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Posted: 11 years ago

#631

Originally posted by: zola007
Awesome update !!
loved it to bits

loving their boyfriend/ girlfriend game😆

thanks for the pm (:

and Happy New year to you too

and yes we want another update 😃 so continue very soon😆😃😛

Hi zola007,

Ok I really love your comments.

How you do this synopsis so efficiently and add cute smileys. They always make me laugh.

Thank you ever so much.

So glad you liked it and thanks again for calling it awesome.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: Jenny345
Please update fast !!!

Hey Jenny345,

Sure as fast as I can😊

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@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan
it was awsum dear...
love it..
nd scoring part was nice..

Hi tamanna-azaan

So glad you enjoyed reading the update.

Thanks so much for your comments.

Much love.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: princess101
I loved it thanx for the pm and please update soon 😃

Hi princess101

So glad you enjoyed reading the update.

Thanks so much for your comments.

Much love

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Posted: 11 years ago

#635

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice update
Continue soon

Hi asifiqbalsh

So glad you enjoyed reading the update.

Thanks so much for your comments.

Much love

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Posted: 11 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: CrazyKSGlover
Amaizng
Loved it
Wow
Plzzz update soon

Hi CrazyKSGlover,

So glad you enjoyed reading the update.

Thanks so much for your comments.

Much love

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Posted: 11 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: blessed4
Amazing part
Loved ASYA moments

Please continue soon

Hi blessed4,

I have missed your comments for a few updates now.😆

You were very regular on my mature SS.😛

But anyways, 😉

So glad you enjoyed reading the update.

Thanks so much for your comments.

Much love

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#638

Originally posted by: mariam1368
Oh my my!
What an amazing update juliet di!!!! ;)
Actually no words to describe
this update..
Absolutely mind blowing...
Cold shower is highly needed

HI Mariam 1368

HAHA! love you always my star spammer.

My thread longs for your spamming always. hehe😆

Thanks for your fun filled and entertaining comment.

Loved it just as much as I love you.

Hugs girl.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#639

Originally posted by: mariya_a
Read all in one go amazing
Update soon ;)

Hi mariya_a

So glad you enjoyed reading the update.

Thanks so much for your comments.

Much love

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Posted: 11 years ago

#640

Originally posted by: mariya_a
Can we have an updAte nearly everyday please
And please don't stop the ff after says do IT would love to read honeymoon,married life,Zoya getting pregnant,her pregnancy ,children the whole :))
Also I feel Zoya should be more shy like from how u portrayed her
I love this ff is has everything from romance to hotness
Cluster of desire is omg I'm blushing

Hi once again mariya_a

Haha! so you read Cluster of Desires! so glad I could make you blush!😆

About this FF.

I wish I could write everyday too. But damn life happened.😃 Haha! But seriously I love reading and writing I just suck at time management.

Well for now yeah there is a little more than the IT. But I am not sure if I will pull it forever. It has a designed proper happily ever after. I am trying to portray all shades of love in this FF. Once it is done, it has to have a The End.😊

Regarding Zoya being shy. You are good and thank you for getting that to my attention. I too actually reread the chapter and felt it missed shy. I somehow rushed it I think because This chapter the highlight was sexual tease and making each other's life miserable. And Zoya was not supposed to be backing down but I now do see shy could have worked it in much better effect.

I will remember that in my next update. But I want to explain myself the Zoya that I have created is a bolder version. It is I don't take shit version. I don't just drop in the bed and cry but I also fight back version.

Zoya has been shy at times with the growth of their relationship she grew and threw the shy away too until chapters 1 to chapter 17. She will never be the I can't kiss my husband shy if that is what you mean. The blushing yes I can do that. And that is great feed back.

Thank you for the comment, you made me think last chapter and now I hate it, it could be much better. Much appreciated. Please stay and comment more. Would love to hear.