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Posted: 11 years ago
That's nice !!
Glad that u continued it !

N poor zoya
I hate haseena for sure !!
Please make it as a happy story😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am glad you are continuing it
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Thank you so much 😃

I will udapte soon 😉
akaswan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: reyna.

That's nice !!

Glad that u continued it !

N poor zoya
I hate haseena for sure !!
Please make it as a happy story😉


Thank you so much 😃

Don't worry Zoya is a strong girl 😉

I will udapte soon 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you i will udapte soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
LOVED IT THAT WAS REALLY GOOD THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess101

LOVED IT THAT WAS REALLY GOOD THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON😃


Thank so much 🤗

And I'll try to udapte soon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tv05

nice update...update soon


Thank you 😃

I will try to udapte very soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

PRESENT TIME

Five minutes later, when Zoya's over excitement was subsided

"Stupid you, Zoya!! What are you doing? Answer him now...No no no... wait a little so that he does not think that you are desperate". Zoya thought to herself, cutting her finger nails with the teeth.

"Okay I can answer him but what can I do to make this conversation lasts for long , think Zoya what can you say to him," Zoya was pacing into her room and was thinking for a good excuse.

"Well I'll just tell him that I'm fine and then I will see what is going to happen." Zoya confirmed.

"I'm fine thank you:-D "Zoya replied with a smile smiley but inside her heart she was not happy at all of this answer. She wanted to tell him more, wanted to hear something from him too. She sighed loudly thinking about Asad. He never tells anything, except hi-hello.

SAME TIME IN ASAD'S HOUSE

Asad was reading Zoya's response with a smile on his face, he was very happy because he liked Zoya very much too but he was a shy boy and he respected her so much. He had always wanted to talk to her but he did not know how to do it.

Asad also wanted that this discussion lasts for long.


"What can I say to her?" he was in the same state like Zoya.

------------------FLASHBACK START-----------------------

"Nikhat and Najma come here I want you to meet someone, this is Zoya she came from Turkey and she is living with Razia" said their mother Dilshad.

When she said that, the girl's smile faded away but they were very happy to meet her.

"Hey I'm Nikhat and this is Najma my little sister. Nice to meet you"

Nikhat was a girl full of life, while Najma seemed quieter.

"Hi I'm Zoya and nice to meet you too"

"How old are you?" asked Nikhat

"I'm 14 years and you?" Zoya asked back.

"Me too " said Nikhat always with a great smile.

"Oh another thing, Najma, Zoya and you will be in the same school. I hope that everything will be alright between both of you" said Dilshad.

"Everything will be okay ami don't worry. Come Zoya I will show you my room. Najma you come too" said Nikhat cheerfully.

During all that time there was a boy who was watching his sisters with this girl. He was observing them standing infront of the door of his room.

"Who is she and she is living in Farhan's house, why did he not tell me that?" Asad was thinking.

Farhan was one of Asad's best friends. He was a very good friend of Asad but unfortunately he was Razia's son. Asad hated this woman but for his friendship with Farhan he never said anything.

"I really want to know who that girl is. I should ask Farhan about her .No, it's a bad idea. What will he think about me?" Asad was confused about his own reaction.

Despite their very good friendship Asad would never talk to this kind of things with Farhan. He did not know why but he was not comfortable with that.

"Asad where are you going and what you are thinking about?" asked Dilshad confusedly.

"Woh ... woh actu ..."

"Let it be I don't want to know." Said Dilshad and she let him stand where he was standing.

"Ami I am going out to see my friends" said Asad, leaving the house.

"I am not going to ask anything about this girl to Farhan. I know he will tell me about it by himself." Asad thought, making his way to Farhan's house.

------------------------FLASHBACK END-----------------------------

Zoya was lying on her couch,

"Just Hi? All that! Nothing else? " Zoya was mumbling with a sad expression.

Twenty minutes had been passed after that she had sent the message.

"What are you thinking about yourself? He does not care about you. You are just his sister's friend" said Zoya's head.

"No, he does" Zoya's heart protested. In the fight between head and heart, Zoya chose the head.

"It's sad but it's the truth and it is better that I accept this" she finally thought out loud.

And suddenly her mobile vibrate

"Who is that? I cannot even be sad in peace." She thought with a sad pout. It was another message and when she opened it her face directly lit up with 1000 watt's smile, showing her dimples on her cheek, moistening her eyes.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Yipeee...Third part...🥳
I just loved it...❤️
It is so cute...
both are confused...but both like each other...😊
Aww...our cutie pies...☺️
We want another long update...
Really soon...
Thank you buddy...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

Yipeee...Third part...🥳

I just loved it...❤️
It is so cute...
both are confused...but both like each other...😊
Aww...our cutie pies...☺️
We want another long update...
Really soon...
Thank you buddy...🤗


LOL finally i have udapte 😆

Thank you bubby i'm very glad that you like it🤗

And Promise but really promise that the next udapte will be very soon and it will be a long udapte 😎😃

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