AsYa FF Thrd 2 'The Butterflies!' - Page 68

Originally posted by: cutiepreet

Love it

Originally posted by: saida.m

Juliet!

Sorry I am been super lazy to comment on this story! But I have been reading it and freaking loving it too!

I love married AsYa stories and especially love the lack of constraints in conversations. They are married and I love to read a frank conversation!

I love that there is a little story about Asad and his father that is brewing along with Asad Zoya's butterflies!

So let me review this properly.

Zoya worried about her Prince Charming! So cute and yes, totally something that she would do. And running away? Move away Julia Roberts, Zoya Farooqui is in the house! No one can beat this runaway bride! 😆

I love their banter about kiss and rain and sex! So fresh and different! And drunk Zoya is the best Zoya!

Juliet, you have successfully managed to ruin all those rhymes for me! 😆😆 Kudos to your innuendos! 👏

So this 10 day challenge? Are they really going to manage to dry hump for that long? Nah! That is way too hard (pun intended for Asad)!

Zoya's erotic dreams were too good! I enjoyed her "Yes"s! Poor Asad. Talk about blue balls of epic proportions!

I am loving this story! Keep the love coming! 😃

Originally posted by: Linsie

Boyfriend and Girlfriend...

keeping scores...

poor asad frustrated...

zoya nothing less...

Originally posted by: Linsie

2 days down... so much fun + romance...

so what have you... install for us... coming 8 days...

Originally posted by: pinky06

hiii juliet😃 Wat an update...just amaaazing...👏 Boyfriend,girfriend...m loooving it I just love the tease😳 Anddd m definetly team asad😉...he s absolutely adorable,charming,handsome,hot,sexy,loving...and the list goes on😆 Oooh Zoe s dreams...poor asad😆 Hmmm so asad has planned everything...to make it special for zoya...gawwwd U make asad so goood in this ff I can't stop loving him more n more...

So asad acting all bf ...giving choclates,notes...soo cute😊

Andd Zoe..having a hard time keeping to her bet..of ten days

Waiting for Zoe to get her seven..😆..

Plzzz update soonish

Sowwie for late reply

Update asap...plzzz with a cute pout

😛 I thoroughly enjoyed this update Juliet..it was filled with awesomeness... Love pinky😊

Originally posted by: mhd72

Hey Juliet!!!

Any chances of an update??!!😊

waiting...waiting...waiting...😳

Mili

Originally posted by: SHIKHA.GOHIL16

Hi!
Any chances of getting an update today.
Pls update sooon:D
Love,
Shikha

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

OMG!OMG! OMG! SIMI!!! Is this you????

I didn't expect you here.

But So glad. Thank you ! Thank you! Thank you!🤗

Ok last chapter Zoya got carried away with the tease and the sudden adrenalin rush to win.

Once that winning spree settles down she might blush with his declarations once again.

But yeah simple love story, trying to show most shades of a relationship and how it matures.

LOL @ blue balls.

I like things light hearted so try to keep it that way but love stories also come with a little drama so it is about time for some drama trauma.

Nursery rhymes My most favorite one is Hey diddle diddle, the cat and the fiddle. But I thought not many must have heard about it in India.

Thanks Simi for your fabulous comment.

Originally posted by: aumigi

Pretty please with a cherry on the top, please, please update.😛😊😃😭

Originally posted by: saida.m

You deserve it! I know how fun it is to get a long comment!

I used to love "Hickory Dickory Dock" when I was kid, and now, looking at it, I am appalled at what I make of it!

🤣🤣

You know, all the childhood poems, Disney shows, cartoons, they all had VERY clear innuendos!