AsYa FF Thrd 2 'The Butterflies!' - Page 67

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

Awesum...just wow...waitng fir 10 days to end..o

Hi Gudduluvs
Thanks for your comment and calling it awesome.
It will end soon.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ani-asya

Wow wat a stupendous update butterfly😳
You are one of a kind who never fail to amaze me👏 👏
Asad is zoya's man-Gina😳
Nuzzling, squirns. Trembles & groaning butterflies were cute😳
Super cute morning boy friend notes❤️
Specially this one if you were my wife then i woould now be where youneed me most😳
Two team of butterflies were awesome😳
Loved that Scoring part.. Asad-4 zoya-2😆
Sighed, cried, screamed, danced, cooed the butterflies were hot😳
Poor asya - but we must give nobel prize for asad patience😆
Excited to see secret honey moon he planned to kidnap her for it
PERFECT TWO❤️ by auburn❤️cute..
I hope this dry, very dry zone will end soon
Even im little embrassed in that study room scene😳
Through out the update i blushed even still im blushing☺️☺️☺️
When i read this part my whole body erupted & goose bumps☺️☺️☺️
I think COLD SHOWER is highly needed for me now..😉
Though we got long update badly want next update now...
Take care ur health...
I loved it loved it loved...❤️
Ani😃

WOW Ani-asya,
You amaze me how cutely you jist everything up. love it.
Love your comments always. You amaze me with your comments too and make me smile every single time with your beautiful testimonials and gifs.
Glad you could blush and cold shower😛
I hope it ends too - I meant the dry dry zone. haha!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82

wonderful update...

will come back later...soon to be in detail.

love it.


Hi Kalyani,
Sure take your time.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NAVI55

OMG...What a brilliant update Juliet👍🏼

I loved their foreplay so far...Poor Asad...Dry humping indeed😆
It was both funny and sexy...A perfect start to the new year👍🏼
A very happy new year to you dear. Here's wishing that this year brings you happiness and lots of love and laughter. 🤗Here's also wishing that your creative juices continues flowing😉 Because i'm so addicted to your stories😃

Hi NAVI55,
Aren't your my personal stress buster since Cluster Of Desire days.
Love you darling! you are so adorable and kind always.
SO glad you loved it and I am so glad to have you read my stories.
And I wish truly from the bottom of my heart that you find what you seek this year.
Creative juices - Yes yes I know what you are thinking! I am thinking the same.😆🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
Juliet!

Sorry I am been super lazy to comment on this story! But I have been reading it and freaking loving it too!
I love married AsYa stories and especially love the lack of constraints in conversations. They are married and I love to read a frank conversation!

I love that there is a little story about Asad and his father that is brewing along with Asad Zoya's butterflies!

So let me review this properly.

Zoya worried about her Prince Charming! So cute and yes, totally something that she would do. And running away? Move away Julia Roberts, Zoya Farooqui is in the house! No one can beat this runaway bride! 😆

I love their banter about kiss and rain and sex! So fresh and different! And drunk Zoya is the best Zoya!

Juliet, you have successfully managed to ruin all those rhymes for me! 😆😆 Kudos to your innuendos! 👏
So this 10 day challenge? Are they really going to manage to dry hump for that long? Nah! That is way too hard (pun intended for Asad)!
Zoya's erotic dreams were too good! I enjoyed her "Yes"s! Poor Asad. Talk about blue balls of epic proportions!

I am loving this story! Keep the love coming! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82


hai juliet,

so here i am once again,
just finished writing my test on laser... poor me.. still i could nt keep myself away from ur story.. u dropped a comment.. first...😉

such a ... update... loved it.. the scores.. the real- dream... of asad and zoya.. the notes...

loved the way.. zoya used the chocolates..

nice to know asad also loves zoya... i know he is going to fulfill her fantasy... but i still want to the net to be blue(or green i am not sure)... i guess... it is ok for the rest of the fantasy.. but still i think he should stick to his choice too... what do u say...
after reading ur reply i thought, no hot update.. as of now.. but since u gave one... thank u... for ur writing...

so in the same line.. one more request.. bring the hail.. and sun after their honeymoon.. even though they became physically one... still zoya can stand her views... will be much better...

did i leave anything else..
few things..
So I took a hot shower and took care of my business which by the way is none of your business.😉...poor asad...
I have better things to do going down on my knees. And I already have your Yes!... 😉
see...😉

love zoya for planning to go on her knees...
love zoya for Mr.Chicken... and eagerly waiting for Mr.Chicken response...

and love the way.. asad bangs zoya head with his head... to bring her back.. to the present.. cute moment... in between all the hot moments...
i guess i have written everything.. i want..
i have never listen to english music.. as such... may be should give it a try.. u write about..them.. aashna writes too.. l
see u after a week, to coax u to write the next update...
take care
kalyani

Hey Kalyani,
So I have sent you quite some songs to listen to, I know you liked a couple so there you go.
LASER???😲 MAN you are intelligent and you have a creative side. Is that Physics. Gawd ! I used to be terrible with it is school.
Asad told he loves Zoya to Rashid earlier remember.
Also the frown you asked in your last comment. The frown with he brought roses for Zoya watching Sunset was the same frown later that he had displayed. Aayan had told Asad about Zoya going away to Delhi and Asad was upset that Zoya was going away from him and didn't even discuss with him about it.
And then Asad lets Zoya about it. Hope this helps.
All I have to say is my stories are all tied up each chapter has something lingering that will catch up with the coming chapters.
Blue net or pink net - it wont matter now will it😉. But yes. Asad right now wanted to give Zoya everything she has asked for. Even if it mean compromising the little blue net for her additional delight. He thinks she will notice it is pink and not blue.
What actually consorts in a different story that only I know right now.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akh20

itna lamba time liya yar !! but updated !!! thanks!! padhke comment karti hu!!!

Hahaha! akh20,
I know I wish I could write forever. But then life happens and I have to stop for intermissions.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akh20

ohhh myyy goddd!!!
mr. chicken fantasy!!!

Hey again akh20,
OMG! hehe! Now I can interpret 100 different dirty scenarios for that one exclamation.
I am going to go with you liked it for now.😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Diya.mishra

Plzzz update sooon... dont take long break

Dear Diya.mishra
I will soon. Sorry but I wont be long.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Part 19...

Asad self talk... and finally declare his

love for .. he is head over heels... in love with her...

just frustrated... cant pass smooth...

their have own fight with desire...

Hi Linsie,
Thanks Girl. Glad you enjoyed the read.
Love you always.

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