AsYa FF Battling The Curse - Thread One - Chapter One To Six

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Dhanyatha rao

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Posted: 11 years ago

#681

It ws awesum ayat sis segmnt ws cute n ua updatin at ni8 i hope i dnt gt scard cntinue son

Edited by Surbhibornstar - 11 years ago

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Aditi/Swathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#682

i have assignment to submit tomorrow but reading ur ff

u really scare me for a minute thank god no more scenes like that hereafter

ghosts meetings really?? 😆

asad and osama son convo was hilarious

r u born evil or reading stories made u like that???

Edited by juneblossom - 11 years ago

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manognasai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#683

I think this part was perfect!⭐️
Asad...he is so much over-protective that he is even scolding a small kid!"U are as sweet as ur father!Call her Ayat sis!Now u are better than ur father!"😆
Night scene was nice!Zoya is so scared!Loved the way she said "Have I ever told u how much I love u?Love u a lot!"
(Hey I say that often to u!Did I ever tell u that I love u?Love u a lot...🤗)The way Zoya is asking Asad abt his charming face...!
Waiting for next part!😃

Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago

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love.asad.zoya

@love.asad.zoya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#684

Res

Unres

Welcome me bubble 🤗
As always res first page mein par unres last me 😛 😆
Yeh to ab ritual he ban Gaya hai ...sooo move to the story , sequel of ur previous story ,,,,,ahhh interesting 😎 but a ghost story 😲 more interesting 😈
I love the all parts very nice concept actually unique 😊 ayat is sooo cute,asya will never miss a chance to fight ,,,,,ahhh more than interesting 🤣
Last update was little bit scary but mindblowing 👏
Sooo continue soon miss bubble 😃 and from tommorow perhaps I will be regular to comment and read ur story 😃

Edited by love.asad.zoya - 11 years ago

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snehasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#685

it was so good iqra the conversation between asad and osamas kids ohh god asad is just limit ayat sis I wonder what expression kids were having when he was talking to them and ayat also carbon copy of her father enjoying that her friends are bullied by her father aweee I so wish to see something like this in serial too

and whose the girl standing in between asad and zoya and is she inside the mirror or someones really standing you've described the mirror with oak frames I guess something is wrong in that mirror hmm let us see what is it about all secrets and the noisy room also and what was asad doing there and why did it shut on its own

zoya doesn't wants to leave the house so is she in the spell

ufff lots more coming my way need to be patient I guess

thanks for pm

Edited by snehasya - 11 years ago

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#686

great update...as i said i like horror stories and the way it is progressing is really interesting...😊

and ayat is so cute...asad is really a possessive father i must say...

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#687

Are Asad for real i just loved his conversation with Yusuf and Zoya reaction and tha " Ayat sis" 🤣🤣

You almost scared me bubby 😒

Asad is a killer he kill me when said those sentence 😆

Shut up Zoya ! Have you hired me for saving you all the time

'Don't tell me you want me to arrange a meeting for you with the ghosts🤣

And very good udapte bubby 🤗

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#688

Hey Bubble nice update dear... Loved the way Asya reacted to the curse thing n how they believe in their love that no matter what nothing can seperate them.

I had goosebumps reading the part where Zoya goes out alone to look what the noises were all about.

Thanks for the pm n please pm me for the next part too.

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Applef

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Posted: 11 years ago

#689

asad's conversation with those kids were so hilarious..😆

oh my gosh!!!

a very over protective father..😆

poor those boys..😆

ayat sis...🤣

woah!! you scare me..🤢

this update was freaking me out..

the other parts were cute..😳

now who is that lady??😵😲

update soon..

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#690

it was cute at the start...ayat sis really !!! lol...
scary in between ...poor asya...they both got scared!!!!
cliffy at the end...who's the lady!??!?
continue soon