Asad-Zoya FF: Heartbeat Warfare II Chapter 22 Pg 119

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Noe123

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Posted: 11 years ago

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RAJ

@RAJLUVRIYA

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very nice update. So the surgery is over. Love the line Dr.Gupta said your life's life is saved. I think asad now acpt zoya as his heartily. Hope so. Hope now we se asad taking care of zoya.
Confuse for last part. Zoya has none other than humera. There from where her mother come? Is she alright? Hope nothing bad happend. Confused very much. Or am i miss something.
Thanks for pm. And pls pls try to update next part soon

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Now that i read the update i can sleep in peace for the night 😎

rest will unres in morning 😆

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thread 2 👏

To the update.

Asad mera jaan

Okay no more drooling! But commendable scene was when he was feeling dizzy and about to pass out. 👏 It was so very well written that i could picture it in-front of my eyes 👏

Asad and his thoughts and him accepting - Aye haiye. Accept nahi karta magar phir bhi karta hai 😆 Denial in love koi in se seekhe 🤣

Loved the way you made the thoughts of Asad picturesque to the readers. 👏

Graphic. But i love these kinds of Graphics. 😆 😆

Ammi hoti toh kehti 'Allah tera lakh lakh sukhar hai! ⭐️ 😳 - Asad accepted 😆

2 sweet parts - Raavi and Sagaar's convo and asking about keeping Zoya back at their place. and the Doc saying 'Your Life's life is safe now!' 👏

Symbolic as well as beautiful 😳

And Zoya, awwhh poor poor baby 😭 She is in soo much of pain that she remembers her mommy 😭 Asad's there by her nay? 😳

btw FAISAL kahan gaya ?

Btw when do i anticipate an update now? 😆

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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome update. Asad is falling for Zoya, wow.

And why she saw her Ammi. Is she alright ?

Please please update soon.

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friendsall

@friendsall

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

why did she see her ammi...is she hallucinating???? hope she s fine...Asad's life s fine😊

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starsinmyeyes

@starsinmyeyes

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow...Asad is realizing😃..awesome

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

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-StarsLinedUp-

@-StarsLinedUp-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Although the chapter had a lot of serious moments with the operation, I still enjoyed the update, the way Asad seems to be giving up on the idea of fighting his feelings for Zoya was a welcome incident. Wanna read how things go about from here on..and what's going to happen to Zoya..so continue soon..ur doing n awesome job😃

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Ankahee

@Ankahee

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

RES I missed page 1

Loved the chapter. All of it, very real. Asad's life 😊. The realization and acceptance, of all the good things. With happiness and a smile. 😊 Simple, straight, honest, with love.

Cannot wait for the next chapter Noe. Excellent storytelling. 👏

Faisal and Ammi, hmmm

I hope Zoe will accept Raavi and Saagar's offer. I like Saagar's conviction. 😆 I think he will be the next to find out Asad's feelings.

It is a good chapter on all front's medically, (coming from a non medical person), emotionally, story wise, everything. 👍🏼

Edited by notagain - 11 years ago