AsYa FF Thrd 2 'The Butterflies!' - Page 94

I have tears in my eyes after reading this...I could feel Asad's pain😭...Zoya's also not wrong...it's just a big misunderstanding...Mr.Farooqui😡😡...

You write so well, I could totally feel the anguish and pain that they're both going through. What tomatoes, I'd give you cupcakes and chocolates.

Yes, it's heartwrenching, and painful. But maybe it is needed? There must be some level of angst that Asad have to go through for him to finally be the lover that Zoya rightfully deserves. Trusting, non-controlling and just a lil bit easy going.

If the next part is gonna be worse, than I'm waiting with bated breath, for I know it would translate into something beautiful.

Am big fan of storyline, a bigger fan of writings. And yours are amazing!

Much support and love,

FaRz

Such a heartbreaking update!
Poor Asad and Zoya!! Can't
believe how close they were bt nw its over.
Asad is hurt...dat hurt s beyond repair... this all bcoz of rashid
Continue soon

Oh but you are wicked!!! Such a cliffhanger!! and then to top off you say, "have a nice weekend"!!!

Hey dear
I much more a silent reader
I read your this ff last Sunday and previous two parts now.
I just loved it.
For me Rashid is, was and will be a spineless man.
I loved Asad's behaviour towards him.
I also loved possessive Asad breaking zafar nose.
Mr. Faruqui asking Asad to divorce Zoya was annoying but again Asad's reaction rocked it.
Zoya scarring the daylight out of tanveer was a Balle- Balle moment for me. I sincerely wished Ayaan had made a recording of it.
Asad singing was touching.
And I guess Asad's gonna meet with an accident.
I wish Zoya takes charge now. I actually want Zoya to knock some sense in her fathers head with Asad by his side.
That would be a wow , superb, out of the world, KODIAK moment for me. I wonder what would be the reaction of her butterflies then.


All in all I just love your ff

Can't you update before may be somewhere in this weekend?
Eagerly waiting.

OMG!! both asad and zoya are hurt by each other behaviour... 😲😭

Hai Juliet
I just love this update. .

What is marriage without flights. ...big or small. ..


.love it so much. ... I am all for as asad here... as much I love zoy...but asad is my sweetheart
.here.
Male ego is pretty fragile. ...always except the female to come down...as much feminist I am... in love is totally different. .. m u take one step. .. they take 5 step. ..do the math..
U win..so whst if u have to take the first step..
Typing fr mob.
So the conclusion . M give the nexy update soon. . Bcoz I have so many version running in mu mind. .about they get back together.

.Few..
Asad off to London. ..airport scene
Asad get a slap from zoya for signing the papers
Zoya fight her father
.
.Kar de nextupdate. ...chaldi.

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Pretty please..
Love u for This update. .

My favorite. ..
Love asad for the song.
Feeling bad for zoya ignorance...


Update soon

hey tis is superb...