AsYa FF Thrd 2 'The Butterflies!'

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Divi.C

@Divi.C

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

perfect...

but again waiting for their SR...

n happy Christmas n happy new year...

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amruta04

@amruta04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

Awesome update...loved it

Very well written...

No update till new year..noo...u can't do ths 😭

Pl do update soon..

Take care and thanks for the pm..

Wish u merry Christmas n happy new year 😊

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kals74

@kals74

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Posted: 11 years ago

#433

Very nice update. Loved it a lot. Thanks for the pm

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RAJ

@RAJLUVRIYA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#434

Unres at page 60. If possible pls check it

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nnnnnnn

@nnnnnnn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: nnn

cant get back from Asya Land !😳

Absolutely loved this uncontrollable Asad ! ☺️

Much of Shirtless Asad throughout ! 👍🏼

Yuck Rashid !!!😡😡🤢

Daughter screws you in bed and father screws you with his raw material 😲🤢🤢

You need to make him rot in hell for that

His splitting rage broke all restrains; he pounced on Rashid without thinking, His arm strangling him as he pushed him to the wall. His eyes seething rage as his other fist raised to punch his face but stopped in air.

"I LOVE HER!" "I LOVE ZOYA!" Something I don't expect you to understand." Asad irked.

👏👏👏

The way how Zoya refused to leave asad alone... got hurt... asad finally coming back to hhis senses on seeing zoya in pain and tendering to her... and then Zoya claiming she would fix it all --- wonderfully written ! 👏

The best part ever. of course, was their make out 😳😳

the way he rubbed her and -------------------

i better not say anything more ☺️

coz i might need a cold cold shower if i do. 🤪

Boyfriend 😆😆

why need a boyfriend when u have asad zoya? 😛

It would be sooo muchhh fun to read about this😳

Next year ?? Just like that, you also 😲😲😲

Merry Xmas and HAppy new year 🤗

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Yaay Zoya's prince charming is Asad! *Asad does a happy dance but the hair keep falling on his eyes*

But she still didn't get her seven? 😒 Stupid nursery rhymes came in the way this time? Even asad is not happy about that juliet

but i loved how you tweaked those rhymes! absolutely HILARIOUS!

And i have no idea what that Wimpid is upto. 🤔 whatever it is i hope AsYa stay strong and over''come'' it! *Pun Intended* 😉🤣

I really liked this update and so did Asad, look -

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#437

hey tis is fabulous...

luv it...

wow beautifully written n he is her prince charming...

its mindblowing...

n the nursery rhymes is really hilarious...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#438

Finally Zoya realised he is her Prince charming and coz now she is in love with him. Superb update. What an amazing blend of angst, love, romance, hotness!! You always portray them so perfectly that I am so glued to reading that I never realise the update ended as if living all those while reading. Asad is hot , sweaty and hawwt. You give the best description of a man. Really.😉. It shows how amazingly u write.

The "just like that" thingi was fun to read so were the Nursery Rhymes. Naughty Asad is fun and so were his dirty talks as a boyfriend.

Keep writing. It is always a joy to read your update.😊

Edited by jasminerose - 11 years ago

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Yaay Zoya's prince charming is Asad! *Asad does a happy dance but the hair keep falling on his eyes*

But she still didn't get her seven? 😒 Stupid nursery rhymes came in the way this time? Even asad is not happy about that juliet

but i loved how you tweaked those rhymes! absolutely HILARIOUS!

And i have no idea what that Wimpid is upto. 🤔 whatever it is i hope AsYa stay strong and over''come'' it! *Pun Intended* 😉🤣

I really liked this update and so did Asad, look -