AsYa FF Thrd 2 'The Butterflies!'

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nahsjdnusksmsj

@nahsjdnusksmsj

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Amazing
Loved it
Such an awesome and romantic update
I m really sorry for
Not spamming u know i have got 3 exams on monday
But still i m reading ur story becoz i m obsessed with it
Plzzz update soon

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Wow Awesome update
I loved every bit of it it.,
The bathroom scene was so
romantic.
Everything was going perfect between them before the arrival of this message,i jst hope it is nt that Zafar,pls dnt let any
misunderstanding come
between them !
I loved the super long update.
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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bulou2013

@bulou2013

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

omg omg loved the long update it was beautifully written loved their times ad teasing and the bathtub scene but hated the ending angry asad hoping for your next update soon, thanx for the pm

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

can I say my butterflies are creating havoc and made me bang your thread wanting a sooner update???😆

It was written beautifully like I said before...flowing..

Wow...I love this Asad he is full of attitude yet not dominating her...

Love the ending...also

Awaiting for more...😃

Thank you so much for this beautiful update,,,🤗

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princess101

@princess101

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

THAT WAS AMAZING I HOPE THEY CLEAR THE MISUNDERSTANDING THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON😃

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-StarsLinedUp-

@-StarsLinedUp-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Unres on Pg 12..n thanks a million for a very adorable wish for my anniversary..😃

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Asadluvszoya

@Asadluvszoya

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: -ARLover-
Res.
Mineee

What a wonderful story and an excellent chapter. Very different from any I read on IF.

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

man that was amaizng simply amazing whispered my butterflies in mmy stomach lol

seriously loved it

and the end was like killed it man

superb

m so gonna bug you if u dont update sooon m so stuck to that end now plzzz

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

hai,

love the way asad is fulfilling zoya wishes...

i loved the way u portrayed zoya... once she realised her love... but she is yet to confess...

and the last part... i hope there is no 3 person... or anything... i assuming it is some silly prank by zoya friend... why do i think...

quote ur words...
My objective in writing this story was I wanted to prove to a friend of mine, that amazing and romantic love stories can be written without a villain or a vamp or even Fate aka Muqudar in existence.

i assume this story is all about asad and zoya... and how they fall in each other...

and thank you for acknowledging my story in ur comments...

waiting for the next update

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: kals82
hai,

love the way asad is fulfilling zoya wishes...

i loved the way u portrayed zoya... once she realised her love... but she is yet to confess...

and the last part... i hope there is no 3 person... or anything... i assuming it is some silly prank by zoya friend... why do i think...

quote ur words...
My objective in writing this story was I wanted to prove to a friend of mine, that amazing and romantic love stories can be written without a villain or a vamp or even Fate aka Muqudar in existence.

i assume this story is all about asad and zoya... and how they fall in each other...

and thank you for acknowledging my story in ur comments...

waiting for the next update

Hi Kals82,

While I will respond to every other comment later, I am quite tempted to reply yours since you have quoted my own words.😳 You got me there, I can't bring in a third fiddle now, can I.😃

Very true, this story is about love and growth of a relationship. It is about Asad and Zoya.

We have seen passion and fantasy in this chapter, but love also mainly survives on the food of trust and truth. That is the next chapter. So you will have to wait and read what happens and if Asad is able to fight his biggest demons, his impending issues with trust. Is Zoya really cheating if she is in love with Asad. Will she take it well when she wants to confess her love and he accuses her of betrayal. I try not to disappoint so hold the thought of abomination just for now.😉

Talk soon. Loved your comment as always.