to post it 😒

I will try to continue when i will be more comfortable to write 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: swapno

Awww...that's my pleasure..

I love you buddy
Just keep going
I am really happy that you posted it
and you know my opinion about this story...so I will not bore you writing it again
Just wanna Say a big...

...Congratulations...


Thank you so much bubby 🤗

Without you i would have never done it 😃

And i'm happy that you liked it 😳😃

Love you bubby 🤗

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