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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

hey

it's nice that you will continue it
btw write in a way u like
i m gonna love it...😉
cont asap


Seriously i'm a little affraid about the udapte
but i will udapte today 😃
And thank you 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 2


FLASHBACK START


The first time when Zoya put her foot in India, she was at the age of fourteen. Everything was new for her; she had to start a new life here, away from her family and friends who were in Turkey.

Zoya could not adjust with the environment there. She lived in Istanbul and in winters snowfalls occurred which was not helpful for her eye. She was suffering from corneal problem. She had a hole in her left eye cornea. So doctors from there suggested her to shift some of suitable environment. Beside the treatment cost, it was much lower in India than Turkey and the doctor's in India were also more competent from the Turky's.

Her health was deteriorating day by day and she had to start the treatment as soon as possible.

She had been ill from the initial days of her childhood and when her parents could not bear her suffering for this longer, they decided to send her to Delhi for her treatment.

Zoya was an introvert girl and her serious illness increased the lack of her confidence.

Zoya was not used to complain from her childhood. She had learnt to be courageous and always kept a smile in her face. This was her way to fight with her daily life.

She was staying at her aunt's house in India. At the beginning everything was going well with her aunt but as time passed her aunt became irritated and wicked.

Zoya used to spend all her days in her room. She hardly ate anything and she had insomnia, she got up every morning with red and swollen eyes but never complaint anything about it to her parents. She did not want to make them worry for her.

"But what will I do with you?" shouted Hassena bi at one day morning.

"I did not know why I accepted to take you in my home? I cannot even spend time with my children. All I am doing here to lose my important times to take you to the doctors. Ya Allah I'm tired of you" said Hassena bi.

"Why did your parents sent you here, moreover they are so tightfisted. Could they not spend some more money with everything you cost me? And your mother I finally understand now why your mother sent you away. She wanted to get rid of you. She is so cle..." Haseena was unstoppable.

"STOP, I swear that if you said another word against her I will just kill you ..." said Zoya , she can't take it anymore.

"Ya Allah " shouted Hassena " I want you to out of my house right now"

"I will do it with great pleasure" said Zoya taking out her mobile from her pocket.

"Ami ... " murmured Zoya

"What happen meri bachchi ..." asked Zeenat and Zoya told her everything

"Packed your stuff I will send you in my cousin's place in Bophal" said Zeenat.



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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update but very short
poor zoya 😭i can understand situation of zoya eye problem is very difficult to deal with society
i know the pain and stress one undergoes having problem in eye especialy in single eye
haseena is such a bitch😡
continue soon
and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update.. Do continue soon and please pm me when you do
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was short but I understand u r not yet comfortable with writing 😊
And yes, THANK U FOR CONTINUING 😃
Poor Zoya 😭 Bhaiseena as usual... 😡
But nice one 😉 thats when she will go and live with Dilshad?? 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI

nice update but very short

poor zoya 😭i can understand situation of zoya eye problem is very difficult to deal with society
i know the pain and stress one undergoes having problem in eye especialy in single eye
haseena is such a bitch😡
continue soon
and pm me


Thank you 🤗

Yes it's very difficult for her but she's a strong girl 😃

And i will try to write long udapte 😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...amazing...
keep it up dear...👏

poor zoya...
and Haseena...😡

its gr8 but..she'll be in bhopal...means at Dilshad's home naa...😉

excited...update soon...nxt tym pls thoda bada update...😉

and thnks fr the pm...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Nice update.. Do continue soon and please pm me when you do


Thank you i try to udapte soon 😃

And sorry for the PM I told you that I would send you one but I forgot😒
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Posted: 11 years ago
😃 😃 😃
I am so proud of you...You know why?? You are a brave girl. You first write it in french then you translate it in English..I know how much difficult it is. So if it is short then I would not mind. because I am considering your effort and love for us...thank you so much for continuing it...and you are doing great..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

That was short but I understand u r not yet comfortable with writing 😊
And yes, THANK U FOR CONTINUING 😃
Poor Zoya 😭 Bhaiseena as usual... 😡
But nice one 😉 thats when she will go and live with Dilshad?? 😉


Thank you so much 🤗

Don't worry Zoya is a strong girl 😉

And Hassena is Hassena 😡😆

No she will not live in Dilshad house but iin Razia Hhouse in my story dilshad and Razia are neighbour😃

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