Asad-Zoya FF: Heartbeat Warfare II Chapter 22 Pg 119

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Ankahee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

CONGRATS on the new thread Noe!!! This is one of the best story on AsYa!! Thank you for writing and sharing this beautiful story with us. 🤗

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Noe123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: snehasya
hey really sorry first of all accept my apologies for even posting it the fact that nothing is been given to patient
I didn't knew I would make you so apologetic really sorry on that part I just thought I know so let me share that's it no intentions of making fun or anything else I hope you forgive me

and I just love reading this update you said some one was going to come I guess it would be in next update

asad is getting to know that he has a certain thing for zoya and I was more than happy the way he reacted he thought of her every reaction he only stabilised himself for her

thanks for pm and sorry once again

Hey, please don't be sorry. I am glad that you pointed it out. Otherwise I would have never known. I don't claim to keep things authentic, but at the same time this was a small thing that I could have avoided. So, there is no need for you to say sorry.

Thanks for your comments.

Aah...you were waiting for Faizal, per yahan pe to Ammi aa gayi 😉

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Amazing update... everything inside... the OT.. ..how the doc chat...
keep it calm...

and you can see that asad emotion... towards zoya...

is strong... and he is falling for her...

Saagar & Raavi... so sweet of them... raavi wants zoya to stay with them...

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-Astrid-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Amazing...I can understand how much research u have to do for writing such updates😊...u described the op in so much detail😲...👏...Asad finally accepted his feelings for Zoya😳😳...loved that part🤗...update soon😃

P.S-Faisal will come for sure😉(I was badly expecting him in this one😭),so Ammi has to wait😆

Edited by ap3h7u - 11 years ago

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Noe123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: notagain
RES I missed page 1

Koi gal nahi. MissHumptyDumpty has got two spots. Steal one 😉😆

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Noe123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: notagain
CONGRATS on the new thread Noe!!! This is one of the best story on AsYa!! Thank you for writing and sharing this beautiful story with us. 🤗

Aww...thank you 🤗

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manognasai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Noe🤗
Awesome update!Asad is so worried abt Zoya...yes her safety,her happiness is mattering him more now!He is realising that he has fallen for her!The way he is thinking wat will ammi say? is so cute...The best dialogue was "Ur life's life is saved"❤️She indeed is becoming his life slowly...

Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago

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vinita459

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

First of all congratulations on your new thread 😊 really happy for you.

The update was great as usual. The surgery went fine but she is still in critical condition. Did she just go in semi coma and her soul met her ammi. I love predicting and this the best I could up with this one.

Actually there is a movie I saw where the girl goes in coma and her soul travels around. Basically she is stuck between life and death. I got the same feeling when I read the end. I hope I am wrong and she was only hallucinating.

Can't wait to read the next chapter so please have mercy on us and update sooner. 😊

Vinita

Edited by vinita459 - 11 years ago