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Posted: 11 years ago

So here i'm with another part , i just want to thank my best bubby Swapno and mochhug for their help because without them i would have stuck without any idea and i could'nt udapte today


And i would also want to dedicated this udapte to my new friends in this forum SbanoMalik, --SH7_Sunny--, Zola007, AsyaManeet and Radhika i love your comment 😃.





Part 4

Zoya was shocked would be an understatement of the year. She was really surprised not only with his replies but mainly with the fact that he was sending another message willingly which meant that he also wanted to continue this conversation with her. Zoya thought that it was impossible for them to talk normally again after all those misunderstandings and problems that Farhan had created few years ago.

FLASHBACK START

Asad joined with his friends in the park next to his house, they were talking about random things.

"We are going to eat something, do you want to come with us?" asked Fahad to Asad who had just arrived.

"No thanks, I will eat at home, you can go I will wait here"

"I am also waiting here with Asad. I'm not hungry anymore." Farhan said to them.

"Okay guys see you later" said their friends in unison and they left from park.

"So what's up Farhan, it's been long" asked Asad

"Yeah I know but I was a little busy, I didn't tell you but we have a guest in our house. She came from Turkey, most probably was living in a village. This is the first time she came here. I don't like her at all, she knows nothing about the great city, she even has no manners, you should see her" saying that Farhan began to laugh a loud.

"Why are you becoming so nasty" said an irritated Asad.

"You said that because you don't know her, she has a very bad reputation from where she came"

It was hard For Asad to believe him because even if he observed her only a few minutes she doesn't seem to be a bad person. But Farhan would not have said that for nothing and Farhan knew her better than him.

"But why does she live in your home?" Asad could not help but ask the question.

"I don't know. Her parents surely wanted to get rid of her" said an annoyed Farhan. "I can give you an advice buddy; don't let her be friendly with your sisters"

SAME TIME IN KHAN'S VILLA

"So, how do you found the city?" asked Nikhat to Zoya.

"I don't know. I have just arrived and I see nothing yet"

"Don't worry, I will show you the city. I know everything here"

"Thank you so much. It is very sweet of you" Zoya was so happy to finally have some friends, because she was starting to feel alone here.

"So, do you have a boyfriend?" asked Nikhat naughtily.

"Not again Nikhat, please be serious with your question" Najma was very annoyed by the behavior of Nikhat.

"What it is just a question? This not because you didn't have boyfriend that everybody is like you, so Zoya?" Nikhat snapped at Nazma.

"I also agree with Najma, are you serious about this question?" Zoya said this time with confusion.

"Yes I'm very serious tell me and I will tell you if I have one too" Nikaht said to her smugly.

Zoya was in a little shock. "They are only reading in school and she has a boyfriend in this age, is this girl for real?" she thought.

"No, I don't have boyfriend and I don't want any guy next to me. I'm not interested" Zoya wanted to finish this topic.

"Oh girl you are like Najma. You are not funny at all. I don't know what I'm going to do with you two" Nikhat said sadly.

"So leave us alone no body holds you back here" replied Najma with a hint of sarcasm in her voice.

Nikhat glared at Najma. She was about to answer her back but the door opened.

"Girls it's dinner time. Come eat" it was Dilshad on the door.

"Okay girls, it was nice to meet you. I will go now. See you soon" she stood up and took her stuffs.

"You are not going anywhere. I said the dinner is ready and I include you when I said the girls, so let's go." Dilshad voice was firm but also pleasant. Zoya was affected by this gesture it was the first time since her arrival that an adult was talking to nice with her.

"Okay aunty, I'm coming" Zoya was smiling like never. She was very happy.

"Ami you will never change" Nikhat was just behind her. Najma was again annoyed by Nikhat's choice of words. She found that Nikhat doesn't know her limits. But it was Nikhat, her beloved sister and they can't change her, they also love her for that.

Suddenly Nikhat's mobile rang, it was a call "girls, you go ahead. I will join you in the table"

"Hello baby, how are you? I missed you so much" murmured Nikhat.

"I don't have much time but I'm in my way to your home but I'm with your Bhaijaan, okay, he is coming, bye" said Farhan in a low tone and cut the call in haste.

"With whom were you talking?" Asad saw Farhan hung up his mobile

"Oh! It's just my mother. I was telling her that I'm going to have dinner with you tonight" Farhan lied to Asad.

Farhan was Nikhat's boyfriend. For Nikhat it was serious but for him Nikhat was just one among many other girls.

SIDDIQUI'S HOUSE

"Where's this stupid girl? Doesn't she see that it's dinner time?" shouted Razia

"Calm down ami" Tanveer tried to pacify her mother. "Let just eat. I'm very hungry "

"But what will Dilshad think about us? Go and call her, Tanveer" Razia tried to understand.

"Why, ami? We don't mind about what will Dilshad think of us? I told you let's eat and like this we are going to have more meal for us" Tanveer was irked with her mother's behavior. She did not want to share her food with Zoya.

"You are right. Let's go" Razia understood.

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"Asad and Farhan you are here" Dilshad chirped at the duo. Zoya turned around and saw him. It was the first time and she couldn't look away from him. She did not know why but she felt something, she never felt before.

"Yes we are going to our room" Asad was not happy to see her again in his house and with his sisters. Especially with the entire things that Farhan told him about her.

"But I was waiting for you. I want you to take Zoya back to her auny's house, it's late "Dilshad did not understand why Asad was reacting like this.

"I have things to do. I can't, anyway it's not so far that she can't go alone" Asad barked at Dilshad.

"Asad!" shouted Dilshad but he didn't let her finish. He took Farhan with him and they led to his room.

"It is okay ami we will take her back" said Nazma and Nikhat in unison.

Zoya remained quiet all the time. She found this boy so rude.

After that she bid good bye to Dilshad aunty and the girls took her back but they refused to enter the Siddiqui mansion.

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"Where are you? We have dinner without you. We did not know if you are going to eat here or Dilshad aunty?" Razia shoot daggers with her eyes at Zoya as soon as she entered that house.

"It is okay aunty, I eat there. I'm going to sleep now" Zoya replied at her.

"Wait Zoya, before you go to sleep, can you please wash the dishes and make a quick brush in the living room? We are very tired." Razia asked her sweetly this time.

Zoya didn't expect that but she didn't know how to say no. She was always happy to help the others.

"Okay aunty. I'm going to change and I will do it next"

"Eh! Zoya can you lend me your little black blouse please?" Tanveer was very sweet when she needed something from her.

Zoya found that very odd because she didn't show her purse to anybody. Maybe Tanveer and Razia checked her bag when she was not in home. She thought about it. Moreover the blouse must be two sizes bigger than her, then why she would need this?

"Uhhh, yes take it if you want. I don't mind"

2 HOURS LATER

Zoya was in her room when someone knocked on her door.

"Yes come in. They didn't even let people rest a little in this house" thought Zoya

"Hey, it's me so how was your day?" It was Farhan Zoya did not know why he was there.

"In fact I saw that you are with Nikhat and Najma today. I just wanted to warn you Nikaht and Najma have a very bad reputation here, don't be too much friendly with them. It's just an advice so good night" with that he left the room and closed the door.

"What just happened here? I don't understand anything" she threw herself on her bed and closed her eyes.

NEXT MORNING

Zoya was sleeping. She felt someone's presence in her room. So, she opened her eyes and she almost fall off the bed. Just in front of her bed, Frahan was sitting on a chair watching her.

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY ROOM?" shouted Zoya.

Edited by akaswan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--


Oye hoye!!!
Mere Abbu bade shareef hai!!!!
I was irritating u!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
res unres!! Yaay I'm first!!! Thank you for dedication Hummi!!! My sweet sister!!!! Awsum update!!! Flash back!! Omg dis Farhaan!!! He created misunderstandings!!! B/w AsYa!!!! Dis Tanveer & Raziya!!! Dey are so evil!!! Made poor Zoya work!!!! Asad is just dumb!! He believed dat Farhaan!!! Farhaan is Nikhat 's Boyfriend!!! What d hell is Farhaan doing in her room!!!! Do pm me next part!!!! Update soon Baraka!!!
Edited by AsyaManeet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...👏

Poor zoya feeling sad for her...😔

That farhan had poisioned asad mind...😡

What is farhan doing in zoya room...😕

Waiting eagerly for nxt part so update soon...😊
Edited by Shubh007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the dedication baraka aka humeira called bus 4 of spammers😳😆🤗
how will this misunderstanding will be solved now...
all this done by that stupid farhan😡🤬
just kill that farhan...😡🤢 he is all cause of this problem now...
does najma hate nikhat... coz she talks with her very irritatedly😕
same goes for the nikhat... is there any problem btw them😕
haha u made devils daughter to devils mom tanveer n razia
good choice that their r mother daughter.. n i hate them like anything 😡🤢
nikhat joked she had boyfriend in school to only know that does have a boyfriend...😆
poor zoya their make her work like a sweeper... baraka just vice versa this
situation with them...😡 poor zoya has to face all this...😭
asad beieved farhan like this only n he talked abt her very rudely...
now farhan maked zoya fell that both nikhat n najma r bad 😡
ahh u left at cliffy... now why u end like that baraka...😡
what was farhan doing there in her room 😲😡
plz clear all misunderstandings n make asad n zoya once again...
Flashback is really good humeira 😆
update soon n this time fast n if not i will send Bhaiseena to ur house... Booo 😈😲🤣
thanks for the pm for later coz i res before it only 😆
Edited by --SH7_Sunny-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

yaa i am very shariff...😳
i know that u were irritating me...😡😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow update after soo long time😃
amazing chapter..
poor zoya..she was hated by many people without no reason..
najma and dilshad were sweet hearts❤️
asad blindly belive his friend..who s a big liar
s farhan a pshycho???
loved the whole update😉
cont soon
Edited by CHOCOSWATHI - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--


Abbu u r so mean u knw!!!

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Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

naa dont call me abbu it reminds me abt that old qh with kabhi till july...
coz it makes me feel bad n i dont want to feel bad n cheated by channel by this change of character...🤢😡😭
and i am not mean... n i dont want to be called any character of qh now...😡🤢

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Posted: 11 years ago
haha without pm he res kar liya baraka

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